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Apogée 18
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“Well I’m going to get my things Bette, it looks like you’ll have a full day without me hanging around.” The widow said turning toward the bedroom, Bette stepped in front of Tina and pulled her gently to the side out of Copoland’s earshot.
“I really am sorry about all of this…” Bette began, the widow interrupting her quickly.
“It’s ok Bette you had no idea this was going to happen, I need to see if that accountant is finished with Marcus’ books anyway.” Tina said nonchalantly, the brunette eyebrows shooting up slightly.
“Books? What like an accounting book for your finances?” Bette asked, the widow shaking her head.
“Um, no actually Marcus kept a double account of all the work he was doing, so this guy Josh something should have your final statement by the end of the week if you need it.” Tina said wondering why Bette was asking her about finances, the brunette smiled sweetly.
“Well tell him it’s not necessary, I hire another accountant and he’s already finished with this months paperwork.” Bette said, the widow shrugging, not really understanding any of this conversation or why it was even a conversation they were having. Tina changed the subject,
“So when will I see you again?” the widow whispered softly, Bette’s face glowed despite the constant bad news she’d been receiving. The brunette leaned in to kiss Tina’s lips speaking just as they met.
“You can see me anytime you want, I’d really love to go out to dinner tonight.” Bette said kissing Tina’s lips softly, the widow smiled as the brunette ran her fingers through Tina’s hair quickly.
“Call me when you’re finished?” The widow asked, Bette nodded, kissing the blonde on the forehead then turning her attention back to the agent who still stood at the door. Tina studied the brunette’s back as she went, Bette had secrets that, the widow was sure of, but Tina couldn’t judge the brunette, she held a few secrets of her own.
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“Come on Alice, snap back baby…” Dana snapped her fingers in front of Alice’s eyes trying to wake her up. It was taking too long, they’d been in the office too long, someone was coming she was sure of it. The agent snapped again and the writer’s eyes flickered, Alice opened her eyes slowly and Dana immediately helped the writer to her feet.
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Fuckin’ awesome!!! Lovin’ my peps, Shane and Carmen, even more!!! Please continue and soon!!! Like always, LYLAS ;-p
uh oh! i seem to be saying that alot when it comes to this story! drama drama drama, cliff hanger cliff hanger cliff hanger! and i cant say im complaining yet! now i dont feel so bad about bette being with tina because it seems she has a dark past we have yet to discover! im sure you’ll show us the light though, wont you? amazing update as always!
kick hiss ass tina!!!!!!!!!! longer
Go, Dana! She totally hauled off and knocked Mark into next week. I wonder what deal with Marcus’ books is and if Tina really knows anything about them. Josh needs to die. Bette can off him and look like a hero because no one messes with Bette’s woman.
Layer after layer of mystery. I love it! I am glad things are going so well in your life. Thank you for posting.
great update. you can really tell you have this planned out very well. excellent writing. go dana!
The story is awesome. Looks like you have life by the short hairs and have a great personal life.
Argh… I don’t believe you! how could you not finish what you started with the Shane and Carmen scene before cutting to the next. Or at least come back to it after the flashback… You are a tease. And who says I didn’t wait long. Any day I wait is a day longer in hell since I check in 3 times a day just for your story. Thanks for the fix for this addicted girl. Great Update!
We’ve been totally sucked in by this Tina! She was the power behind Marcus’ throne all along, and then some. (Am I right?) If so, you have only touched the Tibette iceberg! A worthy adversary or a worthy partner? Which will it be? Thanks for writing?P.S. Jennifer Lopez and John Travolta? What would Miss Ellie say?
Thanks for the dedication sugar… I’m honored and loving your attention. I hope that doesn’t get me in trouble with your woman. No sex scenes…. not even one for your brteyes? aww.. thats not fair. Uh oh Dana with a black eye, lol… thats not going to be pretty. Glad both Alice and Dana made it out alright. I’m surprised the comment about Bette’s other woman remained a secret after how your last chapter ended. Poor Alice getting pushed out the window…. and by Dana no less, lol. I like the Shane/Carmen chemistry… it’s seems so forbidden, lol. I like how you change gears.. going back in time with Nikki. Damn… this Josh sounds like a real sleeze ball… watch out Tina. I loved this latest chapter. Hey, it sounds like I have a chance here… if your girlfriend ever changes her mind.. do I have a chance? Hmmm… hope I don’t get in trouble here… better go. I’ll be waiting for the next chapter… and your answer.
What the hell is up with this Joshua guy? Anyways, I’m loving Shane and Carmen as always..Danish, just wonderful and a lil’ bit of comical relief. But why the fuck was “Agent” Dunne following them for? I just hope that goes smoothly with Bette at the mansion..POST SOON!!!
Lol, I’ll admit it, I’m cheating. But that doesn’t mean I can’t keep guessing…I’m still clueless on lots of parts of this story. :D I knew it, Dana can kick some ass, yay! And Dunne came to their rescue?! ;) It made me laugh that the door was the reason that Alice was knocked out…it’s just so adorable. ;) She didn’t even get to see Dana in action. :P Only Bette can stay cool and collected (at least for others) when her world is falling apart. Still loving Nikki/Shane (even more so than Sharmen…but then again, I like your Sharmen much more than on the show). Erm…was Josh suggesting what I was thinking or are we talking about a real deal here? Talk to you later!
Great update. I loved it…as usual. Dana beating the crap out of people rocks. Totally hot! Now that Dana has a black eye and Alcie has a bump on her head they both need a little TLC. Maybe a little doctor play is in order? I hope that Alice was able to get what she needed in that file. I’m personally in favor of the good guys in this fic. Imagine that! I’m on the Danish side! Who would have thought? Keep up the great writing. I’m enjoying the other storylines too. I can’t wait for more.
Yes! Awesome update. Shane should just let Carmen into her heart! I can’t help but find Kit also very funny as to the role she’s playing in this story. I can just she her getting all worked up and the faces she has with that lol!
Okay just what is Tina into that she too has secrets? This is getting really good with all that is going on. All these couples together but not together. Hopefully what ever is hidden in both Bette’s and Tina’s background will not hinder their new relationship. I hope that Dunn gets his ass kicked and it would cool if Dana or Alice is the one to knock him down a notch or two. Post when you can.
I swear you’re content to let us suffer … give us just a little taste & make us wait for more … great update!
Damn this is awesome and love it. Hope Bette there to kick this josh ass or Tina can kick his ass herself. OK post soon plase, thanks!
Yay! I just turned on my computer for the first time in a while and the first thing I did was read this update. (I’m glad that I did, too.)I don’t really skip over sections, but damn it, sometimes I just have faves:)Anyways,I can’t wait to find out what happens next, so please post soon!
Ok, I know you are probably tired of hearing this, but I loved this chapter, yet again. You’re writing is so dead on, even though the characters are different from the way they are in the show. This is an excellent story, and it’s a great mix of Danish, TiBette, and Sharmen (even though I dont like the latter two, you even have me interested in what happens to them!) Please post again soon! I’ll be waiting impatiently. Oh, and I would love to read your Alias fics! I loved Alias!
Thank you for the great chapter =)
So I read your entire story all the way through as I was getting a bit lost trying to piece it all together bit by bit and I have to say, well done. You’ve done a truly remarkable job and it’s turning out to be a great story.
Holy crap, way to make my morning! Definitely looking forward to learning more about Tina’s past!
Me thinks Tina has been a bad girl…or..not..LoL great as always keep it up, highlight of my day really, something about ready a great story after getting teeth pulled makes me smile…LoL
Wow! I have to say with every update this story gets just better and better! Did I mention that this is my favorite story before?? Well, yeah, I think I can remember me telling you that for about 20 times… but I just can`t say it enough! ;) You`re so good and this is such an awesome story! Liked the Sharmen scenes, as always (and, of course, the Shane/Nikki ones)! Please continue soon… ;)