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Almost Here Chapter 1
‘Oh god. I almost forgot the food!’
Their refrigerator was unlike anyone else’s. It was so clearly demarcated into left and right halves, with the contents of one half being a complete contrast with those in the other half. It looked like it could be the ‘poster refrigerator’ for a Healthy Living and Eating campaign. Just put a sign saying ‘Dos’ on the left and one saying ‘Don’ts’ on the right and it would be perfect. No prizes for guessing who owned which half.
Dana’s half contained mainly organic fruits and vegetables, a bottle of low-fat dressing she made herself (‘this is dressing? I’m like eating salad drowned in plain water!’
It took almost an hour to clear the fridge of her food. Not that there was a lot of food to clear (though there was a sizable amount), it was the deliberation of what to remove and what to leave that took up most of the time. Some things weren’t really just hers or Dana’s, they were theirs’. Like Aporot juice. It was a mixture of apple, orange and carrot juice that
‘Aporot? Can’t you name it something else?’ Dana stared at the large cup of juice she was holding in her hands as if willing it to protest against the horrible name it had just been christened.
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(33 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
i love the flashbacks they are so danish! you are a great writer
Well I’m hooked! Great job, I really loved it, and that says a lot for me cos i’m more of a TiBette fic girl. But..good job! please continue!
I agree with Minna, always hope for Danish :D I like the 2nd part a lot, really gives insight into Alice’s reasons, lets hope Dana understands.
I really like it, loved the post-it notes on that lettuce shirt and on the tube that wasn’t the toothpaste (and on the forehead of course!) I never quite get the logic of breaking up with someone so you can stay together in the long run, but I’m sure Alice will convince me (and Dana) in Chapter 2. Great start mud!
Hey my favorite Housefly! Beautifully written, I’m so happy you’ve decided to write. I think I’m gonna start sticking post it notes everywhere and I blame you.
good story , you’re an ecellent writer. I love the post it notes too, so cute!
I said it before and I say it now: although this is full of angst there’s still hope for Danish. Alice clearly loves Dana and it doesn’t matter if you bring them back together or not.. there’s still the possibility to them to be together again. loving this! *5*