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All The White Horses: Part Two (2/5)
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Bursting into laughter, Dana shook her head and grinned widely at the
blonde as she replied, “Baby slobber is totally gross, I agree.” Alice
smiled happily on hearing her opinion was shared and they remained in
silence for several moments when Dana’s blue eyes grew lidded and she
murmured, “This is like that time. The second time you kissed me.” She
saw wariness fill the writer’s gaze but Dana swallowed the lump in her
throat and made herself continue on, “I was standing exactly like this
and you were right there. And I could hear the music like I can now.
Not completely clear but good enough to know what song it was. Did you
know that song, Al?” asked Dana softly, stepping towards the journalist
who shook her head in a slight movement, looking completely transfixed
by the woman in front of her. “Temptress, that was the song,” the
tennis player murmured, ducking her head down close enough Alice had to
hold back a gasp on feeling Dana’s warm breath on her skin. “Do you
know the song playing now?” the athlete went on, slowly reaching out to
rest her hands on the writer’s waist and pulling her forward in a
gentle motion. There the barest hint of a whispered no and Dana moved
closer yet, lips brushing up against Alice’s ear as she said, “Love
Love Love.” Sound finally escaped past the blonde’s lips at this and Dana
smiled, so very happy to have this one tiny sign that she wasn’t wrong,
that Alice did want her just as much, loved her just as much, only she
felt just as much if not more fear over that want and love. And now it
was up to the athlete to rid her of that fear. Her lips brushing a soft
path against Alice’s cheek, Dana moved her head back only far enough to
rest their foreheads together. Holding the journalist steady against
her, keeping her hands firm at her waist, Dana said in a husky
confession, “I love you so much, Al. I’ve always loved you and I know
we both messed up and I know so many bad things happened but I want to
be with you again.” Her words starting to choke in her throat, Dana
squeezed her eyes shut, knowing she couldn’t say this and
see the rejection coming. “I’m so scared about this disease. I don’t
want to think about dying because it’s like I’m giving up if I do but I
can’t stop thinking about it and if I’m going to die I want to spend
the time I have left with you because I love you the most. I love you
more than anyone.”
“Open your eyes,” Alice’s voice, rough with tears filled the air
but the tennis player kept her eyes shut, suddenly all too sure that if
they opened she would see the last thing she wanted. A look of defeated
resignation that she had once worn so very often as Alice told her they
couldn’t be together again. “Dana,” Alice was pleading now and the
athlete sighed at the cool feeling of pale hands cupping her face in a
tender hold. “Please open your eyes.” Seconds that seemed like hours
passed and then Dana did as Alice requested and found that instead of
defeat and resignation there was hope and there was happiness and the
blonde smiled so very sweetly that the athlete almost began crying from
joy as she heard Alice say, “I’m the same. I love
you the most and more than anyone, Dana. I never stopped.”
Then they kissed just like that kiss from before with the soft sound of
distant music and the chatter of people echoing from just outside and
not caring one bit they could be discovered because they were lost in
each other. Lost in the taste and the feel and the smell and just
everything about the person they loved and wanted more than anyone else.
And perfectly happy to stay that way.
To be continued…
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OK – I just read the first chapter and this one – dreiser – awesome. truly. funny, sweet, sad, hopeful and bittersweet. I’d expect nothing less from you though. Very well done!
That was beautiful. Awesome writing as usual. Great way to end that chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Absolute perfection. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again no doubt, but your writing is amazing. And I’m not just talking about the grammar, which is a big pet-peeve of mine, but I’m talking about the way you portray and characterize each character to form. You perfectly write and vocalize Alice and Dana (no doubt because of your love for the characters), but you also have a good sense for portraying all of the others. I know you love Helena, as do I, and I like how you are forming her as she’ll hopefully be portrayed in S3 (although I do like snarky Helena too!). I know where this story is heading, mainly from checking in at your journal for updates, and I’m still excited about it because of how it’s written. Anyway, long-winded I know, but I have to give accolades to your talent.
Awww i am soo inlove with this story! The way you write the characters is spot on! This chapter was just amazing! Please update soon
Thank you for this story. Yours are stories I can read over and over again and always love. Perfect.
Simply Awsome, I hope the actual season of Alice and Dana’s relationship is at least half as good as it is in your story, keep up the great work!!
That was great. Your writing is amazing. I love angst and there was enough to go around in this chapter. Their love confession was…beautiful. Great job.
I have read it more than one time and I found more and more things that I like in your story. I said before but danish has unbelieveble writers, thanks.
Hiya, I’m a silent lurker, BUT your stuff is great…the only other person here with as much talent to hold my attention is Ms.Layla_Gray, but you capture the couple like no one esle…keep it up and you have another fan here….Peace.
IC created the characters, but I am amazed by how well you “get” them. I’m sitting here at my desk feeling happy because Alice and Dana were able to admit their feelings for each other. At the same time there is a bittersweet feeling because there is a good chance that the overall ending of the story will not be happy. It’s sad that two people who were so well suited for each other and so in love had to waste so much time. But it makes for a great story for us. I will bide my time re-reading the first two parts until you post again. Thanks for another wonderful story.
I usually lurk, but I just had to comment. Beautiful. Your writing is simply beautiful. The character development, the story development, I feel more like a voyeur than a reader!! Thank you!
Amazing! I had butterflies in my stomach the entire time I read this story. You write Alice and Dana beautifully. I love Alice’s comments like, “you’re such a girl and yet so helpless about girly things” and Alice being so sweet with Dana while she was sick in the bathroom. Their thoughts and fears which you expressed, are things that Eileen and her writers failed to say in Season 2. I’ve always loved the playful and sarcastic aspect of their relationship- very well written. I can’t wait till your next update!
i had chills the entire time of reading this story. It was amazing the way you wrote about al and dane’s love and i so hope beyond hope that you write more. Please post soon
wow that was amazing! please post soon!
this is great I am just catching up so I hope that u have already post again