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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 11b
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Bette couldn’t speak let alone squeak. Her legs had turned to Jelly, and she wasn’t entirely sure she could stand even if she wanted to
“ONE”
Tina called out, languidly stretching her body out in front of her, her arms outstretched, and her face inches from the floor.
“TWO”
Tina snapped her head up quickly, hungrily taking in Bette before her, and letting her mouth open slowly, she let out a series of small miouws
Bette watched mesmerised as she shimmied back across the floor away from Tina, Stopping suddenly as her back came into contact with the cool smooth feel of the wooden cabinets against the wall.
She waited breathless with anticipation for Tina’s next move.
“THREE”
Tina let out a low deep roar, before bringing her jaws together in a seductive biting motion. Tina felt an urgency to reach Bette’s side as the eroticism of the moment started to drive her wild with want. Suddenly the game took on a whole new slant
She slowly and deliberately crawled towards Bette, her ***** swaying sexily in the air.
Bette watched Tina approach, her expression taking on that of a rabbit caught in headlights, hypnotised by Tina’s ***** which were swaying like pendulums left and right as she moved slowly and deliberately towards her.
She could feel her arousal coating her inner thighs. She let out a small gasp as she realised that this had been what she had craved for so long. An equal. Someone who wasn’t content to let Bette always call the shots, someone who wasn’t intimidated by her beauty or brains, someonesomeone who could make her feel safe even when she was in her most vulnerable state.
Tina slowed as she reached Bette’s feet, “Just relax, Bette,” Tina whispered, reassuring the flushed brunette. “You want to please me don’t you?”
“God yes!” replied Bette, desperately needing to feel the beautiful blond temptresses lips against her own.
“Then lay down and let go. I want you to let everything go. Give yourself to me.”
Biting her lip, Bette hesitated for a moment, then slowly felt her self relax, as she obeyed Tina’s order.
Placing her hands either side of Bette’s knees, Tina ran her tongue firmly up the inside of Bette’s left calf, arching her back as she reached the crook of her knee. Tina lifted her head until her eyes came into contact Bette’s. “Mmmmmmmm” She said, “Tasty!”
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Stunned and amazing great post!!!!!!!!
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
TB girl that was fucking hot. You know I was good with the first one. I did notice it was different but I thought it was cause you had never did a NC-17. But this********* I can’t find the words.
So hmm I might like you kissing my ass, nice soft lips, ok lets get my mind out of the gutter. LOL
But if you ever disappear again I will hunt you down cause I’m a leo so that makes me a lion.RAWWWWW
Can’t wait for the next one, all I can say is scar twin keep up this awesome writing that your doing. I waiting
K
WOW, that was one of the hottest chaps I have ever read. Perfect! Love this story, don’t stay away so long. Can’t wait for more.
Thanks, I really enjoy reading this story..keep it up pls…
“The best writing is rewriting.” — E. B. White
Hey, tbsaver! Please never apologize for wanting to make your work the best it can be. You have the right to alter your work until you’re satisfied with the final product and wholeheartedly proud to call it your own. Kudos to you for expecting the best from yourself. Amazing revision. I also enjoyed the previous version, but I agree with you that manifesting Bette and Tina’s emotions made their connection even more special. Thanks for all your hard work!
“and no matter how much you squeak…………I decide how we play the game! Understand? – YIKES!!!
Glad to see that I am not the only one stuttering around here. I can now say that I have at least one thing in common with Bette!
You were right, by the way. The first chapter 11 was wonderful, but this one is definitely true to your story. No matter how vivid a sex scene is written…the build up, the sensualness of the actual act in itself, is so much more fulfilling when we can share in the emotions and thoughts of the characters. One of the reasons I think that reading a well written sex scene is much more of a turn on, than watching it on screen. Thank you for this shot of adrenaline before bed!! :)
Great chapter T.B. I love this story and miss you when you were away. This is the first B/T story that I have read where they are pretty much equals from the onset (They are both already lesbians and neither one is turning the other out.), and have thier own strong sexual histories. I would love to see what happens when Bette gets Tina back to the USA and introduce her to the gang. What will be thier reaction to someone who truly tamed the PORTER. Please continue.
I love Tina the hunter :-) I really enjoyed the first chap 11 but this one is even better.
Wow, what a rewrite. This was intense in it’s intensity! Your words were so vivid–what a nice fantasy sequence for the show it would be!!!
11 was wonderful… but OMG 11b was WOW & amazing … you know I’m hooked THANK YOU!!!
Damn so hot and sexy,love it. Post soon, thanks!