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    A Thin Line – Chpt 9

    Story written on April 15, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – And the date rolls along

    I gently rubbed her swollen clit with her moisture. She moaned and rolled one of my nipples into her mouth, then the other, and sucked and blew against them.

    “Fuck, Helena!” I whispered, writhing excitedly at the lapping of her tongue around my hardened nipples.


    “Will you?” she murmured, looking up into my eyes.

    “Will I what?” I asked softly.

    “Make love with me. Go to bed with me, and stay the night,” Helena whispered.

    As I continued to stroke her gently between her legs, I said, “I want my mouth, my tongue, and my hands to explore every inch of your body.”

    Slowly, I removed my hand from the wet juncture of her legs.

    “Please don’t stop, Bette, please,” Helena’s eyes were closed as she begged.

    “I want my tongue there,” I said.

    “Oh, God, let’s go to bed now. I can’t take it any longer. Bette, make me come,” Helena growled, taking me by the hand and whisking me away to her bedroom, our gowns flapping in the breeze.

    *******************

    Reaching my bedroom door, I still clasped Bette’s hand in mine. With the other hand I turned the knob to make our entrance. The pillar candles I’d lit earlier, when I’d changed from my wet clothes, were still burning, the flames dancing in the surrounding darkness when I opened the door. I turned to look at Bette. To see her reaction. Her eyes were wide. She wore an astonished expression on her face, her mouth just slightly agape.

    She looked at me and smiled. Then she stepped in the room with me and took me in her arms.

    “This is wonderful. You were pretty confident I’d see this room tonight, weren’t you?” Bette asked.

    I rubbed her ass. “I was hoping. And even if not, it’s a nice ambiance to walk into,” I said softly.

    “Mmm. It is,” Bette said rubbing her body against me.

    I moved away from her, but reached for her hand, as I walked towards the bed. Standing along the edge, I pulled the sheets back, then faced my desired one again. She smiled. I removed the flowing garment she wore from her shoulders and let it fall to the floor. I ran my hands down her front and back up across her breasts. Bette closed her eyes and lay her head back. I watched her. I loved the expression of delight on her face.

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    2. Zheese, I can’t find the right words to tell you how perfect this was! It has to be the most brilliant chapter I’ve read here, I loved the dialogue, the flirting, the foreplay… from the very first word to the last one, this chapter was sheer perfection. I loved it and … gosh, that was superb. Thank you for writing and posting this, can’t wait to read your next chapter.

    4. wow! that was truly amazing, you’re writing is just incredible; the descriptions, the dialogue, the way you express each character, all of it is just fantastic. eagerly awaiting you’re next chapter. thank you.

    6. Great job with the story. Their motives are a bit more clear with your thoughtful explanation, and crisp dialogue. I look forward to many more chapters of this story.

    7. Zheese, you’re doing a great job with the Bette and Helena story line. This was one hot date and some time to get to know each other as well. Keep the date rolling!

    9. Another perfect chapter! Starting off sweet, rounding about with a bit of heartwrenching confession from Helena(nice working the Provocations thing in, that was utter genius) and of course the sexy, beautiful display at the end. This was a wonderful chapter. I was sad when I reached the end. Really, can’t wait for more of this!!! Hope you are well, also. :) Wow, I am just so in awe of this chapter. Que Bonita! Ah, well, with that in mind, I will wait patiently for the next.

    11. OMG, fantastic. I would love nothing more than to see B&T back together,but Tina is digging such a deep ditch I’m not sure if thats possible. The idea of Helena and Bette is one I have decided would not be a bad match up, and this story proves it. Damn, keep it comin.

    14. I hope Bette’s feeling less confused by now. Even if she isn’t, I’m glad it’s not proving to be such a hindrance. Perhaps some of that exotic nakedness helped clear things up. Seriously, zheese, you did expose some serious motivation (rather more than IC) along with some serious flesh. As was pointed out, the night is still young, and looking forward to the next installment.

    15. Zheese…You definitely have a talent in writing NC-17s. They are very difficult to do w/o appearing trite or crude. Your imagination and phrasing are as delicious and erotic as this lovely couple. You write in a confident manner creating this wonderful tension between B & H.

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