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    A Thin Line – Chpt 31

    Story written on August 8, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – Saturday afternoon

    “Tell me about it,” I requested calmly and steadily, attempting to disguise my growing curiosity.

    Bette waved her fork in the air and grinned at me.

    “Nope.”

    “Bette, please. You’re toying with me. You promised you’d tell me later. And it’s later,” I argued, rubbing my feet over hers and around her ankles.

    “What will you give me in exchange?” she teased.

    “A kiss for now,” I offered, reaching in to touch her lips with mine.

    “Mmm-hmm. That’s good for starters. And what else?” she said, tracing her tongue over my lips.

    “A double margarita on the rocks, sans salt?” I suggested.

    Bette slumped back in her chair, pretending to deliberate.

    “I changed my mind. Make it frozen. To sip in the pool after lunch. Then you’ve got a deal,” she negotiated playfully.

    “Alright then, Darling. Frozen it is. Now. We have a deal.”

    Bette looked around surreptitiously, as if to make sure no one was listening.

    “Well, you see,” she began in a hushed tone, “I came home from work one evening and couldn’t find you. I searched the house, high and low, going into the kitchen, the living area, the bathrooms. Out onto the deck. I even looked up and down the beach. And I called out your name repeatedly, but you didn’t answer. I grew quite alarmed. Frantic, actually. Then I went into our bedr…” Bette stopped, grinning again.

    “Bette! What?”

    Bette looked around again for the imaginary people. Then leaning over, she cupped her hands around my ear, and moved her mouth in close. So close, in fact, that her lips were touching my lobe.

    “Bette,” I laughed softly at her histrionics, at her warm breath tickling me. “It’s not like anyone is around to hear you.”

    Bette pulled her head back and dropped her hands, smiling. Then she said, “Do you want me to tell you or not?”

    “Yes. Quit teasing me,” I laughed.

    “Then I’m going to whisper it to you,” she smiled with her quiet reply.

    “Alright. Have your way,” I said, anxiously motioning my finger towards my ear.

    Bette re-cupped her hands around my ear and began to whisper. When she finished telling me what happened in her dream, she licked my ear as she drew away, and sat back in her seat to watch my reaction.

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    1. Congrats on the award, I began reading this story from the link on that page and the award is well deserved. You write with a playful and classy flair that is a rare find. I’ll be reading from here on out.

    2. oh wow Zheese an award, great stuff girl congrats. Now about your chapter I loved it I mean I really really loved it but what’s the matter with you leaving us hanging there????? Post soon okay thanks

    3. It occured to me while reading this that never in my life have I ever gotten into a sarong. So they’re going domestic already? That’s some mojo they’re working.

    4. Congrats on the award. I like that your R and NC-17 chapters are different. Very hot, playful and teasing but not sleazy or common. “A Thinking Woman’s NC-17” if you will.

    5. Congrats on the award. Love this story, and the pace you’ve set for it. What’s the errand, is it a surprise for Helena. You know the more Bette/Helena stories I read the more, I think they would be a very interesting couple if we can’t have B&T. I mean come on, they’re bringing all these other characters into the show this season, why are they not working with what we’ve got. Cos other than Tina, Helena is the only other person that seems like it would work. Cybil Shepard and Marilee Matlin, nothing personal but NOT>

    7. Your award is soooooooo well deserved. I went back today just to reread your story cause it’s the best!!!! This love is so rare they have, you keep it so exciting. So what is our little Bette up to?? Can’t wait to see. Lucky Helena!

    8. really liked the chapter…but don’t keep us waiting too long…the suspense – it’s great, but…well, your writing is fantastic, so it’ll be worth the wait…i’ll stop whining..post soon!!!

    9. Congrats Zheese, I finally know what award you’ve won! :) thanks for the pM, I just got it today. Had been busy, so I hardly come up for air! Actually, the honest truth is, I liked your story more than the sex parts, the more dimensional romantic, warm and fuzzy stuff, and definitely the unexpected surprises that come – like phone calls etc. :D You’re a good writer! Please continue to write whatever comes to your head! :) Great stuff!

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