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Against All Odds – Chapter 9
"Be safe my friend"
She pushed Bette off the ledge and unsheathed her sword to turn and fight Jodi and her army.
NOOOOOO
As she fell, Bette screamed over and over in her head. Before she hit the water, there was a loud scream and it wasn’t hers. It was Dana’s.
Bette hit the water hard then her entire world went black.
A loud creak echoed in the dank cell and Bette’s eyes snapped open. She blinked as her eyes adjusted to the darkness and saw two guards close a cell door containing an unconscious woman and walk off. The woman moaned softly and Bette instantly recognized the soft, raspy sound.
"Kit!"
Bette jumped off her cot and grabbed onto the cell bars, looking helplessly at her sister lying on the floor.
"Kit, wake up!"
"Oh shut up, I’m trying to sleep"
Bette ignored Jenny’s complaint and called out to her sister again just as she heard a softer creak coming from the door upstairs. Bette froze in place, watching the staircase as she saw a pair of slim legs descend slowly. She somewhat relaxed when she saw Shane come into view. When Shane noticed that Bette was awake, she rushed over.
"What’s wrong? You okay?"
Bette motioned over to Kit lying across from her in another cell, "What’s she doing down here?"
Shane looked over her shoulder and saw Kit lying unconscious. Her eyes widened as she turned back to Bette.
"What the fuck? Who brought here down here?"
Bette shrugged, "I should ask you the same question"
Shane was taken aback by the coldness in her friend’s voice, "What are you getting at? I didn’t know she was down here I swear"
Bette sighed as she realized the tone in her voice. She wanted to talk to Shane calmly and without any insinuations but having her friend so close with all those thoughts in her mind, Bette was finding it hard to stay in check.
"I’m sorry . . I just . . I don’t know what I’m doing"
Shane looked at Bette with a confused expression, "What’s going on?"
Bette didn’t say anything, she just stared at Shane as if she were in pain. She sighed deeply and turned away, facing her cot and placed a hand on her forehead. Her heart began to pound against her chest at the conversation she knew she had to have with Shane. She didn’t know where to start really but there was a question Bette knew she had to ask first.
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(26 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
So good, please post tomorrow.
wow intense but please give me more im on the edge waiting to see this one play out.. thanks
Holy action packed adventure!!!!! Will there be another post at dawn? ; ) This was amazing Liah had me on the edge of my seat. I was dodging and breaking necks too. B&T make a hot battle duo. Loved everything!!! Your stories just get better and better Queen B. Keep up the great work ; )
What excitement! I think the head council member is the trader, the king needs to get better soon I think he finally realised that Bette was not acting of her own accord just before she stabbed him.
Very exciting. I can’t wait to see how they all get out their situation, I’m sure there’s a price on all of their heads, including that of Princess Tina. And then, Jodi and her minions must be lurking at every turn as well… post soon! Thanks :)
That was so good and glad they escape!
Just read all 3 updates of your story. This is just so good. Can’t wait for the next update. thank you. Love this story.
Woohooo…!! You jump I jump baby!! :-p lol …. OMG Liah!! The story is getting better and better, so tensing-I didn’t realized that I hold my breath on some part of the story! 😱…. :-D lol … Well, looking forward to more updates for sure!! ;-) thanks btw for double postings 😄
Amazing.Thank you for 2 updates.Really interesting story.PPS
This story is really getting so great!!! Thank you PPS
Awesome updates… Where will the girls go from her I wonder. They’re going to be wanted by every creature.