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    Knock You Down – (Chapter: 1. You got me thinkin about our life, our house, and kids)

    Story written on August 19, 2009 by roxystyle011.
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    Save Tonight & Heartless sequel…threequel? Well, it’s the third Installment.

     

    To say the week went smoothly would be a lie, smooth would be the last adjective I would use to describe the roller coaster of events. Easy isn’t a word in my vocabulary, I don’t know what it means for something to be easy and I don’t think Spencer did either. Difficult and frustrating was more like it and I mean that in the least negative way possible. You see, not only are we both stubborn but we’re extremely stubborn and communication was something that just wasn’t on the top of our priority list. Oh we communicated but not the stuff we should have, the lies we kept from each other only took away precious time we could have spent together, but hey everything happens for a reason. Sure the crazy con artist was a minor setback, our family names might have helped the “getting to know you” process along, and it would have been nice to know she was already seeing someone but hell, if I would have known all there was to know about Spencer Carlin within a day then there would be nothing left for me to find out and I might not have been so intrigued by her. The mystery surrounding her drove me wild, it was like I was watching an episode of Law and Order on a continuous loop, the only crime she was committing was stealing my heart. And how corny was that line? Talk about cringe worthy… I couldn’t help it even if I tried, that’s just what she does to me.

     

     

    The setbacks were mostly caused by interferences from other people, namely my eager to help sister.  Now, I’m not one to get scared easily, I’ve seen my fair share of horror movies that I can watch without blinking an eye. Commitment, intimacy, relationships, love…none of those things scare me. What did scare me was the girl I was falling for laying helpless for short periods of time and I didn’t know why, and there was nothing I could do to help. Her blackouts came as a surprise, I didn’t know the signs well enough and I didn’t know how to prevent them.

     

    The day that started at the beach was the probably one of the scariest days of my life.

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    1. Oh, Amie, that was wonderful…just wonderful. I loved everything from Ashley’s pov, I loved learning about their relatonship now, their fake fighting, loved the Ash/Blake/Shannon prep scene! I smell the drama and it’s going to be amazing. Perfect! I’m so excited! Please don’t make me wait long, I’m dying to read more!

    2. that was soo good im so excied your back!!i definitly chose to read this instead of do my homework ill just do it during school tomorrow not a big deal anyways pms!!

    3. woo hoo! youre back! and this story is back! loved every syllable :) stix already pointed out my favorite parts up there so ill just second them all :)

    4. YAY!!! I loved loved loved the other stories so now I’m super excited. You’re for real one of my favorite authors. So keep writing, woman. It’s fantastic already.

    5. this is beyond fantastic already! I can’t even tell you how happy I am that you’re back. I loved getting ash’s view of everything and I simply can’t wait for more. I hope your diligently typing away as I type this because I neeeeed the next chapter!!!

    6. haha *sigh* that was absolutely wonderful! i loved it so much and how we got to learn of Ashleys thoughts and ordeals that had to do with their relationship…hehe loved the fake fighting and my favorite line was it was like I was watching an episode of Law and Order on a continuous loop, the only crime she was committing was stealing my heart…ahha tha one made me smile hehe great job =]

    7. Wow! Honestly, that knocked my socks off and that was chapter 1? Just…wow! It was perfect and I got so much insight into Ashley’s side of the story and it’s added a whole new depth which I can see you expanding on…hopefully very soon?? I’m totally entranced so please can we have some more???

    8. yesss sooo glad you’re writing part three!!! this has always been one of my favourite stories, i love your writing! i laughed out loud when spencer and ashley had their fake fight. can’t wait to read more, pms!!!!

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