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Let it Ride- Chapter 5
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Clearing her throat expectantly, she placed her hands on her hips and waited for Alice to look up from the pages.
Grunting in surprise, Alice looked up and had the grace to look mildly embarassed before her eyes traveled over Dana’s fitted jeans, clingy red top and black high heels.
Dana smiled at the stunned reaction she was getting from her girlfriend. The outfit was showier than she would normally but seeing Alice’s eyes darken with appreciation, she leaned forward to place a quick, relatively chaste kiss on Alice’s lips and decided it was worth the extra time and effort.
Watching the two of them from the mirror, Shane’s eyes widened at the daring display from the normally conservative Dana. Shane was quite impressed and she couldn’t even summon up her usual brusque humor and tell them to get a room or something.
The tennis player pulled Alice up from the bed and as they started for the door Alice rolled up the magazine, sent it sailing toward Shane and said to Dana in a husky whisper, "She needs it more than I do."
Dana giggled something that sounded a lot like "damn straight" to Shane’s ears but before she could reply, Alice and Dana were out the door. Though not before Dana looked over her shoulder at her roommate to say, "You look like Fonzie, Shane."
Rolling her eyes, Shane followed the Dastardly Duo out into the night.
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The party was in full swing when the girls arrived. Nobody was sure whose house it was but Shane had heard from a girl in her math class that some of the older sisters of Chi Xi sorority traditionally occupied the house, moving out at graduation only to pass the residence into younger members’ hands.
It was about twenty minutes from campus in a neighborhood occupied almost completely by college students. There were no neighbors that cared enough to call the police if things got noisy and though the parties were always wild, nobody had ever been seriously injured so well enough was left alone.
Though Shane, Alice and Dana had only been at Berkeley for a short time, they found that generally speaking, the sisters of Chi Xi were an okay group. Not overly concerned with the kind of freakish pride that burdened some greek organizations, the Chi Xi’s were mostly a fun-loving, fairly innocuous clan.
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i cant say enough how much i love this story it just keeps getting better and better and the ending in the words of alice “hot hot hot!” lol please post again soon you rule!!
Great Update! Looking fwd to seeing how they work out Dana not being out! Loved that you posted so soon! Keep up the good work!
Don’t be so hard on yourself; the chapter was far from silly and unfulfilling, you are nicely building the tension. Love how Dana is getting more confident in the relationship, albeit fuelled by the shots. I think they should skip 3rd base and go straight for the home run! Impatient? just a little. Oh and Shane as the Fonz – LOL. Looking forward to the next instalment….
All I can say is- I Love Dana!! She is so sexy when she’s…Oh she’s sexy all the time!!
The end was very hot and sexy. I liked how Dana told that chick off. I so thought that Alice was going to snap or something, but didn’t. I can’t wait for more. PPS
Fripster,I was about to shut down my pc but I did one last check, there it was, your latest post. What are you talking about? Boring? No way, this is another fun filled chapter. Thank you very much. “Shane’s eyes widened at the daring display from the normally conservative Dana” My view precisely. Dana is really getting bold. I like it. I swear A & D seemed to be able to communicate telepathically. Both commented on Shane as “Fonzie” just like on the show about “Ariana Huffington is 50.” They were definitely meant to be together, period. It is great to see the three of them hanging out and looking out for each other too. “It’s not acid, is it”, what a geek? Bodyguard, is she forever so dorky. And finally, I love your “nice surprise” mini cliffhanger. Can’t wait to read more. Again I can’t believe a very bold Dana. It’s good! This is another successful post and the story just keeps getting better. Thank you for this night cap!!!
wow you post so quickly i like it, i like it alot!! loving the story:)
Sure did like the ending, that was hot and Dana was still alert, after all that alcohol,LOL. Great chapter
Another good one, fripster! I did have flashbacks to some of my college parties — that punch is a killer. Thanks again for the frequent posts and great storyline. I look forward to what’s next — even if it does get angsty. Thanks!