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Let it Ride- Chapter 5
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Their parties were often raucous, themed events and the Rich Women and Their Cabana Boys party from the year before had been such a hit that someone had even claimed to see the city’s mayor doing a kegstand. The reports were unsubstantiated, of course.
This particular evening was not themed and the property was already crowded. A small semi-circle of lawn chairs was spread out on one corner of the lawn and the occupants were having some lively discussion about East Coast as opposed to West Coast. Dana thought maybe they were discussing property value or job markets until she heard strange words like Biggie and Tupac being thrown around.
Shane led the way to the front door of the rambling two story home known to students as Agatha. Walking up the steps to the door, Dana asked Shane quietly, "Why is it called Agatha? Do sorority girls name all their houses?"
Shane, busy scoping out the talent that was loitering outside and perhaps curious about the group of kids sitting in a blue baby pool smoking a sweet-smelling substance, replied distractedly, "The house isn’t named Agatha, Dane. The street is called Agatha and the kids just call it that cause it’s easier."
Just before they reached the front door, Shane swept her arms out, causing both Alice and Dana to run into them.
Alice grunted and said moodily, "Shane, what the hell?"
The girl turned around, placing her hands on both of their shoulders and growing so serious that Dana started to ask if she was feeling okay.
Cutting Dana off, Shane said tersely, "Okay, this is it. We are about to enter the mother ship. Girls will be everywhere, okay? Straight girls? Yes. At least until I get to them, but straight nonetheless. More importantly? Drunk girls! And guys. So I want you two to stay alert. Stay focused and always, always use the buddy system."
Alice opened her mouth to speak but no sound came out. Dana appeared equally flabbergasted so Shane tossed them both a rakish smile, saying blithely, "See you on the other side."
Dana watched her going through the door with a look of honest confusion. Alice, collecting herself quite enviably, saluted Shane’s retreating form and said in a voice laced with melodramatic respect, "Good hunting, Shane."
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i cant say enough how much i love this story it just keeps getting better and better and the ending in the words of alice “hot hot hot!” lol please post again soon you rule!!
Great Update! Looking fwd to seeing how they work out Dana not being out! Loved that you posted so soon! Keep up the good work!
Don’t be so hard on yourself; the chapter was far from silly and unfulfilling, you are nicely building the tension. Love how Dana is getting more confident in the relationship, albeit fuelled by the shots. I think they should skip 3rd base and go straight for the home run! Impatient? just a little. Oh and Shane as the Fonz – LOL. Looking forward to the next instalment….
All I can say is- I Love Dana!! She is so sexy when she’s…Oh she’s sexy all the time!!
The end was very hot and sexy. I liked how Dana told that chick off. I so thought that Alice was going to snap or something, but didn’t. I can’t wait for more. PPS
Fripster,I was about to shut down my pc but I did one last check, there it was, your latest post. What are you talking about? Boring? No way, this is another fun filled chapter. Thank you very much. “Shane’s eyes widened at the daring display from the normally conservative Dana” My view precisely. Dana is really getting bold. I like it. I swear A & D seemed to be able to communicate telepathically. Both commented on Shane as “Fonzie” just like on the show about “Ariana Huffington is 50.” They were definitely meant to be together, period. It is great to see the three of them hanging out and looking out for each other too. “It’s not acid, is it”, what a geek? Bodyguard, is she forever so dorky. And finally, I love your “nice surprise” mini cliffhanger. Can’t wait to read more. Again I can’t believe a very bold Dana. It’s good! This is another successful post and the story just keeps getting better. Thank you for this night cap!!!
wow you post so quickly i like it, i like it alot!! loving the story:)
Sure did like the ending, that was hot and Dana was still alert, after all that alcohol,LOL. Great chapter
Another good one, fripster! I did have flashbacks to some of my college parties — that punch is a killer. Thanks again for the frequent posts and great storyline. I look forward to what’s next — even if it does get angsty. Thanks!