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    A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 23

    Story written on August 21, 2005 by tbsaver.
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    A Picture paints a thousand words

    Vual laughed once again, at the look on Bette’s face. “You are shocked because I have guessed, or because men are not usually so smart?” He asked. He shrugged his shoulders nonchalantly. “It is obvious how much you care for each other. I would have to be blind not to see it! Just promise me that you will make her happy”

    Bette looked down at her hands, sighing deeply. “I don’t think I can make that promise, she said forlornly. “I think I have already broken it. We argued this morning when Tina told me that she wasn’t coming with me to the airport.”

    Vual stopped the Land Rover, and looked over at Bette. “Tina asked me not to give this to you until we had arrived at the airport. Maybe it would be better if you received it now.”

    Vual reached behind the front seats to retrieve a 12″ long tubular case. It was made of Metal, with a thick skin of leather covering it. It was battered and dented, the leather scuffed and faded in parts, and was obviously well used. Bette looked at Vual inquisitively. “It is a present for you” he explained.

    Bette took the case from Vuals grasp, and slowly opened up the leather buckle at the top. She pulled the lid of the holder up, removing it completely. Inside the holder was a rolled up canvas, lovingly tied with a red ribbon. Tucked inside the ribbon was an envelope, which Bette slid from her surprise gift. As she looked, she couldn’t help but notice the delicate artistic writing on the front. “Read this before opening”

    Bette opened up the sealed envelope, and removed an A5 piece of paper.

    My Darling Bette,

    I have never been good with words. I have always relied on my work to speak for me.

    Please forgive me for not having the strength to say goodbye to you.

    You already have my heart, and in a month the rest of me will follow.

    Until then I will miss you more than I can say.

    Tina

     

    Bette took the one end of the red ribbon between her thumb and forefinger, and carefully pulled, slowly untying the bow. She took the ribbon and put it carefully into her top pocket before slowly unfurling the canvas.

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    1. Haven’t read this yet so I can’t comment on this chapter yet… but I’m definately noticing a pattern of posting in the middle of the night!!! LOL

      I’m sure its another great chapter .. I’ll be back! (original comment here…huh?)LOL

    4. Oh so sweet…. I just love reading about women in love. How does one ever explain the depth of a feeling between two women….there are no words to express that but…you do a damn fine job of coming close.

    5. Damn T can you get any more mushy?? LOL
      And how come there wasn’t any live animals in this chapter?? When Bette gets back to LA she better go to the zoo or something. LOL harold and kumar, you should see that movie when your high one night it’s fucking funny.

    6. CROO only if your high. its not funny if your not. lol. thats one way to say airport good byes. i like your way much better. ;). you dont need to apologize. you post when you can. i mean of course, wed love more, but whats a girl to do. I.Love.This.Story. it just makes me smile. thanks girl.

    8. Damn beautiful and amazing and so sweet, love what Bette and Tina have for each other and they love so strong and glad they talk and work it out. Ok please post soon, thanks!

    9. Love this so glad Bette when back, Tina was waiting. Will Tina take a month to get to the USA. Bette will be a crazy woman without Tina, but she will have Tina present to remember her happy days with her .

    10. Your writing touches my heart…my soul. And, every time I finish reading a new chapter, I feel like I am stepping out of your incredible painting, back into real life…can’t I just stay in the painting for a little while longer?

    12. WOW AMAZING chapter…I could almost swear I’m a fly on the window of the Land Rover just watching this unfold.

      I guess I just love the sappy stuff. Post when you can I know it will be incredible … this one was definately worth the wait!!!!

      THANK YOU!

    13. Yay I’m caught up! Awesome chapter, tbsaver. Sorry for not responding but I’ve been on vacation. No worries, I went back and commented on each one. :) Thank you for letting Bette and Tina have a proper good-bye, and thanks for not giving us a cliff-hanger!

    19. Now that’s the kind of good-bye that just makes me sappy. Glad that Vual gave Bette the present. He’s one smart guy. Thank goodness they have him looking out for both of their best interests.

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