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Apogée 18
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“Alice wake up…come on baby please?” The agent tapped on Alice’s cheeks desperately, Dana could already hear the crowd quieting outside; someone would be coming soon.
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“What the hell?” Kit heard a crash on the other side of the club near her office. The owner, stood up quickly, turning to Ivan.
“I’m really sorry Ivan, I need to check on that. I think there’s something going wrong in the kitchen” Kit said, Ivan nodded in agreement, and Kit moved toward the office pushing past the crowd slowly.
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Bette stared between Tina and the agent with an unreadable expression on her face. She’d heard the last few sentences and didn’t like where the conversation was going, the brunette already regretted not making it back to the house in time. That little fuck Roberts must have called ahead to someone, Bette thought as she entered the living room area.
The agent that stood before Bette smirked knowingly; Copoland knew that the brunette had been keeping her life secret from this pretty blonde and had managed to fuck Bette’s life over in less than ten minutes. Tina watched as Bette challenged the agent with her eyes, the look on the brunette’s face was cold and fierce like nothing the widow had ever seen from Bette.
“Bette this is Agent Copoland…I wasn’t sure what to do and I told him you’d be back soon.” Tina said hesitantly, the brunette’s posture stiffened and her shoulders straightened into a tight line.
“Thank you Tina, I’m sure Agent Copoland appreciated your company while he waited…Can I help you?” Bette said, her eyes never leaving Copoland, the agent shifted uncomfortably.
“Um…I received a request from Agent Roberts to carry out a search of the premises, we have a warrant to seize any property that is in violation…” Copoland began the brunette interrupted him,
“I know what the court order states…are you seriously implying that you are going to search this entire mansion by yourself?” Bette stared at the agent who shook his head,
“No, I’ve only come to search the study and your office.” Copoland said calmly, Bette nodded angrily,
“So it’s blatantly obvious that Agent Roberts initiated this search simply as an irritant,” the brunette said, Tina was becoming more uncomfortable by the second.
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Fuckin’ awesome!!! Lovin’ my peps, Shane and Carmen, even more!!! Please continue and soon!!! Like always, LYLAS ;-p
uh oh! i seem to be saying that alot when it comes to this story! drama drama drama, cliff hanger cliff hanger cliff hanger! and i cant say im complaining yet! now i dont feel so bad about bette being with tina because it seems she has a dark past we have yet to discover! im sure you’ll show us the light though, wont you? amazing update as always!
kick hiss ass tina!!!!!!!!!! longer
Go, Dana! She totally hauled off and knocked Mark into next week. I wonder what deal with Marcus’ books is and if Tina really knows anything about them. Josh needs to die. Bette can off him and look like a hero because no one messes with Bette’s woman.
Layer after layer of mystery. I love it! I am glad things are going so well in your life. Thank you for posting.
great update. you can really tell you have this planned out very well. excellent writing. go dana!
The story is awesome. Looks like you have life by the short hairs and have a great personal life.
Argh… I don’t believe you! how could you not finish what you started with the Shane and Carmen scene before cutting to the next. Or at least come back to it after the flashback… You are a tease. And who says I didn’t wait long. Any day I wait is a day longer in hell since I check in 3 times a day just for your story. Thanks for the fix for this addicted girl. Great Update!
We’ve been totally sucked in by this Tina! She was the power behind Marcus’ throne all along, and then some. (Am I right?) If so, you have only touched the Tibette iceberg! A worthy adversary or a worthy partner? Which will it be? Thanks for writing?P.S. Jennifer Lopez and John Travolta? What would Miss Ellie say?
Thanks for the dedication sugar… I’m honored and loving your attention. I hope that doesn’t get me in trouble with your woman. No sex scenes…. not even one for your brteyes? aww.. thats not fair. Uh oh Dana with a black eye, lol… thats not going to be pretty. Glad both Alice and Dana made it out alright. I’m surprised the comment about Bette’s other woman remained a secret after how your last chapter ended. Poor Alice getting pushed out the window…. and by Dana no less, lol. I like the Shane/Carmen chemistry… it’s seems so forbidden, lol. I like how you change gears.. going back in time with Nikki. Damn… this Josh sounds like a real sleeze ball… watch out Tina. I loved this latest chapter. Hey, it sounds like I have a chance here… if your girlfriend ever changes her mind.. do I have a chance? Hmmm… hope I don’t get in trouble here… better go. I’ll be waiting for the next chapter… and your answer.
What the hell is up with this Joshua guy? Anyways, I’m loving Shane and Carmen as always..Danish, just wonderful and a lil’ bit of comical relief. But why the fuck was “Agent” Dunne following them for? I just hope that goes smoothly with Bette at the mansion..POST SOON!!!
Lol, I’ll admit it, I’m cheating. But that doesn’t mean I can’t keep guessing…I’m still clueless on lots of parts of this story. :D I knew it, Dana can kick some ass, yay! And Dunne came to their rescue?! ;) It made me laugh that the door was the reason that Alice was knocked out…it’s just so adorable. ;) She didn’t even get to see Dana in action. :P Only Bette can stay cool and collected (at least for others) when her world is falling apart. Still loving Nikki/Shane (even more so than Sharmen…but then again, I like your Sharmen much more than on the show). Erm…was Josh suggesting what I was thinking or are we talking about a real deal here? Talk to you later!
Great update. I loved it…as usual. Dana beating the crap out of people rocks. Totally hot! Now that Dana has a black eye and Alcie has a bump on her head they both need a little TLC. Maybe a little doctor play is in order? I hope that Alice was able to get what she needed in that file. I’m personally in favor of the good guys in this fic. Imagine that! I’m on the Danish side! Who would have thought? Keep up the great writing. I’m enjoying the other storylines too. I can’t wait for more.
Yes! Awesome update. Shane should just let Carmen into her heart! I can’t help but find Kit also very funny as to the role she’s playing in this story. I can just she her getting all worked up and the faces she has with that lol!
Okay just what is Tina into that she too has secrets? This is getting really good with all that is going on. All these couples together but not together. Hopefully what ever is hidden in both Bette’s and Tina’s background will not hinder their new relationship. I hope that Dunn gets his ass kicked and it would cool if Dana or Alice is the one to knock him down a notch or two. Post when you can.
I swear you’re content to let us suffer … give us just a little taste & make us wait for more … great update!
Damn this is awesome and love it. Hope Bette there to kick this josh ass or Tina can kick his ass herself. OK post soon plase, thanks!
Yay! I just turned on my computer for the first time in a while and the first thing I did was read this update. (I’m glad that I did, too.)I don’t really skip over sections, but damn it, sometimes I just have faves:)Anyways,I can’t wait to find out what happens next, so please post soon!
Ok, I know you are probably tired of hearing this, but I loved this chapter, yet again. You’re writing is so dead on, even though the characters are different from the way they are in the show. This is an excellent story, and it’s a great mix of Danish, TiBette, and Sharmen (even though I dont like the latter two, you even have me interested in what happens to them!) Please post again soon! I’ll be waiting impatiently. Oh, and I would love to read your Alias fics! I loved Alias!
Thank you for the great chapter =)
So I read your entire story all the way through as I was getting a bit lost trying to piece it all together bit by bit and I have to say, well done. You’ve done a truly remarkable job and it’s turning out to be a great story.
Holy crap, way to make my morning! Definitely looking forward to learning more about Tina’s past!
Me thinks Tina has been a bad girl…or..not..LoL great as always keep it up, highlight of my day really, something about ready a great story after getting teeth pulled makes me smile…LoL
Wow! I have to say with every update this story gets just better and better! Did I mention that this is my favorite story before?? Well, yeah, I think I can remember me telling you that for about 20 times… but I just can`t say it enough! ;) You`re so good and this is such an awesome story! Liked the Sharmen scenes, as always (and, of course, the Shane/Nikki ones)! Please continue soon… ;)