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A drawing lesson
Story written on July 6, 2011 by kins40.
With touches of pecan and walnut, her ethnicity felt as spicy as cinnamon. Parts of her were honey, parts of her were copper and some of her was gold with burnishings of bronze.
As her eyes wandered along the arms of the brunette she likened the faintly apparent veins under the delicate skin of the inside of her arms to muted emeralds under raw sienna.
Only the glancing touch of the sun could produce such intense colouring.
Her face was warm and almost autumnal in shade as the artist noticed the slight blushing of the model, as realisation set in, of the intense scrutiny she was now under.
There were probably half a million women in the world with similar features but half a million is not so many measured against the whole world. In the aspiring art student’s eyes, she may as well have been unique.
The blonde lifted her pencil with her right hand and casting an unapologetic scrutinising glance over towards the stage, she began drawing.
Her hand was light as it glided over the untouched surface of the paper. The graphite pencil was just floating over the smooth surface almost scared to engrave it.
She brushed the graphite over the paper marking the contour of the lean upper body careful to remain true to the splendid aesthetic of the brunette’s neck and shoulders.
She was deft and precise, her experience as a gifted artist serving her right in rendering a true resemblance of the model in front of her.
She studied the line of her shoulders. Beautifully sculpted and wide, the sitter held herself tall and proud giving her demeanour instant confidence, vitality and undeniable allure.
Those shoulders were a testament to a superb "heritage" never having been allowed to be diluted by undeserving genes.
The artist’s eyes followed the outline which formed the top of the shoulders and let her eyes descent over the roundness of the top of each shoulder.
The underlying muscle had been allowed to develop sufficiently enough to form a beautiful half circle at the top of each arm.
In turn, it delimited the start of a naturally developed triceps which meant, in short, she had exquisitely defined and toned upper arms.
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hahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! coco chanel you said it all.And Bette Porter greeted Tina Kennard. What happened next??? we can imagine, can’t we? Thank you.
another amazing storykins, please keep them coming x
omg you could easily make this a multi-chapter story you are an amazing writer i really love reading your stuff. i’m adding you to my fave authors list right now! lol
Kins you and your imagination are spectacularly AWESOME. Loved this story. You do know what you are doing to us, right? You give us three pages blood pressure raising description of a beautiful, seductive, doe-eyed woman, then you introduce them leaving us wanting more and so bereft that we will not have another chapter of this wonderful encounter. What a wonderful introduction to a great love story. I guess I will have to make up my owm story. It was fantastic. Thanks for sharing.
Wow..great start from one of my favorite writers! You already have me hooked!
A lovely story, beautifully written.
You never disappoint Kins. I always get so drawn into your stories; they are so visual. You’re an amazing talent and so versatile which makes it even better because we never know what to expect with every new post. Thank you for sharing another wonderful B&T moment.
HMMMMM… As usual lately I’m left to my own imagination. But can I just say wow… She owns the art school; awesome. Bette will be Tina’s muse. Yes the countdown has begun. So much to do so little time. C x
If English is not your first language, what is? Romance? Again, that was a great story.
AWESOME, LOVE IT
Wow…I’m always in awe of your story. I know it’s a cliche…but it’s… Awesome!!!
What a wonderfully written story. Just birlliantly amazing. Thank you.
Excellent.Thank you.PPS
C’est magnifique! Hands, lips, neck and shoulders…the suspense is killing me. What’s next?I shall leave now on Cloud 9 to work on your next top 2. I trust it is no longer crowded and there’s plenty of room for creativity?
that was really marvelous!very descriptive, I like ur writing, and can’t wait to read more of ur work, thank u ;D
Beauuuuuuuutiful, mon bichon!!!!! Wow, wow, and wow again!! Sorry for getting to this marvelous reading that late, but as you know, me and my bed had a very late (or early) reunion, and it took me a while to start this new day… Anyway, I really have to say: you literally do magic with your words!!! Your writing is absolutely amazing! What a wonderful tribute to the English language! I loved it all, especially when it came to BP’s perfect anatomy, but I must point out the part about the perfume. I don’t think anyone could have talked about perfume in a better way! Wow… So well described, and so vivid! I’m pretty sure your words will come to my mind the next time I put on perfume or even hug a friend hello. That was perfect! And I loved the end and the fact that Bette was posing as a model in her own school… Brilliant! Again… Love the way you use those words of yours! Thanks a lot for this chapter, and chapeau bas to my favorite partner!!! B&H, Kw
OMG Kins! You always do know how to captured me in your writing!! And I always feel so disappointed when see the end of the story as i can’t believe it’s no more…!! excuse me but really too short!! Or maybe I just simply too greedy :-p lol can’t blame me for knowing how to appreciate good stuff eh!? :-D ha3 ok2 stop counting as I knew at least there’ll be another 2 stories in relation to the list ;-) I assume the upper part of face, neck and shoulders is one entity. ^^, he3…
What an amazing introduction to what will no doubt be a great lovestory. I love your one-offs, but I really wish they were all two-offs or three-offs or…
Your words are captivating,just brilliant