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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 2
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Alice was deep in her rambling mind when she felt Shane shaking her shoulder.
"Alice??? Earth to Alice! Do you read me?" Shane said with an amused look in her eyes.
"Huh? Wha…Shane. What? Why are we stopped?" Alice finished as she noticed that Shane had pulled them over and the car was parked.
"Where the fuck are you this morning Pieszecki? And cut the bull shit!? What’s wrong?" Shane put on her resolve face and smiled inwardly as she heard her friend sigh in defeat.
"Shane…I don’t know what the fuck is going on…it’s Dana…last night…" Shane cut her friend off.
"Holy shit Al! Did you guys do it?" She asked shocked.
"Shane…can I talk please? You wanted me to spill it so let me already. Jesus." Alice scolded a slightly embarrassed Shane. She nodded for the writer to continue.
"No. Dana and I did not ‘do it’ as you so delicately put it. She…I broke up with Jared and he was kind of an ass hole about it. Last night when Dana took me home, he had used my spare key to get in and was waiting for me. So I asked Dane if I could stay with her…and so she said yes and took me to her place…" She paused to make sure Shane was following. She nodded for her to continue. "So she barely says two words to me the whole way to her place and as she is pulling in the drive, she just rips me a new one about my choices in significant others." Alice paused again at her friends smile. "What the fuck are you smiling at?" She barked out.
"Nothing. Nothing at all…she’s right though…you have made some pretty poor choices in the past…Jared topping the list…fucking ass hole…"Shane trailed off. "Sorry. Continue."
"Thank you. Ok…So…she is yelling at me…and she said some really shitty things Shane…but honestly…yeah. She was right. So I kinda took off down the beach and she of course caught up to me in like…10 seconds and apologized…and of course I wasn’t having any of it."
"Of course not." Shane interrupted.
"Fuck you Shane… So then I just asked her…I asked her what she wanted from me. You know…simple question…What do you want from me? Why are you freaking out? It’s my life, my choice who I see…" Alice trailed off, reliving the moment in her head.
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listen here suzieb, if you loved me, you’d put these two together!! AHHHHH it’s so annoying..poor girls though, both struggling so much. It was a great update, my heart went out to Dana, really. I could totally relate to that situation. I just love your writing and this story so I can’t help but leave you great compliments. I mean them all :) I can’t wait for you to update again…please dont keep me wait too long! You’re fabulous
Argh!!!!! How can you do this to us?!? Love the story tho, please post on this one again soon (and save our little Danish hearts)
DAMN YOU! Ha ha. Not really. You know I love you. Another great chapter from a great writer. Like Dawson said, I could really feel for Dana. And Alice. Pretty shitty situation our girls have gotten themselves into. But seriously, great chapter even though it wasnt the happiest! You know I love your fics any way I can get them. Now please get these two together soon! And Lara? Really? Please God, no!
I Avoid Danish fics…usually I was drawn by Shane’s name next to Hero and read both chapters and all I have to say is BRAVO, you’ve got me liking a Danish fic and that’s a pretty big accomplishment!
Another frustrated reviewer here…Lara ALWAYS has to show up and come between these two. Now it will take ages before them to get together! Ah well, I’m the one who is torturing myself…I do have the choice to not read this…but then again, a powerful force is making meto read your wonderful stories…angsty or not. :D And I just know they will end up together…some day. Hint…just make Lara dissapear by having her to take a cooking course in Paris or something. :P
Awww man! Come on! Alice and Dana! Not Lara! Why does she always have to pop up and ruin everything? Damn her!
I know you probably like Danish as much as I do so this chapter is just a little warm up to happier times right? haha, I love these girls together and you write them so well. Even if you through Lara in the mix I still believe that Alice and Dana will get their act together and there will be more happy stories in the future. Keep it up!!
Aaarrggghh. But at least you warned us. So, here’s hoping that Lara’s a one chapter obstacle ‘cuz this is too frustrating. I have but one request…please, no Ton Ton. Ever. I hate her and don’t even get to love hating her. Looking forward to the next chapter.
oh hell no not Lara – damn soup chef!!! what a fab update, yet again! you have to take the rough with the smooth and yeah, this was kinda angsty lol, but that means that good things are on the way right? well i hope so because i love this story! Alice… go get your woman! way to go suzieb, can’t wait for more, you have me hooked! :)
Lara needs to go home and find a girl of her own, Dana is taken! Like Alice said ‘step off bitch’ hehe. Great Chap loving this drama. Oh and I was thinking LA is the perfect place to move to with our wives, they can always fly to Canada when they need to and we could go with them hehe :)
You just had to add Lara into the mix didn’t you…how cruel. lol. please update soon and take me back to happy Danish Land!
Lara’s not the obstacle. Dana and Alice are the obstacles to their own happiness. It was nice to see Dana be the one who threw caution to the wind, but now the wall is back up. Great update. I can’t wait to see how our girls handle things.
Damn! You are seriously killing me with the suspense, but I still stand by my other comment. I love this story!(I mean I might like it just a bit more if they could get together like, right now:D)Anyways, please, please, PLEASE update as fast as possible!
Hey there! just caught up with the last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story… Ahhh what more could a girl want!! sigh. The intense Danish build up gets me everytime and you have sooo hit my spot with this one Suz!! Hmmm…lol. Loved drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?”, Oh yes! very direct Alice!! Mmm, I like it. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next? You are SUCH a tease!. Btw your dorkiness and personality that shines thru in your stories cracks me up so bad… and now you seem to be a poet!!LMAO! Post soon.Thanks.