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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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“Dane read those books,” informed Howie with a knowing smirk. “She had a crush on Stacey.”
“Howie!” exclaimed Dana, turning red and trying to punch her brother in
the arm. She found herself becoming dizzy as she made this attempt,
joking as it was, and soon gave up in the middle of her motion though
her younger sibling didn’t seem to notice, chuckling as he jumped out
of the way.
“Oh yeah?” asked Alice, faking sudden interest because she had noticed
the groggy way Dana was moving and knew full well what was the cause.
And that the last thing the athlete wanted was for her to acknowledge
it, especially in front of her baby brother. “And what was this Stacey
like?”
“She was from New Jersey and moved to Stonerville. I think her huge
character trait was wearing slutty clothing. And she totally had
something going on with the Asian one,” Howie revealed over
dramatically, making everything he said sound utterly scandalous.
“She was from New York City and she moved to Stoneybrook and she didn’t
dress slutty! Stacey just wore different types of clothes but yes,
there totally was something going on with her and Claudia,” said Dana
emphatically, raising an eyebrow as if daring Howie to try and dispute
what she had just said. Howie didn’t try to dispute though. He just
shook his head and fondly accused his sister of being a nerd.
Which was right about the time that the front door opened and Irwin
appeared, a slight frown on his features as he pointed what was meant
to be a stern finger at Howie. It couldn’t be considered all that stern
since Howie didn’t look at all scared of his father and was grinning
largely at him. “Don’t call your sister names,” Irwin ordered.
“Daddy’s Little Girl,” Howie sing songed, dodging the absent whap of
Alice and grinning at the glare that Irwin was shooting his way as he
walked inside the house with Dana and Alice. “But nobody loves the
young Howard.”
“Perhaps if the young Howard would clean his room more than once every
six months and wouldn’t play his rap music at an ear splitting decibel
people would love him,” said Sharon wearing a droll expression to match
her voice while she walked downstairs and towards the group. Upon
seeing Dana she formed a soft but genuine smile of happiness and opened
up her arms for a hug as she neared. Wrapping her daughter up in her
arms, she murmured, “I thought you would never get here, sweetheart.
Your father and I were about to call.”
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!