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Knock You Down – (Chapter: 1. You got me thinkin about our life, our house, and kids)
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“Look me in the eye and say it!” I yelled, growing impatient with her coward-ness
“I don’t want you!” she yelled back
I turned briskly on my heel and walked away from her before she had the chance to see the tears fall from my eyes. I know I forced her to say it but a part of my hoped that she was putting up a front, that by challenging her, the wall would crumble and she would finally accept her feelings that I knew she had. I never expected those words to come out of her mouth and I never expected them to damage me as much as they did. Only one thing was on my mind at that point.
“Ash, what are you doing?”
I looked up to find both girls staring at me, “Oh exactly what it looks like I’m doing” I seethe
“Why?” Blake asked
I took a sip from the cup that I was holding up to my cheek, “Hmm, let’s see” I slammed the cup down
Blake turned to Kyla and blocked her view of me, “Ky, let me see you out, I’ll call you in a bit” she apologized
Kyla frantically left with Blake at her heels before she was back in front of me with a fire in her eyes, matching the rage in mine.
Our shouting escalated quicker than normal, neither of us beating around the bush or holding back.
“…Don’t punish yourself or punish me by making me watch you lose control all over again. Because if I have to I will go get mom and dad right now because I will not relive what we went through last year. I will not. If you’re not going to do it for yourself or for me then at least do it for Spencer because she doesn’t deserve that and if she were to see you right now, she would be disappointed”
I sighed and began to walk away from her
“Where are you going?”
“Downstairs” I replied and then stopped in my tracks as I saw the blonde staring up, “how long have you been here?” I already knew the answer from the tears in her eyes, I wouldn’t be surprised if she heard the entire conversation
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Oh, Amie, that was wonderful…just wonderful. I loved everything from Ashley’s pov, I loved learning about their relatonship now, their fake fighting, loved the Ash/Blake/Shannon prep scene! I smell the drama and it’s going to be amazing. Perfect! I’m so excited! Please don’t make me wait long, I’m dying to read more!
that was soo good im so excied your back!!i definitly chose to read this instead of do my homework ill just do it during school tomorrow not a big deal anyways pms!!
woo hoo! youre back! and this story is back! loved every syllable :) stix already pointed out my favorite parts up there so ill just second them all :)
YAY!!! I loved loved loved the other stories so now I’m super excited. You’re for real one of my favorite authors. So keep writing, woman. It’s fantastic already.
this is beyond fantastic already! I can’t even tell you how happy I am that you’re back. I loved getting ash’s view of everything and I simply can’t wait for more. I hope your diligently typing away as I type this because I neeeeed the next chapter!!!
haha *sigh* that was absolutely wonderful! i loved it so much and how we got to learn of Ashleys thoughts and ordeals that had to do with their relationship…hehe loved the fake fighting and my favorite line was it was like I was watching an episode of Law and Order on a continuous loop, the only crime she was committing was stealing my heart…ahha tha one made me smile hehe great job =]
Wow! Honestly, that knocked my socks off and that was chapter 1? Just…wow! It was perfect and I got so much insight into Ashley’s side of the story and it’s added a whole new depth which I can see you expanding on…hopefully very soon?? I’m totally entranced so please can we have some more???
yesss sooo glad you’re writing part three!!! this has always been one of my favourite stories, i love your writing! i laughed out loud when spencer and ashley had their fake fight. can’t wait to read more, pms!!!!