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A drawing lesson
Story written on July 6, 2011 by kins40.
She took her pose, straightening her back, lifting her head and letting her arms rest, palms up, on the low arm support of the seat. A natural elongated silhouette, perfectly positioned in space and so sensual even in its partial nudity.
The model commanded an almost imperial veneration from her now captivated audience. She was holding court and no one dared speak up.
"You may commence," came the voice from the back of the room. The voice of the art teacher startled the students out of their momentary daze.
The room became noisy again for a few awkward seconds. Students clearing their throat and coughing clumsily to distract themselves from the feeling of utter wonderment which had overcome them briefly, all the while readying their artist paraphernalia to start on the task at hand.
The girl from North Carolina, however, remained transfixed for a while as she studied the daringly gowned woman in front of her.
On the outside, the blonde looked completely unnerved but the turmoil in her head told a different story. Her head tilted slightly to the side as she admired the vision in front of her. Her eyes focused softly as she did so and the tempo of her heart increased.
Many wealthy men have paid high prices to commission artwork depicting women with lips less lush, bones less graceful than the glorious creature up on that stage. Kings would have no doubt given up their Empire for a taste of those sugared currants tainted lips.
Her large brown eyes were gentle if not a little self conscious, her nose was straight and fine, her long, lustrous chestnut brown hair was soft-curled but yielding, thick enough to loose your fingers in.
But the blonde’s eyes were drawn to the healthy golden brown tint of her skin. She knew already that human skin tones were a whole colour palette unto themselves but the beauty across from her was an entirely new spectrum of colours.
She studied with amazement the even toned skin, smooth and elegant like priceless silk. Her skin was glowingly luminous. The natural light falling from the window above her made her skin shimmer in an array of warmly seductive shades.
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hahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! coco chanel you said it all.And Bette Porter greeted Tina Kennard. What happened next??? we can imagine, can’t we? Thank you.
another amazing storykins, please keep them coming x
omg you could easily make this a multi-chapter story you are an amazing writer i really love reading your stuff. i’m adding you to my fave authors list right now! lol
Kins you and your imagination are spectacularly AWESOME. Loved this story. You do know what you are doing to us, right? You give us three pages blood pressure raising description of a beautiful, seductive, doe-eyed woman, then you introduce them leaving us wanting more and so bereft that we will not have another chapter of this wonderful encounter. What a wonderful introduction to a great love story. I guess I will have to make up my owm story. It was fantastic. Thanks for sharing.
Wow..great start from one of my favorite writers! You already have me hooked!
A lovely story, beautifully written.
You never disappoint Kins. I always get so drawn into your stories; they are so visual. You’re an amazing talent and so versatile which makes it even better because we never know what to expect with every new post. Thank you for sharing another wonderful B&T moment.
HMMMMM… As usual lately I’m left to my own imagination. But can I just say wow… She owns the art school; awesome. Bette will be Tina’s muse. Yes the countdown has begun. So much to do so little time. C x
If English is not your first language, what is? Romance? Again, that was a great story.
AWESOME, LOVE IT
Wow…I’m always in awe of your story. I know it’s a cliche…but it’s… Awesome!!!
What a wonderfully written story. Just birlliantly amazing. Thank you.
Excellent.Thank you.PPS
C’est magnifique! Hands, lips, neck and shoulders…the suspense is killing me. What’s next?I shall leave now on Cloud 9 to work on your next top 2. I trust it is no longer crowded and there’s plenty of room for creativity?
that was really marvelous!very descriptive, I like ur writing, and can’t wait to read more of ur work, thank u ;D
Beauuuuuuuutiful, mon bichon!!!!! Wow, wow, and wow again!! Sorry for getting to this marvelous reading that late, but as you know, me and my bed had a very late (or early) reunion, and it took me a while to start this new day… Anyway, I really have to say: you literally do magic with your words!!! Your writing is absolutely amazing! What a wonderful tribute to the English language! I loved it all, especially when it came to BP’s perfect anatomy, but I must point out the part about the perfume. I don’t think anyone could have talked about perfume in a better way! Wow… So well described, and so vivid! I’m pretty sure your words will come to my mind the next time I put on perfume or even hug a friend hello. That was perfect! And I loved the end and the fact that Bette was posing as a model in her own school… Brilliant! Again… Love the way you use those words of yours! Thanks a lot for this chapter, and chapeau bas to my favorite partner!!! B&H, Kw
OMG Kins! You always do know how to captured me in your writing!! And I always feel so disappointed when see the end of the story as i can’t believe it’s no more…!! excuse me but really too short!! Or maybe I just simply too greedy :-p lol can’t blame me for knowing how to appreciate good stuff eh!? :-D ha3 ok2 stop counting as I knew at least there’ll be another 2 stories in relation to the list ;-) I assume the upper part of face, neck and shoulders is one entity. ^^, he3…
What an amazing introduction to what will no doubt be a great lovestory. I love your one-offs, but I really wish they were all two-offs or three-offs or…
Your words are captivating,just brilliant