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Round n Round We Go (Ch.10)
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“Bette’s been talking to you?”
“Uh… no?” Then Tina’s question shook her awake. Alice quickly denied. “What did I say?”
“What’s she been talking to you about?” Tina was determined.
“Nothing! Just… friends… friendly talks… between two… very good friends?” The other girl tried to make a lame excuse out of her slip.
The blonde squinted at her, not buying any of that.
And Alice gave up. “Ok! Ok I’ll tell you. But this conversation never happened.”
“Deal.”
“I overheard her talking with Shane the other day. I could tell something’s off. Turned out, she’s not getting any.” Alice suddenly switched into her all-gossipy zone and inquired with such dramatic mysticism. “So, you guys haven’t done it yet?”
Tina’s eyes widened at the question. Really, really Alice. And she got very nervously uncomfortable thinking that Bette might have been upset because of that. “She’s been complaining about it, hasn’t she? But it’s only been two months and…”
“Geez it’s like two years in high school dating year, dear.” After blurting out, Alice finally came around to notice the mood Tina was in. “Oh no, not complaining, definitely not. She’s just… you see, Bette is not sure what to do next, considering you two have a real serious relationship together, which she’s never been in before.”
“So she’s not upset?”
Shaking her head side to side, Alice assured her. “Upset? Oh please! I’ve never seen her all twinkling in the eyes like that before. And now, what’d you want to talk about?”
“… I uh, pretty much have the same problem.”
“Ohhhhh?” Suddenly very interested, Alice rested her chin in her palm, ready to listen to storytelling. “Do tell, how, specifically, far are you two now?”
“I thought she told you.”
“Well, I was eavesdropping, merely got caught.”
“Wha—?”
“Same difference.” Alice twisted her wrist in a dismissing manner. “Go on.”
So the blonde evasively illustrated the times they nearly reached to another level, she used gestured and obscure words as she talked blushing like a cooked shrimp. And Alice, loving the juicy details, was a bit disappointed by that but still guessed all her way along. In the end, she sunk into some contemplation. Tina looked intensely at her.
“Ummm, this is interesting.” Stroking her imaginary beard, Alice spoke slowly.
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Yeah, it’s chapter ten and we haven’t seen some actions. But you know where this is heading to! Expecting the next post already?
Do review. I’d love to hear your suggestions and thoughts.
Thanks (~:
Lol!!! Nice ending….cliff hanger…. ;)
Hahaha, I know very well that I’m a tease. And I love doing it!
Won’t let you down after a cliff hanging, I promise.
Oh,lovely story,but i have a flash back,i have seen the similar story in chinese, same storyline without other charactors like shane and alice.and in that story,tina became pregnant and better found out sam’s scheme before she knew tina was pregant… i really like your work,more drama and details,is the story will go like this.so i was wondering will you kindly enough to tell me which story or film you based on?
oh,by the way,i really want to see some action in next chapter.
Yes, this is a twist based on an origin-unknown Chinese heterosexual romantic fiction I have seen before in Baidu Tieba before. You see my rewriting really originated from a dare that my friend evil mindedly pick out for me. And to be honest, I think its original structure was a bit loose and didn’t make perfect sense to me. So, I will probably do a bigger twist, especially on the pregnant part, later in this story and I have already set my mind on a particular outcome. Btw, you Chinese? I’m Chinese and I went to high school in Australia, heading to the US for college this fall. ;) nice meeting you.
Yeah,that’s where i saw it too,in Baidutieba,THE L WORD fandom.Yeah, I am chinese. i’ve already read all the chinese TB fan fictions ,and i just can’t get enough, so here i am.Guess what , i saw an American version of White Snake Legendary on the original The L Word fanfiction site, can you believe that!!That’s one of my biggest fantasy that Xuxian is actually a woman ,rather than acted by one.
so i am really looking forward to where this story goes,the original story is too rush and lack of some behind stories.So suprise me,i am officially your fan now.nice work!
Wow that’s something! I think they’ve moved all the fictions on the old site here so I’ll definitely look up for that one. Xuxian being a woman, hmmm, sounds quite tasteful!
And thank you so much for supporting me on this. I’ll post asap and please review more. I’d love to hear your thoughts since you’ve read the original version.
I wonder if I can write Chinese here. 谢谢～ 么么哒
Do they appear like normal Chinese characters or inidentifyable rectangles?
Ha! It worked! 新站果然高端！
我还是比较喜欢老站布局。exclusive.
I think that fiction named as Snake love ,Bette as Xuxian,Tina as Baishuzhen and Alice as Xiaoqing.I always thought that Xiaoqin was the true love for Bai, cos Xiaoqin is very protective of Bai and devoted everything for Bai, just thinking,haha.
Snake Love, huh, lovely and literal. XiaoQing is one hell of a girl, isn’t she. But in this case… Alice and Tina…? I don’t find that very appealing lol.
And FYI, I’m not gonna let their first time be in the poor hotel like that in the original story. It’s just not fair. ;p
I intend it to be more well planed, more romantic.
more details on their first time，please！finger crossed！
Thank you and PPS.
Thanks for supporting. I’ll try to post soon.
great post, please Tina, tell Bette about your dad
Well, she has no intention to hurt Bette that’s for sure. But it’s a dilemma. I’m afraid it’s going to turn out not so great for the scheme. Still, I will fix it, no worries.
Ok here we go let’s heat it up some more this story is getting hot
Right on! I’m working on it ;p
That was great