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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 8
"Alice…I’m sorry. That was really shitty." Alice didn’t move. She heard Dana take a deep breath and then she felt a light squeeze on her shoulder before Dana removed her hand and rolled back over.
‘What the fuck is happening with us?’ Alice wondered. She cursed herself for letting her guard down and drifted off to a restless sleep.
Dana woke up the next morning to an empty bed. Alice had even gone so far as to make her side of the bed. She laid there for a few moments, reliving the previous nights event’s and groaned. "What the fuck am I doing?" She wondered out loud.
She reluctantly drug herself out of bed. She had an interview to get ready for, and she had already over slept. "Shit…" She mumbled as she headed for the bathroom, peeling her clothes off hastily, wanting a quick shower. She opened the bathroom door and gasped as her eyes fell apom a very naked Alice Pieszecki.
Dana stared, mouth agape, as her eyes raked over the exposed flesh of the writer body, dripping wet and slightly pink from the hot shower she had just stepped out of.
Dana was so transfixed by the vision in front of her that she forgot that she too was completely naked. It didn’t dawn on her until she realized that Alice was checking her out as well.
She tore her gaze from the beautiful woman’s body and met her eyes. They locked and without a word, they closed the distance between them. They crushed there body’s against one another as there lips met in a searing hot, wet kiss. Both moaned into each other as they opened there mouths to allow further access to one another.
Dana could feel Alice run her hands down to her ass and groaned as she squeezed and pulled her closer. Dana began to push Alice back towards the shower. They pulled apart for a moment to breath before they brought there lips back together again. Alice stepped back into the shower and Dana joined her, neither of them speaking. They let there hands travel over each others exposed flesh, reveling in the power they held over the other. Alice brought her lips to Dana’s breast’s and sucked on them greedily. Dana cried out in pleasure and brought Alice’s back up to meet her lips again in a duel of tongues and teeth.
"Fuck…Dana…what are we doing?" Alice cried breathlessly as Dana pinched her nipples.
"I think it’s called sex, Al." Dana retorted. Grinning as Alice whimpered when she slid her leg in between the writers.
"Bite me…" Dana laughed evilly.
"Ok. If you want." And she proceeded to nip the blonds neck and then ran her tongue over the bite mark, making the girl shiver with excitement.
Just then, they heard a loud banging on the door. Both women froze as the door to the bathroom was flung open with a force neither had seen before.
"Fuck!" Dana shouted as she saw who was responsible for the outburst.
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shiiiit! totally caught – I love it! great to catch up on all your updates – i love this story and the tension is wicked (in a very good way!) can’t wait to find out who the intruder is although i’m praying it’s not lara, that would be so awkward – lot’s more hot Danish please, you write it so well! :)
Man, I would’ve left a review sooner but that much needed cold shower sort of slowed me down, lol. I loved this chap, and I read that things are about to get interesting fast, so I’m on board for the ride. Can’t wait for the next!
Wow oh wow – who can it be. You still write a wonderful piece, pissed or not pissed – keep it ‘coming’ and often please.
ohh shit caught
: whines : suzzzzzzzzzzz : cries: u r such a clifffffhanger! lol i love it! great chap but BUT id really wish u post another chap asap! cuz i wanna know!!!! I kinda hope its Lara just cuz Drama is fun but if ya wanna play it safe u can let it be shane the danish was hot lol but by all means no more cliffhangers i cant take them! u rock suz cant wait to read more!
My god suzie that chap made me want to get in the shower with them (a cold one of course ;P) Great chap, I have my ideas who the interupter is though. xx
oh crap! busted!!!! very hot… post another chapter soon… please!
Busted big time! I hope it’s Shane, not Lara. Great update!
Argh…. you cant leave it there!!!!!!! Lets hope its not Lara, but its def getting very interesting (hehe)
Suz, your killing us here! But it is sooooo Danish. I mean haven’t these girls learned to lock doors, change keys, slip mickeys into drinks? Great job. Please update soon!
WOW! MB Legend?!? How did that happen? That was really funny. Seriously here, you’re killing me with all this sexual tension. Keep it up & update soon … and often!
I love you for this chapter (actually for all of them :D)!! The frustration I felt when Dana ‘turned Alice down’ was soon gone. This is one of those moments I strive for in Danish-land I mentionted in my last comment! “Love this land/Embrace it/And we all will be fine” There, I quoted the Make love not war-song. And yet another hint is given by it, happy Danish makes us readers happy. :P I wonder who busted them…it would be funny if it were Jenny (again).
SUZIE!!! I love bitch! “Bite me…” “Ok, if you want.” HAHAHAHA!! YES! You rock my world babe! I know I already told you last night, but this chapter was awesome! Made me a little more sexually frustrated than I already was, but I’ll forgive you…this time! ;-) Great update, even though you were intoxicated! I love you, and hope to talk to you soon!
Oops, I meant I love YOU bitch, not just i love bitch. God it’s been a long ass shitty day! Ha ha
Haha I would have killed you if that little thing in the shower didn’t happen, even if it was cut rather short. Great chap. though, can’t wait for the next one! And no… it never gets old :P