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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 23
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As Bette slowly began to roll out the canvas on her lap, a picture started to form, each partial turn of it revealing more and more of the vision. She saw the waters edge of the watering hole before her, realising that the picture was painted as if Tina was standing thigh deep in the clear water. Ahead of her was the first of the pride of lions they had watched relocate. She could see two lionesses sat upright, scouring the savannah intently watching out for any unexpected meal opportunities, beside the second lioness was a cub, jumping up at his mother, trying unsuccessfully to nip her ear to attract her attention. As she unrolled further she saw a mother standing side on, cleaning one of the two magnificent lions, by licking in long strokes down the length of his golden mane.
Bette couldn’t contain the giggle at the sight of the second male, lying on the ground, his mouth open mid roar, and his paw swiping half heartedly at the two cubs playing by his side, their boisterous fighting disturbing him from his sleep.
Her eyes roved the painting lovingly as she unfurled the picture further piece by piece as if putting together a jigsaw. Suddenly there sat a Land Rover in the background. Tina’s Land Rover.
Bette paused holding her breath, already knowing what the next roll of the canvas would uncover. She rolled fraction by fraction to reveal herself in the middle of this scene, her face full of joyous wonder, reminding her of the photograph she had seen the previous evening. Oh my god she thought. That’s why Tina had taken all of those pictures, she thought. The tears escaped her then, rolling unnoticed down her face. She knew the beautiful blonde who had captured her heart would be sat right next to her, and as she rolled the canvas one more time there she was, but not watching the scene before them as Bette expected. She was watching Bette, her body leaning toward her, the honey gold glints in her hair emphasised in the bright sun. Suddenly Bette had the answeer she had so desperately searched for, there it was staring her straight in the face. Tina’s expression of loving tenderness told Bette everything she needed to know about the blondes feelings for her.
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Haven’t read this yet so I can’t comment on this chapter yet… but I’m definately noticing a pattern of posting in the middle of the night!!! LOL
I’m sure its another great chapter .. I’ll be back! (original comment here…huh?)LOL
rb..I do love your story. If it takes a week for another post..I will be here waiting.
You did good!
Oh so sweet…. I just love reading about women in love. How does one ever explain the depth of a feeling between two women….there are no words to express that but…you do a damn fine job of coming close.
Damn T can you get any more mushy?? LOL
And how come there wasn’t any live animals in this chapter?? When Bette gets back to LA she better go to the zoo or something. LOL harold and kumar, you should see that movie when your high one night it’s fucking funny.
CROO only if your high. its not funny if your not. lol. thats one way to say airport good byes. i like your way much better. ;). you dont need to apologize. you post when you can. i mean of course, wed love more, but whats a girl to do. I.Love.This.Story. it just makes me smile. thanks girl.
Ah, I have a big, goofy grin on my face after reading this. So worth the wait!
yay!
Damn beautiful and amazing and so sweet, love what Bette and Tina have for each other and they love so strong and glad they talk and work it out. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Love this so glad Bette when back, Tina was waiting. Will Tina take a month to get to the USA. Bette will be a crazy woman without Tina, but she will have Tina present to remember her happy days with her .
Your writing touches my heart…my soul. And, every time I finish reading a new chapter, I feel like I am stepping out of your incredible painting, back into real life…can’t I just stay in the painting for a little while longer?
I so love your story.
WOW AMAZING chapter…I could almost swear I’m a fly on the window of the Land Rover just watching this unfold.
I guess I just love the sappy stuff. Post when you can I know it will be incredible … this one was definately worth the wait!!!!
THANK YOU!
Yay I’m caught up! Awesome chapter, tbsaver. Sorry for not responding but I’ve been on vacation. No worries, I went back and commented on each one. :) Thank you for letting Bette and Tina have a proper good-bye, and thanks for not giving us a cliff-hanger!
i really love the story, pls post more..mabuhay ka bete n tina!
I really like your storytelling. Please continue. Thanks.
Great chapter! I loved the discription painting (I was close to picking it =)
awesome…! pls do post soon…
Hey TB you are safe for now…that left me all warm and fuzzy…so very sweet.
Thank you.
Now that’s the kind of good-bye that just makes me sappy. Glad that Vual gave Bette the present. He’s one smart guy. Thank goodness they have him looking out for both of their best interests.