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    6 Months- chapter 19

    Story written on August 19, 2004 by Skipton.
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    finally, some rest

     

    “Be-” was all her lips would allow.  The tears were coming even harder now and her legs were starting to tremble.  She could not steady herself.

     

    Bette stayed where she was, her feet not allowing her to move.  She watched Tina and could not believe what she was seeing.  “Tina” she thought, “Oh God Kit, this was beyond defeated.”   If she had only known.  She did not know what she would have done, but she would have done something.  She never would have allowed Tina to get to this point. 

     

    Bette heard her trying to say her name, but only part of it came out.  She also saw her step falter, if only for a second.  She had never seen Tina like this.  Her body was beyond exhaustion, she was completely and utterly spent.

     

    “I should go to her” Bette thought, but she was afraid.  She did not know this tormented Tina in front of her and more importantly, did not know what she wanted.

     

    Tina watched the emotions and questions pass Bette’s face, and knew that she did not know what to do.

     

    “You left me” Tine whispered.

     

    “What, Tina?” Bette asked.  It had come so softly that she could not pick up any of it.

     

    “You left me” she stated again, the emotion gaining strength in her voice, as were the tears and shaking.

     

    “I don’t know how much longer I can hold on,” Tina thought sobbing.  She continued to look at Bette whose expression had become one of pain.

     

    “You left me” Tina whaled.

     

    “Tina” Bette pleaded.  Her feet finally allowing her to move, Bette took one step towards Tina and that is when Tina let go.  She knew that she was going to fall, but didn’t care.

     

    Bette reached Tina just as she started to drop towards the ground.  She caught her around the waist and Tina didn’t react.  She appeared almost lifeless as Bette brought her to stand, never letting go for fear that her legs would not support her.

     

    Tina could not breathe.  She had not been this close to Bette in months and it was causing her world to go dim.

     

    “Tina” Bette pleaded again.

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    2. This is extremely well written the emotions are so right on. I am enjoying each installment and I just want to say THANK YOU and please continue. You are an awesome writer

    8. I didn’t realize until I read the last line that I was holding my breath. You are doing such a wonderful job with this. Please don’t make us wait too long for your next post.

    11. Okay…Bette has a destroyed Tina on one hand, and a show opening on the other. Where will she find the strength? Can Tina be left alone?
      Fly Kit to NYC to help out. Loved it.

    15. Your writing is so incredible, that it almost physically hurts to read. I find myself clenching my hands around the arms of my chair while I am reading. Thanks for this ride!!

    16. Wow – you are SO good! I told Marie that she will always be my favorite writer, but you are free to take the #2 notch on my list. Absolutely fabulous you are!

    17. my this just gets better…
      Like T said Marie, Jaded and aatnb at #1
      #2 you have to share with Katey newwriter,georgia, lizard,sea,shake,
      prozac,lisa, might of miss a few but U are in excellent company…. so where’s the next chapter?

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