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Knock You Down – (Chapter: 1. You got me thinkin about our life, our house, and kids)
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“Just go talk to her, you’re borderline assaulting her with your stare”
“Shut up Hunter” I told him as I whipped the tennis ball back at him, breaking my concentration with the blonde
He tossed the ball back to me and we continued for a few seconds longer. My willpower was crumbling from beneath me and I couldn’t resist my urge to look at her one more time.
“Talk to her” my brother called in a singsong voice
I ignored him, never in a million years would I get up the courage to walk up to the blonde and speak to her, she was delicate, innocent, fragile, she was everything I wasn’t.
“Heads!” I whipped my head around just in time to see the ball fly over my head
I heard a small shriek behind me, “What the hell are you doing!” I rushed out harshly, thrusting my palms towards him hoping to get some water in his eyes
He laughed like the jackass he was and pointed towards the blonde who was wiping water from her face, great.
I punched him hard in his chest and swam over before I could think of a reason not to, by the time I reached her, she wasn’t facing me.
Do I clear my throat? Do I tap her? Do I just take the ball and swim away before she sees me?
“Hi sorry about that, it won’t happen again, I promise” I closed my eyes, embarrassed by how lame I just sounded
“Oh no don’t…” she started to speak, I braced myself as she began to turn towards me, I was surprised when she herself faltered when our eyes met, “Don’t uh, worry about it”
She gave me back the ball, her eyes never leaving mine and that was all it took, my confidence was back. She wasn’t scary and she didn’t appear crazy, I swam away already cooking up a scheme.
“You’re an asshole” I said to my brother as I threw the ball back to him
“Come on, she was hot”
I caught the ball as he threw it back to me, “And completely straight”
He raised his eyebrows, “Then allow me”
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Oh, Amie, that was wonderful…just wonderful. I loved everything from Ashley’s pov, I loved learning about their relatonship now, their fake fighting, loved the Ash/Blake/Shannon prep scene! I smell the drama and it’s going to be amazing. Perfect! I’m so excited! Please don’t make me wait long, I’m dying to read more!
that was soo good im so excied your back!!i definitly chose to read this instead of do my homework ill just do it during school tomorrow not a big deal anyways pms!!
woo hoo! youre back! and this story is back! loved every syllable :) stix already pointed out my favorite parts up there so ill just second them all :)
YAY!!! I loved loved loved the other stories so now I’m super excited. You’re for real one of my favorite authors. So keep writing, woman. It’s fantastic already.
this is beyond fantastic already! I can’t even tell you how happy I am that you’re back. I loved getting ash’s view of everything and I simply can’t wait for more. I hope your diligently typing away as I type this because I neeeeed the next chapter!!!
haha *sigh* that was absolutely wonderful! i loved it so much and how we got to learn of Ashleys thoughts and ordeals that had to do with their relationship…hehe loved the fake fighting and my favorite line was it was like I was watching an episode of Law and Order on a continuous loop, the only crime she was committing was stealing my heart…ahha tha one made me smile hehe great job =]
Wow! Honestly, that knocked my socks off and that was chapter 1? Just…wow! It was perfect and I got so much insight into Ashley’s side of the story and it’s added a whole new depth which I can see you expanding on…hopefully very soon?? I’m totally entranced so please can we have some more???
yesss sooo glad you’re writing part three!!! this has always been one of my favourite stories, i love your writing! i laughed out loud when spencer and ashley had their fake fight. can’t wait to read more, pms!!!!