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Jorge led the two men into his study, where Tina assumed the secret meeting would take place. She stalked over, and held her breath, trying to listen to their conversation.
But the door was thick and the men were talking in a suspiciously low voice. Tina could only get muffled words about the “Middletown agreement” or something sounded like deciding up their territories. She knew there was a risk someone could catch her spying outside the door but it was important that she got the gist of this conversation. So she moved even closer until her ear was basically pressed on the wood.
Bette just finished up a shower from her day-long travel. She was starving. Walking downstairs to get some food, she paused in the hallway. The weird scene with Tina pressing on Jorge’s study room door was what she saw. Then she remembered him saying something about a visit from the Iowa Irish mob or some of that business division crap. Immediately she broke into a cold sweat. She had to do something, before anybody, before Jorge found out the blonde had been listening.
Maybe it would earn her a slap on the face, but it was something she got to do quick. Gingerly walking toward the slender figure that was bending into an odd angle against the door, she wrapped her arm around the woman’s waist.
The brunette had been so quiet approaching her. Tina did not see that coming. She yelped and instinctively budged, knocking her elbow into the door.
The discussion instantly stopped. “Who is there!?” Out came Jorge’s stern inquiry from the room.
“This is it… I’m dead.” Tina closed her eyes and felt her own heart stop.
The next second, she was pushed backward onto the wall and a warm pair of lips swallowed her whimper.
Bette held the blonde closely to her own body, and kissed her deeply, hoping that everything would go ok. “If you wanna live, better act like it.” She planted some more kisses on the soft skin she found on Tina’s neck and sucked on it gently. She had to admit that she was enjoying this living crisis just a little bit.
It was Bette… Tina finally realized what was happening. Bette was here, Bette was home, and she was holding her, kissing her, whispering to her, and saving her in the moment. God, Bette… how could she live without her. Literally, she would be dead if the person who caught her was not the brunette. And… the feeling to be kissed by the woman was just incredible. She threw her arms around Bette’s neck, held onto her strong torso for support, and let the woman explore her thoroughly with that magic tongue of hers.
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Ahhh god damn it thought it’d be 10 pages as well. Well, might as well break the pattern coz I’d go seriously OCD over it. A little bit longer and more actions this time.
SO to the ladies reading and commenting on my story, pikiangelica, TN1, Pie, simonem, SG, doc, lipitora, bibi, ut, wkm, mscully, cvu, martha, thank you guys for stopping by! I’m trying to measure up. Oh and the silent readers, don’t be shy! Tell me what you think.
There’s literally no other sound in the entire building now. It’s creeping me out, especially after watching the Hannibal series! Off to bed, ladies! Have a good night.
Peace :)
wasn’t expecting them do the deeds this early, but I’m more curious about how you will do the next few scence.
I really liked this chapter with the danger and sensuality. Your writing is superb, RT! Thank you so much for posting!!!
Tina is not the only one that wished for at least one more day!
Let the action begin, but make sure Bette and Tina will get out in one piece.
Don’t care what happens with the others, and i hope Henry will get his punishment.
Thank you for the quick update!
Wow! It was really unexpected. they make love soon. but I understand why you did it.
It’s be as long as, they are in contact with each other for a while, if Tina makes reference to her bosses.
or Bette will be able to escape or she will be jailed, and Tina can’t does anything.
this is certainly a terrible situation.
would not be writing a screw? :P
somehow a way that they are safe to be together?
Oh yes you have me really hooked on this one now! I really want to know where you are taking us with this story, so as they say PPS!
Loved it, thanks
Thoughts of a silent reader… This may be my Tibette story ever. I love the pace and tone that has been set, Both Tina and Bette have exposed strengths and weaknesses in this story. The need each other to survive in multiple ways and worlds. I love that you aren’t rushing the story, but letting it take place at a pace that “just seems right”. The fine details bring the reader into the story fully… the soft touch, the glances, the scents. Well, I think I have expressed too much for a silent reader. Thanks for the posting.
Wow I’m so blown away at your writing skills to even make a comment…sigh you just so brilliant as I always tell you but can’t help it…Anywhooo, damn I feel for Tina, this is a hard choice she will have to make but I’m so hoping that if Bette gets caught it turns out she some kind of spy or FBI. I don’t know just please don’t let her go down…oh and I don’t think they slept together too soon I could totally understand why they did it (get it “did it”lol) I wished it would’ve been sooner but your pace is way more better. This is a entertaining story for sure, I feel like I’m watching a movie and I love movies so bravo to you my friend
Brilliant story. I enjoyed reading it. Can’t wait to see what happens next! Please post soon!!
Loved this chapter.10 stars
This was another amazing chapter.. I love how they have this connection from way back when and that is what’s helping them survive.. I also love the sensuality of the scene, the just barely there love making which was enough to want more but be satisfying on its own..
But now to the trouble please not to much angst my heart couldn’t take it they have to be together and get through this.. And I’m loving Bette as the criminal with a heart!!!
Kudos to you for yet another beautiful story!!!