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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 8
The women made there way to the hotel room in silence. Each were deep in their thoughts of the other. As they reached the door, Alice looked shyly at the ground as Dana fished for her key.
"Got it." She opened the door and Alice hesitantly followed her in. She smiled lightly as she took in her surrounding. Dana’s room was much bigger and nicer, which was to be expected, but Alice noticed that Dana had taken up a small corner of it only. Dana was not your typical celebrity. She wasn’t demanding or bitchy. She didn’t have a attitude problem like Alice seemed to see in most famous people. She was a shy, humble tennis player and nothing more. Here she was, living in this giant, luxurious room, and she was occupying all of ten feet of it.
Alice could feel the athletes eyes on her and turned to meet them. They both shared a sweet smile and then Alice finally broke the ice.
"So, we should probably get yo to bed." Dana nodded and grabbed a tank top and shorts from her bag. Alice realized that she hadn’t thought to stop and grab some clothes for herself.
"Ummm Dane?"
"Yeah?" The brunette looked up from her bag.
"I sorta forgot to grab my shit. Do you have any extras I could borrow?"
"Oh! Of course. Here you go." Dana handed Alice a long t-shirt. She was expecting her to grab her a pair of shorts as well, but Dana stood up and headed for the bathroom. She watched her flip the light on and then closed the door halfway.
"Ok…guess it’s a t-shirt for me tonight." Normally, Alice would have no problem sleeping in a t-shirt, but she was hoping for a few more barriers between her and the athlete. "Lucky me…"
Alice quickly removed her swimming suit and through the shirt on over her head. She dove into the bed, not even considering that Dana may have expected her to sleep on the floor or the couch.
Dana came out of the bathroom just as Alice was snuggling under the covers.
"So…I’m gonna sleep on the couch, Al. I see you have already claimed the bed." she said with a smirk.
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shiiiit! totally caught – I love it! great to catch up on all your updates – i love this story and the tension is wicked (in a very good way!) can’t wait to find out who the intruder is although i’m praying it’s not lara, that would be so awkward – lot’s more hot Danish please, you write it so well! :)
Man, I would’ve left a review sooner but that much needed cold shower sort of slowed me down, lol. I loved this chap, and I read that things are about to get interesting fast, so I’m on board for the ride. Can’t wait for the next!
Wow oh wow – who can it be. You still write a wonderful piece, pissed or not pissed – keep it ‘coming’ and often please.
ohh shit caught
: whines : suzzzzzzzzzzz : cries: u r such a clifffffhanger! lol i love it! great chap but BUT id really wish u post another chap asap! cuz i wanna know!!!! I kinda hope its Lara just cuz Drama is fun but if ya wanna play it safe u can let it be shane the danish was hot lol but by all means no more cliffhangers i cant take them! u rock suz cant wait to read more!
My god suzie that chap made me want to get in the shower with them (a cold one of course ;P) Great chap, I have my ideas who the interupter is though. xx
oh crap! busted!!!! very hot… post another chapter soon… please!
Busted big time! I hope it’s Shane, not Lara. Great update!
Argh…. you cant leave it there!!!!!!! Lets hope its not Lara, but its def getting very interesting (hehe)
Suz, your killing us here! But it is sooooo Danish. I mean haven’t these girls learned to lock doors, change keys, slip mickeys into drinks? Great job. Please update soon!
WOW! MB Legend?!? How did that happen? That was really funny. Seriously here, you’re killing me with all this sexual tension. Keep it up & update soon … and often!
I love you for this chapter (actually for all of them :D)!! The frustration I felt when Dana ‘turned Alice down’ was soon gone. This is one of those moments I strive for in Danish-land I mentionted in my last comment! “Love this land/Embrace it/And we all will be fine” There, I quoted the Make love not war-song. And yet another hint is given by it, happy Danish makes us readers happy. :P I wonder who busted them…it would be funny if it were Jenny (again).
SUZIE!!! I love bitch! “Bite me…” “Ok, if you want.” HAHAHAHA!! YES! You rock my world babe! I know I already told you last night, but this chapter was awesome! Made me a little more sexually frustrated than I already was, but I’ll forgive you…this time! ;-) Great update, even though you were intoxicated! I love you, and hope to talk to you soon!
Oops, I meant I love YOU bitch, not just i love bitch. God it’s been a long ass shitty day! Ha ha
Haha I would have killed you if that little thing in the shower didn’t happen, even if it was cut rather short. Great chap. though, can’t wait for the next one! And no… it never gets old :P