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Almost Heaven 9
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“I already asked you that question I will not ask it again.”
I don’t give him what he wants. I keep my eyes on Carmen. I figure whatever is going to happen will. I figure that this was all running out anyways. I figure that this will be over really soon. I figure if my baby of a brother was going to kill me, I might as well do something pointless and romantic like gaze at Carmen’s eyes.
She has beautiful eyes….what could it hurt?
“I don’t have a feeling about killing people who are already dead.”
“I don’t know you……you fucking murderer……don’t give me that nihilist end of the world bullshit about how we are already fucking dead……you waste….”
“…I am a waste you are right….but I didn’t get my mind all crossed by the woman who killed our parents!”
“Didn’t you, Carmen told me all about it Shamus…..all about how you forced yourself on her…..does that make you feel like a man?”
“No…..it made me feel good. It made me feel even. It made me feel really close to you…..”
“Explain…’
“I saw her….take you….someone else took me…..I saw her love you…..from the minute she saw you…..like something broke inside for her and her wretched ways….….and I asked and I asked for you, they didn’t know what I was talking about……I left my camp and I went looking for you…..and her…I was found by these kind folks…..they took me in, they taught me, they chained me to a wall and I had a choice. A choice I gave to this treacherous thing, a choice I gave to the last one left standing in everywhere that we go, it’s a simple choice, fight or die…..”
“That’s it?”
“You want more?”
“This is the big thing….this is what you do? You run around killing and taking all that is left…..you keep one alive and if they survive you let them live and their reward is joining this? This is it?”
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so it’ll be over? wow that was a good ride…thanks for all the great stories..wonder what will happen in the end..
tan tan ta, taaaaa lol
NO! I have feared the end of this story! Well you have writen so many amazing stories, I hope for the best ending, very long hopefully! lolFIVE STARS! *****
Please answer me this, do you do this for a living? Chapter after chapter I’m still captivated by you.I’m suprised that Shane is still in love with Carmen. Love is the last thing I would feel for her. I kind of wish that we would get to see Carmen’s POV a bit, what her feelings are.
i agree with Ragazzi, i am somewhat disappointed by Carmen’s behaviour. She was very passive, very unlike her character, did Shay torture her so much that she is now submissive to him? She left Shane in that horrible place! I am guessing from the title of this story, it’s a set up for unhappy ending. hope I am wrong! Anyways, kudos to you for giving us such intense stories! I am holding my breath until you update this story!! Please don’t let it end so soon… lol
I am afraid of the unhappy ending now. Would you close it in sadness and tragedy? Please dont do that. i won’t sleep well for couples of days.
UH OH! Doesn’t seem like they are going to make it work. They’ve barely spoken for nearly a year – YIKES! Unless Carmen in all that time has planned a coup of some kind, to explain her distance, they seem doomed.