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“You’re making the potato dumpling?” Jorge smiled.
Tina nodded. “My grandma used to make it but I just forget the recipe. We’ll be in a sec.” She led the way into the kitchen while Jorge shrugged and went to the dining hall on his own.
Henry carefully observed the blonde. “Now what?”
“I am supposed to be delivering a report tomorrow and if you change your mind to actually contribute some useful intel before that, I won’t include anything about your job in mine.” Tina gave him a stern look and stirred the pot of Polish cuisine the on-the-clock maid had cooked and put it on a plate. “I don’t want to report you, Henry, we’re supposed to stick together.” She carried the plate out and left him in his own struggling misery.
He contemplated about it, and since Jorge was going to be with him en route for a particularly risky deal, he decided it was time. Either he pull this off and become a hero who took down the cartel, or he butcher a deal but come back to his comfortable, luxurious life with plenty of money from this little side business of his. It was damn smart of him. Maybe people would call him a dirty cop, but he had much more income than the average police officer salary, and as long as nobody found out, promotions, medals, praise, and chicks were all in line for him.
In the afternoon, Tina went back to Jodi’s room to keep her comfortable. She kept looking out the window, wondering when the brunette would be back.
It was an incredible day, the sunshine, the spring breeze, the birds and little creatures singing in the garden. It was a beautiful day in the suburban Chicago. She would have enjoyed a day like this if she wasn’t in the deep dark hole of this drug nest and constantly thinking of a woman she should not love.
Suddenly, the side gate opened and a black car pulled in. It was a car she had never seen before. Anything new in this place was suspicious and could be potential information. So she got closer to the window and watched.
Two men, obviously armed jumped out of the car, and stood in the middle of the garden. Jorge with Tito by his side came up to them. Tina found the two men familiar, but absolutely not under Jorge’s business, and she recalled the pictures detective Sweeney showed her about the two Iowa cartel reps. Those were them! The office was right, they were coming here to discuss business with Pulpo. She quickly checked on the woman one last time before discreetly going downstairs.
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Ahhh god damn it thought it’d be 10 pages as well. Well, might as well break the pattern coz I’d go seriously OCD over it. A little bit longer and more actions this time.
SO to the ladies reading and commenting on my story, pikiangelica, TN1, Pie, simonem, SG, doc, lipitora, bibi, ut, wkm, mscully, cvu, martha, thank you guys for stopping by! I’m trying to measure up. Oh and the silent readers, don’t be shy! Tell me what you think.
There’s literally no other sound in the entire building now. It’s creeping me out, especially after watching the Hannibal series! Off to bed, ladies! Have a good night.
Peace :)
wasn’t expecting them do the deeds this early, but I’m more curious about how you will do the next few scence.
I really liked this chapter with the danger and sensuality. Your writing is superb, RT! Thank you so much for posting!!!
Tina is not the only one that wished for at least one more day!
Let the action begin, but make sure Bette and Tina will get out in one piece.
Don’t care what happens with the others, and i hope Henry will get his punishment.
Thank you for the quick update!
Wow! It was really unexpected. they make love soon. but I understand why you did it.
It’s be as long as, they are in contact with each other for a while, if Tina makes reference to her bosses.
or Bette will be able to escape or she will be jailed, and Tina can’t does anything.
this is certainly a terrible situation.
would not be writing a screw? :P
somehow a way that they are safe to be together?
Oh yes you have me really hooked on this one now! I really want to know where you are taking us with this story, so as they say PPS!
Loved it, thanks
Thoughts of a silent reader… This may be my Tibette story ever. I love the pace and tone that has been set, Both Tina and Bette have exposed strengths and weaknesses in this story. The need each other to survive in multiple ways and worlds. I love that you aren’t rushing the story, but letting it take place at a pace that “just seems right”. The fine details bring the reader into the story fully… the soft touch, the glances, the scents. Well, I think I have expressed too much for a silent reader. Thanks for the posting.
Wow I’m so blown away at your writing skills to even make a comment…sigh you just so brilliant as I always tell you but can’t help it…Anywhooo, damn I feel for Tina, this is a hard choice she will have to make but I’m so hoping that if Bette gets caught it turns out she some kind of spy or FBI. I don’t know just please don’t let her go down…oh and I don’t think they slept together too soon I could totally understand why they did it (get it “did it”lol) I wished it would’ve been sooner but your pace is way more better. This is a entertaining story for sure, I feel like I’m watching a movie and I love movies so bravo to you my friend
Brilliant story. I enjoyed reading it. Can’t wait to see what happens next! Please post soon!!
Loved this chapter.10 stars
This was another amazing chapter.. I love how they have this connection from way back when and that is what’s helping them survive.. I also love the sensuality of the scene, the just barely there love making which was enough to want more but be satisfying on its own..
But now to the trouble please not to much angst my heart couldn’t take it they have to be together and get through this.. And I’m loving Bette as the criminal with a heart!!!
Kudos to you for yet another beautiful story!!!