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    Story written on August 13, 2023 by BetteisBetter.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=115420
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    Approaching my office I asked my assistant not to be disturbed and as soon as I closed the door, I plopped down into my chair. My phone buzzed and for some unexplainable reason I hoped it was Bette. She stormed out last night, leaving her suitcases at the door and as I understood from Renee

    Approaching my office I asked my assistant not to be disturbed and as soon as I closed the door, I plopped down into my chair. My phone buzzed and for some unexplainable reason I hoped it was Bette. She stormed out last night, leaving her suitcases at the door and as I understood from Renee spent the night at Renee’s. All of the sudden I had a close insight in the whereabouts of my wife. Till only a few days ago our bank account had been a trail of crumbs for me to follow if I wanted to. During the occasional overseas phone calls we shared, nothing of essence was said. At some point it had felt as an obligatory act to call on Monday evening. I never thought of asking her, why Monday evening?

    A knock at the door annoyed me. ’I said I don’t want to be disturbed.’ I snapped and tossed my phone with just another work mail aside.

    ’Not even with the best coffee in town?’ Kate said holding up a coffee to go from the bistro across. I didn’t want to disappoint her genuine smile, with telling her that the best coffee was made in the bar downstairs where I lived, so I motioned her to come in.

    ’You’re an angel. Thank you.’ I needed coffee as a fuel to keep me running after another sleepless night.

    ’And how was it?’

    ’The meeting was ok, nothing special. Tom is becoming a father.’

    ’Uh that’s great.. I guess.’ She shrugged and sat down at my desk. ’But I meant how was last night?’

    I fought the urge to bite my lip. This wasn’t like the time after we returned from our honeymoon and I wanted to gush about it to everyone who was willing to listen. This was something I desperately needed to keep to myself until I could pretend it wasn’t true. ’Oh as you can imagine.’

    Kate lifted an elegantly shaped eyebrow at me and shook her head. ’No, not really. I’ve never tied the knot.’

    My experience taught me when you want to get out of something, you subtly turn the tables, most people loved to talk about themselves. ’I figured, you don’t seem like the type for it.’

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    1. Hey ladies,

      Welcome back!

      I do remember Renee and the story of last year. I totally loved that one but this rewrite is catching my interest as well.

      My heart is breaking for Bette and Tina, i want to cry for them and hope and wish they will find the love they once had.

      And Renee being so sick, no cure possible. The catalist for Bette returning to Paris.

      I’m looking forward to read the other parts.

    2. A re-write? I’m curious to see what you’ve changed. I loved it the first time around and was waiting for an update.
      Well, I’m off to reading now. :-)

    3. I was exciting seeing the tittle (not knowing of the meaning of 2.0 was). read the story eagerly, thinking it was another chapter of the other story. but then I read, Renee is still alive? hmm.. must be a past story, then.. I thought.. hmm.. it’s weird, the storyline seems different from the one without 2.0.
      then I read Author Note, I should have read it sooner… hehehehe.. (so sorry.. I didn’t read the author note from the beginning because how eager I was to read it) so it is different story, with almost the same background .. and now I wonder what is the difference from the other one? well… my impression reading this one is less bitterness, a lot of stubbornness from both side,, and that makes me wonder what happened with them?

      I love both stories, and can’t wait for the next one.. and thank you for sharing your work with us..

    5. I must say that this story is rather confusing to me… As you have no introduction into any background on this story. Who is Renee? Who is “I”… what’s going on… I am sorry to say that after 3 pages I simply quit reading as I still had no clue as what I was reading. If you are depending on the reader having read another story to figure out who these people are and what is going on, then you need to say so. But your story is like waking up and finding yourself somewhere you have never been before with people you do not know and why you or they are there… With any good story… you cannot assume your reader knows anything…. you must tell the reader what they need to know to get into the story..

      I do remember your last story…. but I also remember that I had a great deal of difficulty following who was talking in your dialogue sequences… thus, I had a great deal of difficulty discerning the story line… Is this Bette talking or is it Tina? I guess some enjoy that style of story telling… I will say that I enjoyed Desert Rose far more than Uncharted Territory.

      Good luck with this one. I wish you much success…

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