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After the Kiss: Chapters 10 to 13 A Dream
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Tina’s mom – No, she never complains.
Tina’s dad – Well, she is 80! I hope I can be like her when I’m 80!
The blonde turns to watch the brunette again. She looks back and forth between Bette’s table and her parents.
The gallery owner pauses in her conversation and casually glances around the room. Her eyes finally focus on Tina with surprise, their eyes locking and remaining locked.
Ohhh … my fucking God! – she realizes in shock. Just as she decided to ignore Alice’s words and attempted to date Gwen to placate her unrest for a little while, the blonde … her obsession … reappears out of the blue to torment her again! And there she is … hazel eyes staring at her … keeping the chase alive and well! As if the blonde has a crystal ball! As if someone up above is fucking playing games with her … torturing her!
A slight smile appears on the brunette’s face.
Gwen – What do you wanna eat?
Her voice takes the gallery owner out of her trance and she turns back to Gwen worried, but the redhead is peacefully reading the menu. She sighs and picks up the menu.
Bette – Uh … don’t know yet.
Her mind is racing. She didn’t blush, she didn’t turn away … what does that mean?! – she wonders.
The producer presses her lips together trying to hide a smile and turns back to her parents.
Tina’s mom – Not if you continue to work like a dog. It’s not healthy for a man your age.
She was surprised …, the blonde thinks with glee. Her mind flashes back to their encounter in David’s garden. “You are a magnificent piece of art … and I can’t help myself.” Those words … all her words … have been ringing in her ears ever since.
Tina’s dad – I’m not that old!
He chuckles.
Bette pretends to read the menu, she and Tina turning their gaze back and forth between each other and their companions, unable to smile to avoid calling attention. The brunette’s heartbeat has sped up to a canter. Hazel eyes are staring back at her with surprise … with intensity … with … Jesus, is that a come-hither look or am I going mad?! This chase is turning out to be a thrill like no other … a thrill that she can’t resist … but who is the chaser? And who is being chased? For the blonde is reeling her in … hook … line … and sinker.
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Hi! Thank you for the new update!
I must say i didn’t expect Tina break up with Eric so soon. But i must say that it was very touching, and i like how Eric reacted on this news. It always interesting when he isn’t a bad guy.
But i don’t uderstand – the blondie who saw Tibette’s make out in the restroom – it was Tina’s mom?
There was no blondie, Zhenya.
Yeah, you’re right, brunette.
Thanks for the update.
Waiting to find out who saw Bette and Tina in the Restroom.
Please post again soon.
SG
Chapter 13 was titled :The Intruder”.
Very nice chapter. Love that Tina decided to go after Bette and when the opportunity presented itself to kiss her. I love that Bette is so understanding with Tina as she has her parents in town. Its just a matter of time before these two get together. This bathroom meeting is really hot. Sorry Gwen, Bette is no longer interested – go back to Rachel.
As to the petite blond in the restroom? Just a restaurant patron who is straight and did not know how to respond. Not anyone Bette or Tina recognized and both were award she was there. I’m impressed that Tina continued her kiss with an audience present. Her desire is greater than her concern about who sees her. Very nice.
Love this story….love it.
I’m curious why people think that there was a blonde in the restroom. She was not blonde. Also, B&T were not aware of the woman’s presence. Finally, look at the title of chapter 13. I have a feeling you were too distracted with B&T! :D
Many thanks for this lovely story, dbff, and for these chapters about our favorite fanfic couple’s mutual obsession, their common and sudden fascination with flowers in bloom and their sweet, passionate, freeing, lovelier second kiss!???? And “the intruder” in question is the petite, blue-eyed, brunette whom Tina recognized as the tennis player Dana, right?
I love this story!???? Thank you for writing and sharing this lovely, irresistible, descriptive “script”!???? It’s a good distraction from the important developments in the real world right now. Your other lovely script, “Western Skies,” which I have reread at least 50 times since March, is also a good stress reliever. I discovered that story and waited for the last few chapters with anticipation around the time I had resigned from my stressful job and the unredacted Mueller Report was supposed to be released. I’ll have to make time to post my thoughts on that lovely story soon. But I have to tell you that when I saw a news clip from California a couple of weeks ago of a black horse that galloped back near the brush fire to lead his family – a brown mare and a black colt – to safety, that scene reminded me of Charlie, Minnie and Pearl. Just goes to show your story has made a deep impression on me. So thanks a lot again and please continue writing and sharing!????
Have a lovely weekend, dbff!????
Thanks, mightymouse, and welcome! Always good to hear from the readers. Writing is also a nice escape from our grim reality these past 3 years. I did it for similar reasons. :D I’m glad that my story helped you distress. For sure, there will be a better job in your horizon. And good to know that you are the sole reason for the recent viewership increase in Western Skies! (Kidding! :D)
I did watch the poignant clip about the black horse and was also reminded of my characters. It shows how humans are foolish to think that we are the only ones to have feelings, emotions and thought process. Charlie, Minnie and Pearl live in my heart as do the cowgirl and the movie producer.
And yes, the intruder … :D
Hi dbff,
Wonderful chapter!!!
Tina finally gave in to her attraction and feelings for Bette and was quit bolt in the restroom, loved it!
I feel sorry for Eric, but Tina isn’t his soulmate, he deserve a woman who can love him like he thinks he loves Tina.
Bye bye Gwen, make up with Rachel, Bette isn’t interested in you.
I saw the video from the horse who got back to save and lead his family back. Very moving!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Really liked that Tina was no nonsense, but thoughtful when talking to Eric in breaking up with him. He admitted that she didnt love him with the intensity that he felt for her. They still were able to touch & cry for the relationship that was ending.
We’ll see what happens when their paths cross and he feels the electricity between Tina & Bette. Hmmmmm
Lastly, wonder if Bette will still have the dinner now that she Tee have met on a more personal level
dbff, I was relieved to read that Tina finally got to the next stage of acceptance and broke off with Eric. He took it quite good. I just hope he won’t change his mind when he finds out about T + B and tries to mess with Tina.
The same goes for Tina’s parents if or when they find out why Tina ended it with Eric.
But more importantly: What a great kiss in the bathrooms! Thanks for that dbff :-)
Great way to introduce Dana. I hope she and Tina become friends.
Looking forwart to the next part. Guess Bette can cancel her idea for another artist’s dinner now. Or at least delete Eric’s name from the guest list.
Great chapter!!
I wasn’t expecting that scene in the bathroom so soon but as soon as we learned it was an awkward Dana interrupting it all came back to me… I feel like it’ll be like this for awhile but I remember more and more as I read :)
Thanks for posting and keep them coming!
It was great to see Tina accept her attraction for Bette might be more permanent. She has done the right thing breaking up with Eric and telling her parents of her breakup, leaving herself free to explore her feelings for Bette.
It was a wonderful encounter for them to meet in the restroom for a passionate kiss. Love how you introduced Dana. I love Dana in Tibette stories.
The bathroom scene was freaking hot.. I’m still reading, slowly trying to catch up..thank you.
Just saw this story posted online and omg my draw dropped at the “what’s your excuse Tina” portion of one of chapters in this grouping.
Devouring this story – going to read a few more this evening – just had to drop a few words here and not silently read :)