Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
Against All Odds – Chapter 9
Story written on February 6, 2012 by Liah x Doll.
Login to add story to favorites
(26 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
"She doesn’t? She’s a part of this army, my property and I just caught her escaping. I’d say she has everything to do with this"
Bette raised her chin and tried to show Jodi that she wasn’t afraid, "If you let her go . . I’ll submit to you willingly"
"Bette no" Dana pleaded.
Jodi looked at Bette with intrigue, "Willingly you say?"
Bette nodded.
Jodi seemed to think about it for a few seconds before a crooked smile formed on her harsh face, "Now why would I do that? I have more fun when you resist me"
Bette swallowed but didn’t move.
"You sick and twisted bitch"
Dana had stepped out from behind Bette, standing beside her friend. The fear in Dana was obvious but she would stand up for her friend no matter what. Jodi laughed again.
"And here I thought you had no fight in you, little Dana. Maybe I can whip you into shape so you can be as ruthless as my pet here"
Bette glanced over at the edge of the tower, they were near. Maybe a step or two and they could jump. Bette leaned closer to Dana and whispered low.
"Dane, we gotta jump"
Dana nodded, the adrenaline masking her fear as she stared Jodi down. The witch had an army behind her but it didn’t matter. Before they could take a step toward the edge, Bette felt her body tense up. Jodi had recently absorbed some powers to control body movement but being new to the magic, Jodi wasn’t very good at it yet so Bette was able to fight it. Sometimes she won, sometimes she wasn’t so lucky. Today she would win, guaranteed.
"G-gotta hu . . hurry"
Dana nodded and stepped on the ledge, holding onto Bette’s arm and hoisted her up. The Gooru behind Jodi took a step to grab the women before they could jump but Jodi held out her hands to stop them. Bette nearly smiled. She knew that Jodi wouldn’t let harm come to her. Jodi could torture Bette and brand her but she wouldn’t allow her soldiers to hurt her. The witch was twisted that way.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
So good, please post tomorrow.
wow intense but please give me more im on the edge waiting to see this one play out.. thanks
Holy action packed adventure!!!!! Will there be another post at dawn? ; ) This was amazing Liah had me on the edge of my seat. I was dodging and breaking necks too. B&T make a hot battle duo. Loved everything!!! Your stories just get better and better Queen B. Keep up the great work ; )
What excitement! I think the head council member is the trader, the king needs to get better soon I think he finally realised that Bette was not acting of her own accord just before she stabbed him.
Very exciting. I can’t wait to see how they all get out their situation, I’m sure there’s a price on all of their heads, including that of Princess Tina. And then, Jodi and her minions must be lurking at every turn as well… post soon! Thanks :)
That was so good and glad they escape!
Just read all 3 updates of your story. This is just so good. Can’t wait for the next update. thank you. Love this story.
Woohooo…!! You jump I jump baby!! :-p lol …. OMG Liah!! The story is getting better and better, so tensing-I didn’t realized that I hold my breath on some part of the story! 😱…. :-D lol … Well, looking forward to more updates for sure!! ;-) thanks btw for double postings 😄
Amazing.Thank you for 2 updates.Really interesting story.PPS
This story is really getting so great!!! Thank you PPS
Awesome updates… Where will the girls go from her I wonder. They’re going to be wanted by every creature.