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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 3
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"NO! What are you going to do about it? Not talk to me!?!" Alice said with a scrunched up face.
Dana knew what her friend was hinting at, but the look on her face was so funny, she burst out laughing. They were at Al’s apartment and so Dana got out to help her friend up to her place, still laughing as she used Alice’s key and let them in.
"Ahhh! Home sweet home." Alice said, flopping down on her couch.
"Ok. Let’s get you to bed, Al." Dana pulled Alice up off the couch and led her to her bedroom. She sat Alice down on the bed and bent down to take her shoes off. She looked up to see the writer staring intently at her with an unreadable expression on her face. Dana had been so preoccupied that she hadn’t really looked at Alice until now. She ran her eyes up and down the petite body in front of her and found herself practically drooling in the process. When she finally brought her eyes back up to the her friends, she was met by a knowing smile. ‘Shit. Busted’ Dana thought.
"Hello again." Alice said with a wink.
"You look really beautiful tonight Alice." Dana didn’t see the point in hiding the fact that she just blatantly checked her out. She was pretty sure that Alice would not remember much the next day.
"Thanks." Alice smiled.
"Well, I’ll go grab you a water and you should be set." Dana stated as she set Alice’s shoes aside. She left for the kitchen and grabbed a bottle of water that Alice had in the fridge. When she got back into the room, Alice was dressed only in her bra and underwear and pulling the covers back on her bed.
"Shit! Al. Sorry." Dana stuttered. She had to turn away quickly. The sight of a practically naked Alice was not want she needed to see if she ever hoped to get over her.
"Don’t be silly Dana. It’s not like you haven’t seen a woman in her underwear." Alice laughed. She slid under the covers and sighed at the feeling of a warm and cosy bed. "Ahhh. My bed kicks so much ass sometimes!" Alice stated.
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I knew putting my trust in you was the right thing to do. You’re Danish hart is as big as mine, it’s just I can’t write and you can. Great update and of course drunk Alice is great. My favorite line was “My bed kicks so much ass sometimes” hahaha, I was laughing so hard. I want them together as much as everybody here but I prefer Alice to be sober. She’ll probably fall a sleep on top of Dana…(nice image) Anyway, thanks for this pick-me-up and see ya next time! X
I love drunk Alice and drunk Shane.
thank you! i’ve had a crappy day too. this was great. it made me smile.
Yay!!! So glad they kissed. Too bad Alice had to be drunk at the time. But drunk Alice is pretty funny, as is drunk Shane. I liked the messing of the hair bit, very funny. Please post soon.
alice is excellent drunk or sober!! plz let them work it out
I think every story should have a silly, drunk Alice in it. I mean who wouldn’t love that. Awesome chapter. Really looking forward to an update…hopefully one that takes place right where you left off..in the bed. lol.
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AHH!! My ENTIRE long ass post got messed up I think! Dammit. Well, in short, excellent chapter my friend! It made me very happy! Loved the little Shalice moment (you know how to make me smile), and beyond perfect ending to the chapter. I hope you pick up where you left off, and that neither of our girls freak out! I want hot Danish lovin, and I want it NOW! :-) You’re fucking awesome babe!
that last part was fantastic.”i want you so bad”perfect.
Hey there! Just caught up with your last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story.. Ahh what more could a girl want! Haha. The intense Danish build up, followed with the drama gets me everytime and you have soo hit the spot with this one Suz!! LOL. Dana being the more direct one was a nice twist. Shalice rocks! Drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?” Wow, very sexy!!. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next, and are you goin to keep teasin us?. Btw, its your “dorkiness” and personality that shines thru in your stories that cracks me up so bad, and now you seem to be a poet!! LMAO, [refer to your last comment]. Post soon. Thanks.
It was a primal reaction I guess. ;) I do have faith in you when it comes to my favorite pair! :D And deep down I know it isn’t Lara’s fault at all (or whoever you decide to bring in to this story to ruin everything between them :P)…it’s just the miscommunication these two always seem to have. Drunken Alice was so adorable. :) Can’t they just be drunken all the time, that’s the only time when these two are really honest. (But mmmh, don’t know if I like them so much if they were alcoholics though…).
awwww hell yeah for Alice and Dana! Finally!!! I just hope Alice remembers it tomorrow!! Let them be happy!! CAn’t wait for the next update, it’s fabulous…you know i love your writing here suzieb…fantastic
Oh my god, you’ve actually managed to make my bad day into a fantastic one! I just hope that Lara really is “just a friend” and Alice and Dana live happily ever after. Oh wait, then there would be no drama. Oh well, I’m still loving it and I can’t wait for the next post:) So please post soon!
I love drunk Alice!!! Thanks!
hell yeah!!! what an awsome update, like everyone else I *love* drunk Alice… can I have one? that was so good – go for it Alice, a bit of dutch courage helps things along, but I hope she remembers in the morning and I hope that things continue to work out… still don’t trust the soup chef though… hmmm, lol when you mentioned the Vaginal Rejuvenation Clinic I thought I was going to have to start this comment with “Damn Gabby Deveaux!” but no, well avoided lol :) anyways, in short – you rock, can’t wait for more :) x