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    A Thin Line – Chpt 9

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – And the date rolls along

    I caressed her cheeks with both my hands. “I’m sure it’s quite burdensome at times. I’m sorry. I truly am,” I tried to reassure her.

    “I forgive you,” Helena said.

    I wrapped my hands around the sides of her face and kissed her softly. Pulling back just slightly, I breathed into her mouth, “Thank you.”

    Hungrily, without warning, Helena grabbed my lips with hers and kissed me passionately. Her tongue was in my mouth, fighting with mine. My arms were clasped behind her head pulling her closer. Helena’s arms were wrapped around me, her hands running wildly up and down my back. I was becoming more excited every second. The throbbing between my legs began. And my heart started to pound.

    Removing her arms from me, Helena pulled away from my mouth and stepped back. She stood looking me in the eyes, with both hands in front of her robe. I glanced down as she began to untie the loose knot around her gown. My heart pounded harder. She threw the ends of her sash to each side and, with both hands, slowly peeled back the silk cloth that had kept her concealed. Holding out her arms, she exposed me to her breathtaking beauty. I wanted to lick her from head to toe, and back again, making strategic stops along the way.

    Helena slowly stepped towards me, never taking her eyes from mine. Her mouth reached to grab my lips as she clutched the lapels of my robe, and pulled me to her. I felt her tongue play with mine. Her hands wandered to the loose knot on my belt, stopping along the way to feel my breasts over the cloth. She kissed me long and hard, and we both moaned. I was wet, and wanted her to taste me. Her tongue in my mouth was divine. But her tongue between my legs would be pure bliss.

    Successfully opening my belt, she swept both of her hands under the flaps of cloth and drew them back. Both of our fronts were naked, and Helena pressed herself into me. Swaying back and forth against me, our nipples brushing each other’s breasts, she took my hand and placed it between her legs.

    “Feel how much I want you?” she asked.

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    2. Zheese, I can’t find the right words to tell you how perfect this was! It has to be the most brilliant chapter I’ve read here, I loved the dialogue, the flirting, the foreplay… from the very first word to the last one, this chapter was sheer perfection. I loved it and … gosh, that was superb. Thank you for writing and posting this, can’t wait to read your next chapter.

    4. wow! that was truly amazing, you’re writing is just incredible; the descriptions, the dialogue, the way you express each character, all of it is just fantastic. eagerly awaiting you’re next chapter. thank you.

    6. Great job with the story. Their motives are a bit more clear with your thoughtful explanation, and crisp dialogue. I look forward to many more chapters of this story.

    7. Zheese, you’re doing a great job with the Bette and Helena story line. This was one hot date and some time to get to know each other as well. Keep the date rolling!

    9. Another perfect chapter! Starting off sweet, rounding about with a bit of heartwrenching confession from Helena(nice working the Provocations thing in, that was utter genius) and of course the sexy, beautiful display at the end. This was a wonderful chapter. I was sad when I reached the end. Really, can’t wait for more of this!!! Hope you are well, also. :) Wow, I am just so in awe of this chapter. Que Bonita! Ah, well, with that in mind, I will wait patiently for the next.

    11. OMG, fantastic. I would love nothing more than to see B&T back together,but Tina is digging such a deep ditch I’m not sure if thats possible. The idea of Helena and Bette is one I have decided would not be a bad match up, and this story proves it. Damn, keep it comin.

    14. I hope Bette’s feeling less confused by now. Even if she isn’t, I’m glad it’s not proving to be such a hindrance. Perhaps some of that exotic nakedness helped clear things up. Seriously, zheese, you did expose some serious motivation (rather more than IC) along with some serious flesh. As was pointed out, the night is still young, and looking forward to the next installment.

    15. Zheese…You definitely have a talent in writing NC-17s. They are very difficult to do w/o appearing trite or crude. Your imagination and phrasing are as delicious and erotic as this lovely couple. You write in a confident manner creating this wonderful tension between B & H.

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