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Round n Round We Go (Ch.10)
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“Where… How are you doing? Did she pressure you into anything… sexual?” Sam asked, sounding like a caring father.
The blonde frowned at the question. What was going on? “No! No, she’d never do that.”
“I suggest you uh, have a talk with her about it. You know, get to know how she feels about this kind of… things. I know you’re almost eighteen, and these things will come naturally sooner or later.”
It actually made sense. “Okay.” Just that it felt weird, that her father was talking to her about it. But again, she was glad that Sam had the concerns for her and since her mom never had a chance to discuss and educate her about physical relationships, her dad was trying to take up the responsibility, Tina thought.
“Just so you know, I’m okay with it but I do not want Porter do any harm to you, you’re my little girl. So, if, if you’re going to… you know, do tell me. I don’t tolerate sneaking around and lying under my roof.”
That was a strange request. The blonde girl was dumbfounded, but she told herself that it was for her own good. So, probably, a talk was needed and honesty was for the best.
Having Bette by her side in Math, History, and other classes she did not enroll but crashed in just to sit next to her, was very distracting for Tina. She kept thinking during lectures how to start the talk without sounding coy, but when she looked aside, receiving a bright smile from her girlfriend, she got so very nervous. Deciding that someone at her own age, and with experience would do some help, Tina went to Alice, who always talked so boldly in public and made joke at the most inappropriate moments. It would be risky, considering that Alice possibly was going to tell Bette all about it, but she couldn’t talk to another “experienced” girl in Marymount without having to watch her back. Well that was not true, Shane, she could trust. But Shane scared her a little bit.
So when Alice lurked behind her new target, Dana, the blonde approached her. “Hey, Al, can I talk to you for a sec?”
“Oh great, first Bette, now you?” Alice was too busy checking out the sweaty athlete to remember the fact that Bette made her promise she’d once keep a secret of it.
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Yeah, it’s chapter ten and we haven’t seen some actions. But you know where this is heading to! Expecting the next post already?
Do review. I’d love to hear your suggestions and thoughts.
Thanks (~:
Lol!!! Nice ending….cliff hanger…. ;)
Hahaha, I know very well that I’m a tease. And I love doing it!
Won’t let you down after a cliff hanging, I promise.
Oh,lovely story,but i have a flash back,i have seen the similar story in chinese, same storyline without other charactors like shane and alice.and in that story,tina became pregnant and better found out sam’s scheme before she knew tina was pregant… i really like your work,more drama and details,is the story will go like this.so i was wondering will you kindly enough to tell me which story or film you based on?
oh,by the way,i really want to see some action in next chapter.
Yes, this is a twist based on an origin-unknown Chinese heterosexual romantic fiction I have seen before in Baidu Tieba before. You see my rewriting really originated from a dare that my friend evil mindedly pick out for me. And to be honest, I think its original structure was a bit loose and didn’t make perfect sense to me. So, I will probably do a bigger twist, especially on the pregnant part, later in this story and I have already set my mind on a particular outcome. Btw, you Chinese? I’m Chinese and I went to high school in Australia, heading to the US for college this fall. ;) nice meeting you.
Yeah,that’s where i saw it too,in Baidutieba,THE L WORD fandom.Yeah, I am chinese. i’ve already read all the chinese TB fan fictions ,and i just can’t get enough, so here i am.Guess what , i saw an American version of White Snake Legendary on the original The L Word fanfiction site, can you believe that!!That’s one of my biggest fantasy that Xuxian is actually a woman ,rather than acted by one.
so i am really looking forward to where this story goes,the original story is too rush and lack of some behind stories.So suprise me,i am officially your fan now.nice work!
Wow that’s something! I think they’ve moved all the fictions on the old site here so I’ll definitely look up for that one. Xuxian being a woman, hmmm, sounds quite tasteful!
And thank you so much for supporting me on this. I’ll post asap and please review more. I’d love to hear your thoughts since you’ve read the original version.
I wonder if I can write Chinese here. 谢谢～ 么么哒
Do they appear like normal Chinese characters or inidentifyable rectangles?
Ha! It worked! 新站果然高端！
我还是比较喜欢老站布局。exclusive.
I think that fiction named as Snake love ,Bette as Xuxian,Tina as Baishuzhen and Alice as Xiaoqing.I always thought that Xiaoqin was the true love for Bai, cos Xiaoqin is very protective of Bai and devoted everything for Bai, just thinking,haha.
Snake Love, huh, lovely and literal. XiaoQing is one hell of a girl, isn’t she. But in this case… Alice and Tina…? I don’t find that very appealing lol.
And FYI, I’m not gonna let their first time be in the poor hotel like that in the original story. It’s just not fair. ;p
I intend it to be more well planed, more romantic.
more details on their first time，please！finger crossed！
Thank you and PPS.
Thanks for supporting. I’ll try to post soon.
great post, please Tina, tell Bette about your dad
Well, she has no intention to hurt Bette that’s for sure. But it’s a dilemma. I’m afraid it’s going to turn out not so great for the scheme. Still, I will fix it, no worries.
Ok here we go let’s heat it up some more this story is getting hot
Right on! I’m working on it ;p
That was great