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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 3
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"What?" Alice asked with a half smile. Dana didn’t say anything, she just turned and led them to the door.
Once they were outside, Alice tried to get her keys out of her purse, while still holding onto Dana’s hand. Dana smiled at the fact that Alice seemed unwilling to let go of her.
"Fuck. Where are my keys?" Alice cursed.
"Al, you aren’t driving so what does it matter?"
"Why am I not driving?" Alice asked seriously.
"Well, for one thing, you are drunk off of your ass and I would rather you not crash your car and get hurt…and the other important factor is that I would also like to avoid injury. It’s scary enough riding with you when you’re sober." Dana smiled as Alice looked to be deep in thought.
"You know what, I have an idea! How about YOU drive? Yeah…that could totally work! What do you think?" Alice jumped up and down. She was so proud of her ‘idea.’
"Good call Alice! Why didn’t I think of that!?!" Dana said rolling her eyes. She led them to her Subaru and helped Alice into her seat. Alice whined as Dana had to finally let go of her hand.
"Awww….this sucks." Alice pouted.
Dana ran around the car at buckled up as she started the car. "What sucks, Al?" Dana asked. Not really caring about the answer, it just felt good to talk to her friend again. She started off towards Alice’s apartment.
"I don’t know. You have nice hands. I like to hold your hand sometimes. They are so strong but so gentle. You can crush a tennis ball, but your hands are so soft. How Do You Do It!?" Alice asked dramatically.
Dana was not liking where this conversation was heading one bit. ‘Did Alice really spend time thinking about something like that, or is she just being goofy because she’s drunk?’ Dana wondered.
"Al, you’re retarded" Dana said dryly, deciding it was safer not to go there.
"You’re retarded!" Alice responded and stuck her tongue out at her friend.
"Good one Al. Did you think of that one all by yourself?" Dana teased. She had to admit that she always had a soft spot for silly, drunk Alice.
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I knew putting my trust in you was the right thing to do. You’re Danish hart is as big as mine, it’s just I can’t write and you can. Great update and of course drunk Alice is great. My favorite line was “My bed kicks so much ass sometimes” hahaha, I was laughing so hard. I want them together as much as everybody here but I prefer Alice to be sober. She’ll probably fall a sleep on top of Dana…(nice image) Anyway, thanks for this pick-me-up and see ya next time! X
I love drunk Alice and drunk Shane.
thank you! i’ve had a crappy day too. this was great. it made me smile.
Yay!!! So glad they kissed. Too bad Alice had to be drunk at the time. But drunk Alice is pretty funny, as is drunk Shane. I liked the messing of the hair bit, very funny. Please post soon.
alice is excellent drunk or sober!! plz let them work it out
I think every story should have a silly, drunk Alice in it. I mean who wouldn’t love that. Awesome chapter. Really looking forward to an update…hopefully one that takes place right where you left off..in the bed. lol.
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AHH!! My ENTIRE long ass post got messed up I think! Dammit. Well, in short, excellent chapter my friend! It made me very happy! Loved the little Shalice moment (you know how to make me smile), and beyond perfect ending to the chapter. I hope you pick up where you left off, and that neither of our girls freak out! I want hot Danish lovin, and I want it NOW! :-) You’re fucking awesome babe!
that last part was fantastic.”i want you so bad”perfect.
Hey there! Just caught up with your last two chapters. Had an excellent weekend, then i get to read this awesome story.. Ahh what more could a girl want! Haha. The intense Danish build up, followed with the drama gets me everytime and you have soo hit the spot with this one Suz!! LOL. Dana being the more direct one was a nice twist. Shalice rocks! Drunk Alice.. “Do you want me Dana?” Wow, very sexy!!. Ooh wonder whats goin to happen next, and are you goin to keep teasin us?. Btw, its your “dorkiness” and personality that shines thru in your stories that cracks me up so bad, and now you seem to be a poet!! LMAO, [refer to your last comment]. Post soon. Thanks.
It was a primal reaction I guess. ;) I do have faith in you when it comes to my favorite pair! :D And deep down I know it isn’t Lara’s fault at all (or whoever you decide to bring in to this story to ruin everything between them :P)…it’s just the miscommunication these two always seem to have. Drunken Alice was so adorable. :) Can’t they just be drunken all the time, that’s the only time when these two are really honest. (But mmmh, don’t know if I like them so much if they were alcoholics though…).
awwww hell yeah for Alice and Dana! Finally!!! I just hope Alice remembers it tomorrow!! Let them be happy!! CAn’t wait for the next update, it’s fabulous…you know i love your writing here suzieb…fantastic
Oh my god, you’ve actually managed to make my bad day into a fantastic one! I just hope that Lara really is “just a friend” and Alice and Dana live happily ever after. Oh wait, then there would be no drama. Oh well, I’m still loving it and I can’t wait for the next post:) So please post soon!
I love drunk Alice!!! Thanks!
hell yeah!!! what an awsome update, like everyone else I *love* drunk Alice… can I have one? that was so good – go for it Alice, a bit of dutch courage helps things along, but I hope she remembers in the morning and I hope that things continue to work out… still don’t trust the soup chef though… hmmm, lol when you mentioned the Vaginal Rejuvenation Clinic I thought I was going to have to start this comment with “Damn Gabby Deveaux!” but no, well avoided lol :) anyways, in short – you rock, can’t wait for more :) x