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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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“It’s for a long time,” said Dana in solemn tones, stroking Alice’s
cheek and smiling in gentle reassurance. More and more she found
herself less frightened of this disease and the outcome in fighting it
just because she knew Alice would be there with her. Somehow the idea
she couldn’t win, that she wouldn’t survive this and go on to the have
the life she wanted wasn’t entering her mind nearly as much as it used
to. Just because now she had something to fight for. She had her future
in her hands right now with Alice. And she would be damned if she would
lose it just as she managed to get it back. “It’s for forever.”
“For forever?” Alice teased softly, chuckling and rising up to capture
Dana’s lips for a lingering kiss, smiling into it and holding the
tennis player close. “That’s not correct grammar.”
“I don’t care,” mumbled Dana through their kisses, forming a rather
obstinate but adorable frown that caused the writer to chuckle some
more. Deepening their kisses, sucking slow and long on Alice’s tongue
only to tilt her head back when the blonde moved to kiss and suck the
curve of her neck and she said in a gasp, “It’s the truth.”
There was the sound of the wind and blowing leaves then Dana felt
Alice’s breath, warm on her skin and then the feather light touch of
her lips as she said in a bare whisper, “I love you.”
“I love you too,” murmured Dana, her voice cracking slightly. She
tightened the embrace, burying her face in Alice’s neck and shakily
breathing in her scent. “I love you so much.”
It was then that Howie chose to announce his presence by remarking in a
sardonic drawl, “I should film you guys and send it into Leztime so
they can make a movie of the week.”
Groaning at the interruption, Dana looked at her little brother with a
peevish expression and said, “You mean Lifetime. And I doubt that they
would want to make a movie of the week about me and Al. We’re not
exactly Tom Selleck housewife material.”
“I didn’t say Lifetime, I said Leztime,” said Howie in triumphant
tones, grinning widely. “Before you ask, Leztime is the name of my
fictional, though still atrociously bad, television network for
lesbians. And they would make you two into a movie of the week like
that,” Howie snapped his fingers for emphasis and nodded his head in a
strangely smug gesture.
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!