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Knock You Down – (Chapter: 1. You got me thinkin about our life, our house, and kids)
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“So you and Spence huh?” Kyla’s voice broke my gaze away from the retreating blonde and my sister as they headed down to the water
“Hmm?”
“C’mon, I see the way you look at her, it’s all there Davies” she nudges my arm and it gets a smile out of me
“I do like her, I’m just not sure if she likes me as much I like her” I reply unsure
“Well your sister is finding out for you right now” she replies
My head snaps back down to the water, “what?!”
Sure enough Blake had her serious face on and Spencer looked like a fish out of water
“I’m going to fucking ring her neck!” I yell, earning a few nasty looks from some of the other people along the beach within earshot of me
I scared Kyla because she didn’t say anything else after that. Finally the two of them were coming back towards us but I could tell that her demeanor has changed. Before I can realize what’s happening, we’re packing up our stuff and making our way back towards her car.
“What the fuck B!? What did you say to her!” I asked in a hushed whisper as Spencer waits by the car
“Nothing, I have no idea what happened, she just freaked”
“People just don’t freak, you triggered it by opening up your god damn mouth” I stormed ahead of her
I reached Kyla and Spencer finally and she wasn’t looking so good
“Spence, are you okay?” I ask reaching for her arm
She pulls away from me, “Yeah I’m fine”
When we get situated in the car I text her and try to apologize for the actions of my jack ass of a sister, she doesn’t answer and I didn’t expect her to. The silent car ride is eating me alive and finally we pull into the parking spot in front of their villa.
Kyla hopped out of the car and we all turn to each other puzzled when Spencer did make a move to open her door and get out.
“She probably just fell asleep, Spencer wake up sweetie” Kyla said nudging her
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Oh, Amie, that was wonderful…just wonderful. I loved everything from Ashley’s pov, I loved learning about their relatonship now, their fake fighting, loved the Ash/Blake/Shannon prep scene! I smell the drama and it’s going to be amazing. Perfect! I’m so excited! Please don’t make me wait long, I’m dying to read more!
that was soo good im so excied your back!!i definitly chose to read this instead of do my homework ill just do it during school tomorrow not a big deal anyways pms!!
woo hoo! youre back! and this story is back! loved every syllable :) stix already pointed out my favorite parts up there so ill just second them all :)
YAY!!! I loved loved loved the other stories so now I’m super excited. You’re for real one of my favorite authors. So keep writing, woman. It’s fantastic already.
this is beyond fantastic already! I can’t even tell you how happy I am that you’re back. I loved getting ash’s view of everything and I simply can’t wait for more. I hope your diligently typing away as I type this because I neeeeed the next chapter!!!
haha *sigh* that was absolutely wonderful! i loved it so much and how we got to learn of Ashleys thoughts and ordeals that had to do with their relationship…hehe loved the fake fighting and my favorite line was it was like I was watching an episode of Law and Order on a continuous loop, the only crime she was committing was stealing my heart…ahha tha one made me smile hehe great job =]
Wow! Honestly, that knocked my socks off and that was chapter 1? Just…wow! It was perfect and I got so much insight into Ashley’s side of the story and it’s added a whole new depth which I can see you expanding on…hopefully very soon?? I’m totally entranced so please can we have some more???
yesss sooo glad you’re writing part three!!! this has always been one of my favourite stories, i love your writing! i laughed out loud when spencer and ashley had their fake fight. can’t wait to read more, pms!!!!