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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 23
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“Vual?” Bette whispered
“You want we should turn round” Vual stated. “Good. You do the right thing.”
Vual turned full circle taking the Land Rover back toward the compound swiftly. “You know you will not have long with her, if I am to get you to the airport for your flight?” Vual enquired.
“I don’t need much time” Bette responded. “I just have to see her. Please hurry.”
“It would be better for you to use the seatbelt” Vual said matter of factly. “It’s about to get bumpy!”
The Land Rover flew across the rough terrain, each pothole, jarring the passengers as they jumped and slid around in their seats.
Bette stared unseeingly out of the passenger window, her mind deep in thought. How could I have been so stupid she thought desperately. I cannot leave without seeing her one more time, without apologising for being such an *****. She watched the scenery blur around them by as they flew toward their destination.
Suddenly a blinding flash of reflected sunlight forced her to shut her eyes abruptly. She squinted painfully, trying to figure out what she had just seen. As the truck sped along she looked behind her just making out something a box like shape through the heat haze. For some reason she couldn’t understand she felt a sick feeling in the pit of her stomach. “what was that?” She asked
“What?” Vual replied looking around him, but seeing nothing.
“I saw something” Bette replied. “Back there, past the bushes. Just by the rocks.”
“An animal?” Vual asked. “This time of year it could be anything. What colour was it, did you see?”
“No” Bette replied impatiently. “It wasn’t an animal. The sun was glinting off it, it looked more like a lookout hide or something.”
“It couldn’t have been a hide.” Vual said. “It is in the wrong place.”
Bette couldn’t contain the feeling of foreboding she was feeling. Torn between her race to reach Tina’s side, and the increasing feeling that something was wrong behind them she grabbed Vuals arm. “Turn around” She commanded forcefully.
“We do not have time.” Vual replied. You can see Tina, or we can turn around. We do not have time for both.”
Bette bit her lip, hoping against hope that she was doing the right thing. “Vual, I can’t explain it but I have a bad feeling about what ever it was I saw. Please? I need for us to go back.”
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Haven’t read this yet so I can’t comment on this chapter yet… but I’m definately noticing a pattern of posting in the middle of the night!!! LOL
I’m sure its another great chapter .. I’ll be back! (original comment here…huh?)LOL
rb..I do love your story. If it takes a week for another post..I will be here waiting.
You did good!
Oh so sweet…. I just love reading about women in love. How does one ever explain the depth of a feeling between two women….there are no words to express that but…you do a damn fine job of coming close.
Damn T can you get any more mushy?? LOL
And how come there wasn’t any live animals in this chapter?? When Bette gets back to LA she better go to the zoo or something. LOL harold and kumar, you should see that movie when your high one night it’s fucking funny.
CROO only if your high. its not funny if your not. lol. thats one way to say airport good byes. i like your way much better. ;). you dont need to apologize. you post when you can. i mean of course, wed love more, but whats a girl to do. I.Love.This.Story. it just makes me smile. thanks girl.
Ah, I have a big, goofy grin on my face after reading this. So worth the wait!
yay!
Damn beautiful and amazing and so sweet, love what Bette and Tina have for each other and they love so strong and glad they talk and work it out. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Love this so glad Bette when back, Tina was waiting. Will Tina take a month to get to the USA. Bette will be a crazy woman without Tina, but she will have Tina present to remember her happy days with her .
Your writing touches my heart…my soul. And, every time I finish reading a new chapter, I feel like I am stepping out of your incredible painting, back into real life…can’t I just stay in the painting for a little while longer?
I so love your story.
WOW AMAZING chapter…I could almost swear I’m a fly on the window of the Land Rover just watching this unfold.
I guess I just love the sappy stuff. Post when you can I know it will be incredible … this one was definately worth the wait!!!!
THANK YOU!
Yay I’m caught up! Awesome chapter, tbsaver. Sorry for not responding but I’ve been on vacation. No worries, I went back and commented on each one. :) Thank you for letting Bette and Tina have a proper good-bye, and thanks for not giving us a cliff-hanger!
i really love the story, pls post more..mabuhay ka bete n tina!
I really like your storytelling. Please continue. Thanks.
Great chapter! I loved the discription painting (I was close to picking it =)
awesome…! pls do post soon…
Hey TB you are safe for now…that left me all warm and fuzzy…so very sweet.
Thank you.
Now that’s the kind of good-bye that just makes me sappy. Glad that Vual gave Bette the present. He’s one smart guy. Thank goodness they have him looking out for both of their best interests.