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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 7
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When she arrived, her friends were already celebrating and well on their way to being drunk. Dana smiled fondly at them all and then began to scan the crowd for Alice.
“Hey baby. I saved the last beer for you…well actually, it’s not the last because Bette sent Shane and Alice on a beer run. So drink up! You are way behind!” Lara slurred. She leaned in and placed a sloppy kiss on the athletes lips. “Oooh. You smell good. That shower did the trick! I hate it when you are all sweaty with your veins popping everywhere…” Lara’s eyes were glazed and before Dana could even respond, the red head was off and running to the bathroom, both hands over her mouth. All the women laughed as they heard the sound of puking coming from the bathroom.
“I’ll go check on her Dana. You relax and enjoy your party.” Dana sent Tina a grateful smile as the blond made her way to the bathroom.
“I think it’s hot.” Dana spun around as Alice’s voice filled her ears.
“Huh? Wha…? What’s hot?” Dana blushed as she realized the she was stuttering.
Alice just smiled at her and winked. She started to walk away. Leaving Dana flustered and embarrassed.
“Alice, wait! What are you talking about?” Dana pleaded. She watched as the blond stopped for a moment, Alice looked over her shoulder and smiled, finally giving the athlete an answer.
“When you’re all sweaty…with the popping veins…very hot Fairbanks.” Alice winked again and walked off.
Dana watched Alice sway her hips in that sexy way she does and felt the temperature go up 10 degrees. “Fuck” she mumbled and began to chug her beer.
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Everyone was drinking and sitting by the pool when Tina came back.
“So what’s the verdict? Is the chef coming or did she party herself out?” Jenny asked.
“Oh you guys, that poor thing is gonna feel like shit and a half tomorrow!” Everyone laughed but Dana. She got up and headed for her room to check on her girlfriend. Tina caught her and pulled her aside as the others went back to their conversations.
“Dane, stay with us. She’s ok. She just needs to sleep it off. I promise.”
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Ah – such torture to stop right there… It’s going to be a long night and a long wait until the next update. Great Update!
hell yeah its gonna be a long night.
awesome. definitely looking forward to what the night may bring. thanks for posting!
Right so I don’t remember if I’ve actually commented yet but if I haven’t let me tell you that you’re rocking the shit with this story. Great job I love the comic spin you put on this story, can wait to see some Danish lovin’…there better be Danish lovin! Yes that is a threat and I do back them up lol.
Where have you been – missed you so much. What an ending to the chapter, you have left us on a cliffhanger yet again – please, please post soon – don’t leave it so long as I get withdrawal symptons, and it’s not nice!!!
I would like to have been at that tennis match…or in that pool for that matter! Only to witness such a tension between these two would make me melt. I sometimes really wonder why I could be all content after reading a Danish fic…when you (and all Danish writers in general) proceed to let nothing actually happen between the two of them.You’re such a teaser! :P Ah well, I just live for the moments that all seems to be right for Danish. :D LOL @ Dana’s reaction to Alice swaying her hips. And as for the night…they can’t deny their feelings for each other after all that has happened this evening. Luckily Lara is in a deep coma…and she will hopefully stay for it in a while. *evil grin*
My dear, dear friend. I thought that I had lost you forever! Words cannot express how HAPPY I am that you are back. When I saw you updated, I almost had a heart attack. You need to warn a girl next time before you take a break and then just randomly post. I need to prepare myself! Ha ha. But seriously, fucking awesome chapter! The tension between Danish literally gave me goosebumps. I was so hoping that they would go at it in the pool! Ha ha. They still have to get through the night together though, and I’m hoping beyond hope that there’s a little Danish lovin in the next chapter. Or are you going to make me sad and continue to keep our girls apart for a little while longer? :-( That whole tennis thing cracked me the hell up. You’re brilliant babe! Well, I just chugged two cups of coffee, and I’m on a little bit of a coffee buzz, so I’ll stop rambling. I fucking love you too, and keep up the good work! :-P
ahhhhh how evil to stop right there! lol fantastic job Suz i never lost hope that youd soon post again and what a post it was! Leave it to Jenny to ruin the danish moment! :P I cant wait to see those 2 find their way back to each other tho i hope in the next chap which i know will be posted soon! right right? lol but yeah i know its gonna be a long night for those 2 which is great :) again awesome chap I hope you dont loose yourself again because your doing a bang up job!
Oh no! Suzie the stress you put me through leaving it there…I just reread it and it’s amazing how these girls act. Cannot wait for this night that’s coming up, more interruptions perhaps…Well at least they are in the same room let’s just hope they lock it! Great update as ever and looking forward to the next one.
I’m glad that your inspiration finally came back to you.Really glad, in fact. That suspense was really starting to kill me. Flippin awsome update! Damn Jenny for ruining the pool moment though. Please update soon because I’m really looking forward to what’s going to happen during that long night!
Damn awsome chapter, although the teasing was a little mean! Ha I so thought they were going to go for it in the pool, damn my thoughts! Hope you update soon, it was great.
very nice. love all the tension and teasing.
Argh, bloody Jenny!!!!! Fan-friggin-tastic chapter. Please dont leave it so long to post again, i cant take the suspense. Great writing as always xx
Glad to see you’ve found your muse…your take on Danish, especially when it’s just the two of them, is so sweet. Now, if they can only get past their mutual fear and on with the lovin’! Please post soon.
ahhhh and i can’t wiat to see what happens!!!
I don’t know how it’s even possible that I haven’t commented on this story yet … but I am seriously loving it. You’re doing an excellent job & I can’t wait for more.