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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 3
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Dana laughed and walked over to set the water on her night stand. "Well I am very happy for you Al. So anyways, you are all set. I’m gonna head home, but I will call to check up on you tomorrow, ok?" Dana waited for a response from Alice.
"Daaaaaaaaana. Why are you leaving me??? Come on. Don’t leave me alone. Stay. You can stay here! Like a slumber party!" Alice said excitedly.
‘Shit’ she thought to herself. ‘This can only lead to trouble. Walk away Fairbanks…WALK AWAY!’ her brain screamed at her, but as she looked at those pleading eyes, she found herself being drawn in.
"Al, I think you’d be better off on your own." ‘Hey, way to resist Dana!’ She congratulated herself.
"PLEEEEEEEEASE?" Alice begged. "I’ve missed you." She said shyly.
‘Oh shit!’ Dana knew she was in trouble now.
"Al, I don’t know…" Just then she watched a flash of blond bolt out of the bed and then proceed to tackle her back onto it. The next thing Dana knew, she was lying on her back with a scantily clad Alice straddling her hips and smiling down at her victoriously.
"Gotcha!" the blond said.
"Yes, it appears you do." Dana replied and couldn’t hide the smile that was working its way across her face. Shw was trying her best not be turned on, but Alice was making that very hard for her.
Alice thankfully rolled off of her and started tugging her up the bed to get under the covers with her. Dana was still fully dressed so she sighed in defeat and began to remove her shoes and cloths. A few minutes later, they were both under the covers and trying to get comfortable. Dana reached over and turned the light off. She stared at the ceiling for a few minutes, assuming that Alice had already fallen asleep.
"Hey Dana?" Alice asked quietly. "You still awake?" She propped herself up on one elbow, trying to see if the athletes eyes were open.
"Yes Al. I am awake."
"Oh. Can I ask you something?" Dana closed her eyes, wishing that Alice would just fall asleep already. She could feel her body heat and it was driving her mad.
"Sure Al."
Alice bit her lip and scooted a little closer to Dana before she spoke. "How come you won’t talk to me anymore?" Dana groaned in frustration. ‘How do I answer that question?’ she wondered.
"Al, I’m talking to you right now." Dana decided to play dumb.
"Yeah, but how long has it been? I have been looking for you and you know…stuff." Alice trailed off. ‘Damn, drunk Alice is pretty hard to distract.’ Dana thought uneasily.
"Sorry Alice. I have been really busy I guess." Dana didn’t know what else to say and she prayed that the writer would buy that in her state on mind. But of course, she was wrong.
"Really? Well, everybody else said that they saw you."
"I’ve been busy Al." Dana said again, trying not to get upset.
"With Lara?" Alice asked innocently. She wasn’t trying to be mean. Dana could here the sadness and sincerity in her voice.
"Al, Lara and I are just friends." Dana didn’t know why she said that, but she knew that it was true.
"Like us?" Alice asked quietly.
Dana didn’t know how to respond. ‘Where is she going with this?’ Dana wondered.
"Al…"
"Dana, do you want me?" Dana was speechless. She had been down this road once before and it ended badly. She had no desire to repeat that terrible night.
"Alice, let’s just go to bed ok? We can talk in the morning."
"NO!" Alice shouted. Dana was surprised at the sudden outburst. "Dana, that’s what you said last time and look what’s happened?" Alice waited for this to sink in before she repeated her question. "Dane…do you want me?"
Dana swallowed hard. Something about the way Alice was looking at her told her to put herself out there again. She didn’t want to, but she wasn’t a liar either.
"I do." she stated honestly
Alice slid up against the brunette and brought her face inches from her own. "Well that’s good Dana. Because I want you so bad." And then Alice crashed her lips down onto Dana’s.
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I knew putting my trust in you was the right thing to do. You’re Danish hart is as big as mine, it’s just I can’t write and you can. Great update and of course drunk Alice is great. My favorite line was “My bed kicks so much ass sometimes” hahaha, I was laughing so hard. I want them together as much as everybody here but I prefer Alice to be sober. She’ll probably fall a sleep on top of Dana…(nice image) Anyway, thanks for this pick-me-up and see ya next time! X
I love drunk Alice and drunk Shane.
thank you! i’ve had a crappy day too. this was great. it made me smile.
Yay!!! So glad they kissed. Too bad Alice had to be drunk at the time. But drunk Alice is pretty funny, as is drunk Shane. I liked the messing of the hair bit, very funny. Please post soon.
alice is excellent drunk or sober!! plz let them work it out
I think every story should have a silly, drunk Alice in it. I mean who wouldn’t love that. Awesome chapter. Really looking forward to an update…hopefully one that takes place right where you left off..in the bed. lol.
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AHH!! My ENTIRE long ass post got messed up I think! Dammit. Well, in short, excellent chapter my friend! It made me very happy! Loved the little Shalice moment (you know how to make me smile), and beyond perfect ending to the chapter. I hope you pick up where you left off, and that neither of our girls freak out! I want hot Danish lovin, and I want it NOW! :-) You’re fucking awesome babe!
that last part was fantastic.”i want you so bad”perfect.
Hey there! Just caught up with your last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story.. Ahh what more could a girl want! Haha. The intense Danish build up, followed with the drama gets me everytime and you have soo hit the spot with this one Suz!! LOL. Dana being the more direct one was a nice twist. Shalice rocks! Drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?” Wow, very sexy!!. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next, and are you goin to keep teasin us?. Btw, its your “dorkiness” and personality that shines thru in your stories that cracks me up so bad, and now you seem to be a poet!! LMAO, [refer to your last comment]. Post soon. Thanks.
It was a primal reaction I guess. ;) I do have faith in you when it comes to my favorite pair! :D And deep down I know it isn’t Lara’s fault at all (or whoever you decide to bring in to this story to ruin everything between them :P)…it’s just the miscommunication these two always seem to have. Drunken Alice was so adorable. :) Can’t they just be drunken all the time, that’s the only time when these two are really honest. (But mmmh, don’t know if I like them so much if they were alcoholics though…).
awwww hell yeah for Alice and Dana! Finally!!! I just hope Alice remembers it tomorrow!! Let them be happy!! CAn’t wait for the next update, it’s fabulous…you know i love your writing here suzieb…fantastic
Oh my god, you’ve actually managed to make my bad day into a fantastic one! I just hope that Lara really is “just a friend” and Alice and Dana live happily ever after. Oh wait, then there would be no drama. Oh well, I’m still loving it and I can’t wait for the next post:) So please post soon!
I love drunk Alice!!! Thanks!
hell yeah!!! what an awsome update, like everyone else I *love* drunk Alice… can I have one? that was so good – go for it Alice, a bit of dutch courage helps things along, but I hope she remembers in the morning and I hope that things continue to work out… still don’t trust the soup chef though… hmmm, lol when you mentioned the Vaginal Rejuvenation Clinic I thought I was going to have to start this comment with “Damn Gabby Deveaux!” but no, well avoided lol :) anyways, in short – you rock, can’t wait for more :) x