‘I like the sound of it Aporot! It tastes so good you would drink it by the pot!’
‘Does it have to end with rot?’
‘Aporot! It’s so nutritious, it beats Botox!’ Alice was clearly in her own world, holding up the fruits and juicer animatedly as if she was really in a TV advertisement.
Who could resist that cheeky grin Alice was wearing on her face right now? Not Dana, that’s for sure, as she slunk up behind Alice and wrapped her arms around the blonde’s waist.
‘It doesn’t really rhyme. Botox. Aporot.’ Alice said, deep in thought for a better alternative.
‘No it does.’ Dana held Alice even closer and rested her head on the blonde’s shoulder.
‘Ok, if you say so, baby.’
They leaned her heads together and looked lovingly into each other’s eyes.
‘Finally!’ Alice heaved a big sigh of relief as she cramped the last of the Milky Ways into a large zip lock bag. It wasn’t that she was being stingy, that she didn’t want Dana eating her food (not that Dana would) or Dana wearing her clothes or Dana using her things. She just didn’t want to risk having to come back for something she might need. They needed time apart. But most importantly, the reason why she didn’t want to leave anything of hers behind was because she didn’t want to hurt Dana even more than she knew she was going to. Seeing her things would remind Dana of her, and that would hurt Dana. She hated herself for having to make this decision. The last thing she would wish to do is to hurt Dana. But she knew if she hung on, Dana would be the one who would have to make this same decision sooner or later, and that would hurt Dana even more. It was simply the lesser of two evils.
Trying to collect all the zip lock bags, Alice‘s hand bumped into a cookie jar by accident. She managed to catch it just in time before it toppled over. Alice looked at the cookie jar. Cookies. Lara’s double lemon sugar cookies with lavender and rosemary infusion. Cookies Lara had baked for Dana.
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i love the flashbacks they are so danish! you are a great writer
Well I’m hooked! Great job, I really loved it, and that says a lot for me cos i’m more of a TiBette fic girl. But..good job! please continue!
I agree with Minna, always hope for Danish :D I like the 2nd part a lot, really gives insight into Alice’s reasons, lets hope Dana understands.
I really like it, loved the post-it notes on that lettuce shirt and on the tube that wasn’t the toothpaste (and on the forehead of course!) I never quite get the logic of breaking up with someone so you can stay together in the long run, but I’m sure Alice will convince me (and Dana) in Chapter 2. Great start mud!
Hey my favorite Housefly! Beautifully written, I’m so happy you’ve decided to write. I think I’m gonna start sticking post it notes everywhere and I blame you.
good story , you’re an ecellent writer. I love the post it notes too, so cute!
I said it before and I say it now: although this is full of angst there’s still hope for Danish. Alice clearly loves Dana and it doesn’t matter if you bring them back together or not.. there’s still the possibility to them to be together again. loving this! *5*