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After the Kiss: Chapters 10 to 13 A Dream
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Tina’s dad – Besides … your mother worked hard all her life long and she is fine.
Tina can hardly breathe. For the first time in her life, she is boldly – even if covertly – flirting with a woman. In public! In front of her parents! And much like the brunette … she can’t help herself. She feels butterflies in her stomach and her heart is pounding at a gallop. No … more like a triple crown race! – she thinks.
Tina’s dad – And Mom and Dad are doing well. I have no reason to be worried.
The gallery owner speaks to Gwen and proceeds to stand up, leaving the table.
Tina’s mom – Their jobs were a lot less stressful than yours.
The producer watches as Bette calmly walks in the direction of the restroom.
Tina’s dad – Granted but …
Tina abruptly bolts out of her chair.
Tina – Excuse me, I have to go to the restroom.
She walks away in a hurry, her parents looking surprised with the interruption.
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Restaurant restroom, afternoon: Tina opens the door and rushes into the restroom, looking for Bette. She glances at the two empty stalls and looks puzzled … and disappointed. The restroom door slowly closes to show that the brunette was behind the open door leaning against the wall, her arms folded, her legs crossed, her head tilted to the side, with a sly smirk on her face.
Bette – Looking for something?
The blonde turns around startled and blushes with excitement and embarrassment when she realizes that the brunette has set her up and she got caught.
Bette slowly walks over to her with a cocky smile on her face and stops short of invading her personal space.
Bette – May I help you find it?
She asks, her voice smooth like velvet, her eyes victorious.
Tina gazes into those brown eyes, her own eyes glazed over with excitement, her heart bursting with happiness.
Tina – No … I already have!
She propels herself forward and closes the space between them, holding Bette’s face with both hands and kissing her with a passion that she had been holding back for a month … a passion that was burning her alive … a passion that she saved for her … that only belonged to her.
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Hi! Thank you for the new update!
I must say i didn’t expect Tina break up with Eric so soon. But i must say that it was very touching, and i like how Eric reacted on this news. It always interesting when he isn’t a bad guy.
But i don’t uderstand – the blondie who saw Tibette’s make out in the restroom – it was Tina’s mom?
There was no blondie, Zhenya.
Yeah, you’re right, brunette.
Thanks for the update.
Waiting to find out who saw Bette and Tina in the Restroom.
Please post again soon.
SG
Chapter 13 was titled :The Intruder”.
Very nice chapter. Love that Tina decided to go after Bette and when the opportunity presented itself to kiss her. I love that Bette is so understanding with Tina as she has her parents in town. Its just a matter of time before these two get together. This bathroom meeting is really hot. Sorry Gwen, Bette is no longer interested – go back to Rachel.
As to the petite blond in the restroom? Just a restaurant patron who is straight and did not know how to respond. Not anyone Bette or Tina recognized and both were award she was there. I’m impressed that Tina continued her kiss with an audience present. Her desire is greater than her concern about who sees her. Very nice.
Love this story….love it.
I’m curious why people think that there was a blonde in the restroom. She was not blonde. Also, B&T were not aware of the woman’s presence. Finally, look at the title of chapter 13. I have a feeling you were too distracted with B&T! :D
Many thanks for this lovely story, dbff, and for these chapters about our favorite fanfic couple’s mutual obsession, their common and sudden fascination with flowers in bloom and their sweet, passionate, freeing, lovelier second kiss!???? And “the intruder” in question is the petite, blue-eyed, brunette whom Tina recognized as the tennis player Dana, right?
I love this story!???? Thank you for writing and sharing this lovely, irresistible, descriptive “script”!???? It’s a good distraction from the important developments in the real world right now. Your other lovely script, “Western Skies,” which I have reread at least 50 times since March, is also a good stress reliever. I discovered that story and waited for the last few chapters with anticipation around the time I had resigned from my stressful job and the unredacted Mueller Report was supposed to be released. I’ll have to make time to post my thoughts on that lovely story soon. But I have to tell you that when I saw a news clip from California a couple of weeks ago of a black horse that galloped back near the brush fire to lead his family – a brown mare and a black colt – to safety, that scene reminded me of Charlie, Minnie and Pearl. Just goes to show your story has made a deep impression on me. So thanks a lot again and please continue writing and sharing!????
Have a lovely weekend, dbff!????
Thanks, mightymouse, and welcome! Always good to hear from the readers. Writing is also a nice escape from our grim reality these past 3 years. I did it for similar reasons. :D I’m glad that my story helped you distress. For sure, there will be a better job in your horizon. And good to know that you are the sole reason for the recent viewership increase in Western Skies! (Kidding! :D)
I did watch the poignant clip about the black horse and was also reminded of my characters. It shows how humans are foolish to think that we are the only ones to have feelings, emotions and thought process. Charlie, Minnie and Pearl live in my heart as do the cowgirl and the movie producer.
And yes, the intruder … :D
Hi dbff,
Wonderful chapter!!!
Tina finally gave in to her attraction and feelings for Bette and was quit bolt in the restroom, loved it!
I feel sorry for Eric, but Tina isn’t his soulmate, he deserve a woman who can love him like he thinks he loves Tina.
Bye bye Gwen, make up with Rachel, Bette isn’t interested in you.
I saw the video from the horse who got back to save and lead his family back. Very moving!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Really liked that Tina was no nonsense, but thoughtful when talking to Eric in breaking up with him. He admitted that she didnt love him with the intensity that he felt for her. They still were able to touch & cry for the relationship that was ending.
We’ll see what happens when their paths cross and he feels the electricity between Tina & Bette. Hmmmmm
Lastly, wonder if Bette will still have the dinner now that she Tee have met on a more personal level
dbff, I was relieved to read that Tina finally got to the next stage of acceptance and broke off with Eric. He took it quite good. I just hope he won’t change his mind when he finds out about T + B and tries to mess with Tina.
The same goes for Tina’s parents if or when they find out why Tina ended it with Eric.
But more importantly: What a great kiss in the bathrooms! Thanks for that dbff :-)
Great way to introduce Dana. I hope she and Tina become friends.
Looking forwart to the next part. Guess Bette can cancel her idea for another artist’s dinner now. Or at least delete Eric’s name from the guest list.
Great chapter!!
I wasn’t expecting that scene in the bathroom so soon but as soon as we learned it was an awkward Dana interrupting it all came back to me… I feel like it’ll be like this for awhile but I remember more and more as I read :)
Thanks for posting and keep them coming!
It was great to see Tina accept her attraction for Bette might be more permanent. She has done the right thing breaking up with Eric and telling her parents of her breakup, leaving herself free to explore her feelings for Bette.
It was a wonderful encounter for them to meet in the restroom for a passionate kiss. Love how you introduced Dana. I love Dana in Tibette stories.
The bathroom scene was freaking hot.. I’m still reading, slowly trying to catch up..thank you.
Just saw this story posted online and omg my draw dropped at the “what’s your excuse Tina” portion of one of chapters in this grouping.
Devouring this story – going to read a few more this evening – just had to drop a few words here and not silently read :)