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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 8
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"Do you give up?" Dana hadn’t meant for that to sound so sexual, but having the blond beneath her was making her feel things she knew she shouldn’t be. She watched as Alice turned her head to meet her eyes. Her laughter coming to a sudden hault. Dana watched as she bit her lip in that nervous way that drove her mad. Dana waited as Alice considered her response, finally shaking her head ‘no.’
Dana had to fight to control her breathing. The shirt that she had given the blond had worked itself up to the her belly button. Dana brought one of her hands back down to the writers stomach, only instead of tickling her, she began to trace light circles over her stomach. Dana heard the sharp intake of breath Alice took and there eyes locked longingly on one another. Dana slowly leaned down toward those luscious, inviting lips. She watched as Alice closed her eyes, waiting for the gentle, sweet pressure that was sure to come.
‘Fuck…please let this happen!’ Alice thought to herself as she felt Dana closing the remaining distance between their lips. She had closed her eyes, barely able to contain herself with anticipation. She waited…and waited…and then suddenly felt the bed shift. The sensual weight of Dana’s body over her was gone. Her eyes shot open and she watched as Dana rolled over onto her side, facing away from her.
"…Dane??? Is…is everything ok?" Alice whispered. She was hurt by the brunettes actions, but wasn’t sure she even had a right to be angry. She had put Dana through a lot, and she did have a girlfriend. She heard Dana sigh and waited for her to respond.
"I’m sorry Alice…I’m just…I think I should get some rest. I’m really worn out." Alice rolled away and fought back the tears that were threatening to escape. ‘What the fuck just happened?’ she wondered. She felt the bed shift again and could tell that Dana was watching her. She fought to keep her breathing steady. The last thing she wanted was for Dana to see how hurt she was. Just then, she felt a hand on her shoulder. She froze, holding her breath and trying not to jerk away like she wanted to.
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shiiiit! totally caught – I love it! great to catch up on all your updates – i love this story and the tension is wicked (in a very good way!) can’t wait to find out who the intruder is although i’m praying it’s not lara, that would be so awkward – lot’s more hot Danish please, you write it so well! :)
Man, I would’ve left a review sooner but that much needed cold shower sort of slowed me down, lol. I loved this chap, and I read that things are about to get interesting fast, so I’m on board for the ride. Can’t wait for the next!
Wow oh wow – who can it be. You still write a wonderful piece, pissed or not pissed – keep it ‘coming’ and often please.
ohh shit caught
: whines : suzzzzzzzzzzz : cries: u r such a clifffffhanger! lol i love it! great chap but BUT id really wish u post another chap asap! cuz i wanna know!!!! I kinda hope its Lara just cuz Drama is fun but if ya wanna play it safe u can let it be shane the danish was hot lol but by all means no more cliffhangers i cant take them! u rock suz cant wait to read more!
My god suzie that chap made me want to get in the shower with them (a cold one of course ;P) Great chap, I have my ideas who the interupter is though. xx
oh crap! busted!!!! very hot… post another chapter soon… please!
Busted big time! I hope it’s Shane, not Lara. Great update!
Argh…. you cant leave it there!!!!!!! Lets hope its not Lara, but its def getting very interesting (hehe)
Suz, your killing us here! But it is sooooo Danish. I mean haven’t these girls learned to lock doors, change keys, slip mickeys into drinks? Great job. Please update soon!
WOW! MB Legend?!? How did that happen? That was really funny. Seriously here, you’re killing me with all this sexual tension. Keep it up & update soon … and often!
I love you for this chapter (actually for all of them :D)!! The frustration I felt when Dana ‘turned Alice down’ was soon gone. This is one of those moments I strive for in Danish-land I mentionted in my last comment! “Love this land/Embrace it/And we all will be fine” There, I quoted the Make love not war-song. And yet another hint is given by it, happy Danish makes us readers happy. :P I wonder who busted them…it would be funny if it were Jenny (again).
SUZIE!!! I love bitch! “Bite me…” “Ok, if you want.” HAHAHAHA!! YES! You rock my world babe! I know I already told you last night, but this chapter was awesome! Made me a little more sexually frustrated than I already was, but I’ll forgive you…this time! ;-) Great update, even though you were intoxicated! I love you, and hope to talk to you soon!
Oops, I meant I love YOU bitch, not just i love bitch. God it’s been a long ass shitty day! Ha ha
Haha I would have killed you if that little thing in the shower didn’t happen, even if it was cut rather short. Great chap. though, can’t wait for the next one! And no… it never gets old :P