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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 8
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"Ok, two things…first off, fuck you." Alice through a pillow at the athlete. Dana laughed and caught it easily. "Second, don’t think for a minute that you are sleeping anywhere other than this bed. If you don’t want to get in with me, I will take the couch, but I am not about to come into your room and kick you out of your own damn bed." She finished with a huff, folding her arms to her chest.
"Well, it’s really ok, Al. I don’t mind…" Alice jumped out of the bed and stomped up to her friend. She grabbed her hand and pulled her to the bed, pushing her onto it roughly.
"Ok Fairbanks, here are your options. You can either take the bed to yourself, and I’ll take the couch, or we can both share the bed. Your call. Either way I am good, but you are sleeping in this bed. Understood?" Alice watched as Dana’s face went from shock to humor.
"Ok." Dana looked down sheepishly. "Ummm…this bed is huge Al. It would be silly not to share it." Alice clapped her hands and jumped onto the other side of the bed.
"I was hoping I wouldn’t have to rough it tonight." Both women froze as the innuendo hit that at the same time. Alice watched Dana raise her eyebrow at her and smiled mischieviously.
"I don’t know, Al…I kinda always had you pegged as a rough and tumble kinda girl." Dana laughed as the blonds face turned several shades of red.
"So you’ve thought about me in bed, then?" Alice countered, trying to regain the upper hand.
She laughed as Dana started stuttering and became even more red than she had just been. Alice had a brilliant idea…"Pillow fight, bitch!"
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Before Dana could even respond, she had a fluffy, white pillow slammed into her face. She fell backwards and was greeted by the sound of Alice’s belly laugh. She wasn’t prepared for the first attack, but this time was different. She felt the bed shift and knew that the blond was in full swing. As Alice brought the pillow down, intending to reconnect with her head, she rolled and took the writers legs out. They were both laughing and swinging there pillow wildly at one another, each trying to gain the upper hand. Dana watched as Alice lunged for her, much like she had earlier that night in the pool. Dana moved to the side as Alice fell flat on her face and Dana pounced on her, rolling her over and tickling her until Alice was begging for mercy. She straddled her hips and pinned her arms over her head as she leaned down to whisper in Alice’s ear.
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shiiiit! totally caught – I love it! great to catch up on all your updates – i love this story and the tension is wicked (in a very good way!) can’t wait to find out who the intruder is although i’m praying it’s not lara, that would be so awkward – lot’s more hot Danish please, you write it so well! :)
Man, I would’ve left a review sooner but that much needed cold shower sort of slowed me down, lol. I loved this chap, and I read that things are about to get interesting fast, so I’m on board for the ride. Can’t wait for the next!
Wow oh wow – who can it be. You still write a wonderful piece, pissed or not pissed – keep it ‘coming’ and often please.
ohh shit caught
: whines : suzzzzzzzzzzz : cries: u r such a clifffffhanger! lol i love it! great chap but BUT id really wish u post another chap asap! cuz i wanna know!!!! I kinda hope its Lara just cuz Drama is fun but if ya wanna play it safe u can let it be shane the danish was hot lol but by all means no more cliffhangers i cant take them! u rock suz cant wait to read more!
My god suzie that chap made me want to get in the shower with them (a cold one of course ;P) Great chap, I have my ideas who the interupter is though. xx
oh crap! busted!!!! very hot… post another chapter soon… please!
Busted big time! I hope it’s Shane, not Lara. Great update!
Argh…. you cant leave it there!!!!!!! Lets hope its not Lara, but its def getting very interesting (hehe)
Suz, your killing us here! But it is sooooo Danish. I mean haven’t these girls learned to lock doors, change keys, slip mickeys into drinks? Great job. Please update soon!
WOW! MB Legend?!? How did that happen? That was really funny. Seriously here, you’re killing me with all this sexual tension. Keep it up & update soon … and often!
I love you for this chapter (actually for all of them :D)!! The frustration I felt when Dana ‘turned Alice down’ was soon gone. This is one of those moments I strive for in Danish-land I mentionted in my last comment! “Love this land/Embrace it/And we all will be fine” There, I quoted the Make love not war-song. And yet another hint is given by it, happy Danish makes us readers happy. :P I wonder who busted them…it would be funny if it were Jenny (again).
SUZIE!!! I love bitch! “Bite me…” “Ok, if you want.” HAHAHAHA!! YES! You rock my world babe! I know I already told you last night, but this chapter was awesome! Made me a little more sexually frustrated than I already was, but I’ll forgive you…this time! ;-) Great update, even though you were intoxicated! I love you, and hope to talk to you soon!
Oops, I meant I love YOU bitch, not just i love bitch. God it’s been a long ass shitty day! Ha ha
Haha I would have killed you if that little thing in the shower didn’t happen, even if it was cut rather short. Great chap. though, can’t wait for the next one! And no… it never gets old :P