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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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Although as much as Alice hated it, she couldn’t exactly say that
either. Of course she didn’t ever want to act that way again,
especially towards Dana but ever since their break up and her break
down she didn’t have that same level of self confidence. Alice used to
think she knew herself fairly well and that she was honest with herself
about all of her insecurities, foibles, and just plain faults. But what
happened with Dana made it entirely clear that wasn’t the case. Because
she never knew it was in her to be that way, to behave in such a
manner, but it was. It was in her and there wasn’t anything she could
do to argue against it. The proof was more than evident through her
actions and they couldn’t ever be denied.
Was not wanting to act a certain way enough? Maybe or maybe not, Alice
didn’t really know. The only thing that she did know was that she
didn’t want to give up this chance to be with Dana again. There were no
guarantees in life and Alice was through wasting time and playing
games. Which is why she gathered up every last bit of courage in her
and tried to have a quiet inward bravado as she held Dana’s hand while
the athlete knocked on her parents door.
Pausing as she lifted up her hand, Dana turned to the blonde and smiled
softly on seeing Alice biting on her bottom lip as she seemed to shrink
inside of the white button up shirt she had on. It was one of the odd
habits that the writer had which managed to charm Dana over the years,
this strange ability to hide in her clothing, making her look painfully
beautiful in her youth and vulnerability. Something that struck the
tennis player as almost wrong in a way. How was it that Alice could be
in her thirties and look younger than people in their twenties?
That was Alice though. And that was just one of the many things that
Dana loved about her. Smiling as she thought of this, Dana caressed the
blonde’s cheek and leaned in for a kiss as she murmured, “Don’t be
scared. It’s just my parents.”
“That’s why I’m scared,” said Alice wryly, resting her head on Dana’s
shoulder. Nuzzling against the soft feel of the cashmere sweater the
athlete had borrowed from her. Because of the way she easily bruised
and the decrease in her weight, Dana had taken to wearing long sleeved
shirts. The sweater was something that Alice had in the back of her
closet for years and never tended to wear that often. Knowing that the
tennis player delighted in soft fabrics, she brought it over and was
immediately rewarded with a kiss and the declaration that the brunette
was wearing it to her parents house. She stayed there for a moment then
sighed and pressed a tender kiss to the athlete’s neck. “Lets go,” she
said, leaving yet another kiss to the tanned skin that was slowly
becoming more pale. “I want to do this. They need to know I’m not going
anywhere. That I’m going to be around for as long as you want me.”
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!