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    A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 23

    Story written on August 21, 2005 by tbsaver.
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    A Picture paints a thousand words

    Vual bought the Land Rover to a halt, and checking to make sure that Bette had made her decision, sighed and turned the vehicle around to find the glinting object Bette had spotted. Vual drove much slower looking all around him, trying to see anything out of the usual.

    As they rounded the small outcrop of bushes ahead of them, they saw it. A vehicle ahead of them in the distance, it’s far back wheel seemingly higher up than the rest of the vehicle. Bette felt the sick feeling in her stomach intensify as the vehicle slowly came into focus through the heat haze. Her face registering the shock and fear she felt as she realised that it was the same vehicle as the one depicted in the painting she had viewed just a few short minutes ago.

    “Oh my god!” she exclaimed “It’s Tina. Vual, It’s Tina.” Panic in her voice now, Bette screamed for Vual to go faster, praying that she was ok. It’s my fault she thought disconsolately. If anything has happened to her it’s my fault.

    She looked over at Vual, noticing the hard lines on his face as he frowned worriedly.

    He bought the car to a screeching halt, alongside the disabled vehicle, and even before they had reached a full stop, Bette had flung open the passenger door, and was running toward the side window to peer inside. What she saw made her panic even more. Or rather what she didn’t see. Where was Tina? She couldn’t see her. Turning round and round, Looking for any sign of life, Bette frantically screamed out Tina’s name.

    Bette ran round the Land Rover to the other side, and looked out across the rocks, hoping against hope to find her love out there.somewhere. A sob escaped her throat as she contemplated the unthinkable. That she had lost her, truly lost her.

    “Baby?” She heard faintly behind her. She spun around, to find Tina sat on the floor, her back against the Land Rover, a wheel laid flat on the ground by her side.

    “Oh My god!” She screamed. “Tina, Baby” She ran over to the stricken blonde, brushing her hair out of her face, noting the dried tear tracks on her flushed cheeks. “Baby are you ok?” She asked desperately looking for signs of injury.

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    1. Haven’t read this yet so I can’t comment on this chapter yet… but I’m definately noticing a pattern of posting in the middle of the night!!! LOL

      I’m sure its another great chapter .. I’ll be back! (original comment here…huh?)LOL

    4. Oh so sweet…. I just love reading about women in love. How does one ever explain the depth of a feeling between two women….there are no words to express that but…you do a damn fine job of coming close.

    5. Damn T can you get any more mushy?? LOL
      And how come there wasn’t any live animals in this chapter?? When Bette gets back to LA she better go to the zoo or something. LOL harold and kumar, you should see that movie when your high one night it’s fucking funny.

    6. CROO only if your high. its not funny if your not. lol. thats one way to say airport good byes. i like your way much better. ;). you dont need to apologize. you post when you can. i mean of course, wed love more, but whats a girl to do. I.Love.This.Story. it just makes me smile. thanks girl.

    8. Damn beautiful and amazing and so sweet, love what Bette and Tina have for each other and they love so strong and glad they talk and work it out. Ok please post soon, thanks!

    9. Love this so glad Bette when back, Tina was waiting. Will Tina take a month to get to the USA. Bette will be a crazy woman without Tina, but she will have Tina present to remember her happy days with her .

    10. Your writing touches my heart…my soul. And, every time I finish reading a new chapter, I feel like I am stepping out of your incredible painting, back into real life…can’t I just stay in the painting for a little while longer?

    12. WOW AMAZING chapter…I could almost swear I’m a fly on the window of the Land Rover just watching this unfold.

      I guess I just love the sappy stuff. Post when you can I know it will be incredible … this one was definately worth the wait!!!!

      THANK YOU!

    13. Yay I’m caught up! Awesome chapter, tbsaver. Sorry for not responding but I’ve been on vacation. No worries, I went back and commented on each one. :) Thank you for letting Bette and Tina have a proper good-bye, and thanks for not giving us a cliff-hanger!

    19. Now that’s the kind of good-bye that just makes me sappy. Glad that Vual gave Bette the present. He’s one smart guy. Thank goodness they have him looking out for both of their best interests.

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