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    Almost Heaven 9

    Story written on October 16, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    It is watching us, And the world we set on fire.

     

     

     

     

    “Well…..yeah…..survival of the fittest….only the strong…..”

     

     

     

     

    “You are a bully, mom and dad would be so proud of you….”

     

     

     

     

    “Sarcasm……nice….I know what it is. And yeah I am a bully…..but I didn’t grow up sheltered like you. I didn’t grow up pampered and loved…”

     

     

     

     

    “Shamus, you have not grown up at all….you are a blind and dumb kid……”

     

     

     

     

    “Shane!”

     

     

     

     

     

    Finally she speaks.

     

     

     

     

     

    “Stop pushing him…..”

     

     

     

     

    “Don’t….defend him to me…..We are not related! My brother is dead….this thing that is standing here…..he is not like me…..WE ARE NOT ALIKE SHAMUS!

     

     

     

     

    “You always had a temper Shaney….I hate to do this you…..I hate it……but we have rules…..Carmen take her to the pit……no detours…no kissey face……take her to the pit…..and then  we’ll see how much we are alike……”

     

     

     

     

    Chapter Nineteen

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Jenny reenters as Shamus unlocks one end of my shackles. He hands the one end to Carmen and she takes the chain and wrap,wrap,wraps it around her tanned fist. Jenny smirks at me as if she has won something and we leave the room. We walk down a narrow hallway and spiral low and lower till we hit a basement. Once inside the basement we get even lower into a compact iron enclosed prison. Carmen has gone back to not saying a word.

     

     

     

    We passed no name grunting people on the way down. Whistles and cheers greeting us left and right. When I stayed too long on one thing Carmen yanked the chain to get my attention. And again you give up the warm sheltered life and get dragged about by a girl who has a funny way of showing her love for you, me. 

     

     

     

    She opens the gate and motions for me get in. I look at her. Searching for something. She doesn’t meet me. My hands shake now instead of hers. My head hurts from when Jenny clocked me. The floor is covered with dried blood and dust and grit. It smells down here. She chains my foot to the wall and turns to leave.

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    3. NO! I have feared the end of this story! Well you have writen so many amazing stories, I hope for the best ending, very long hopefully! lolFIVE STARS! *****

    4. Please answer me this, do you do this for a living? Chapter after chapter I’m still captivated by you.I’m suprised that Shane is still in love with Carmen. Love is the last thing I would feel for her. I kind of wish that we would get to see Carmen’s POV a bit, what her feelings are.

    5. i agree with Ragazzi, i am somewhat disappointed by Carmen’s behaviour. She was very passive, very unlike her character, did Shay torture her so much that she is now submissive to him? She left Shane in that horrible place! I am guessing from the title of this story, it’s a set up for unhappy ending. hope I am wrong! Anyways, kudos to you for giving us such intense stories! I am holding my breath until you update this story!! Please don’t let it end so soon… lol

    7. UH OH! Doesn’t seem like they are going to make it work. They’ve barely spoken for nearly a year – YIKES! Unless Carmen in all that time has planned a coup of some kind, to explain her distance, they seem doomed.

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