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Apogée 4
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The car slid slowly downhill, making a sickening scraping sound, and sending glass flying. Jenny heard screaming as she quickly approached the overturned vehicle, trying desperately to push the falling rain out of her eyes. Carmen was pinned on her side clawing at the seatbelt that held her strapped to the seat as Jenny opened the opposite door, the rain pouring into the truck. She looked for the other agent’s; both of them lay unconscious in the passenger and driver’s seat. Jenny reached her hand in to pull Carmen out, looking at the tires as the bartender grabbed her hand.
As she studied the blown tire, she spotted a puncture that looked foreign to her, she leaned her head back into the car halting Carmen’s attempts to jump out.
“Wait…Carmen I want you to stay in the car ok?” The bartender shook slightly as she looked wildly around for something to grab onto.
“Is she here? She’s here isn’t she?” Jenny waved Carmen to stay out and pulled her gun from the holster that hung from her chest. The bartender positioned herself to stand in the overturned truck, reaching down to grab one of the unconscious men’s guns. Carmen peeked through the open door watching Jenny study the tire, then scan the area.
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Shane also watched Agent Shecter scan the area from the opposite side of the truck. She reloaded and crouched behind Jenny’s car aiming for the back of Carmen’s head that peeked from the open door of the overturned vehicle.
‘Too easy,’ she thought closing an eye to better sight the bartender. Shane stood there frozen and unable to pull the trigger, she only gazed at Carmen wondering why she felt strange whenever she was in the presence of the incredibly sexy Latina. And it wasn’t even until the first shot ricocheted off of the hood of the car that she even stopped staring. Shane rolled behind the vehicle, looking across the ground for Jenny’s feet; the rain on the ground soaked into her clothes and smeared mud across her jacket. Jenny rounded her vehicle; gun first, pursuing the assassin. Shane reached for the gun that’d slipped out of her hand after her tumble, it lie under the car just inches from her outstretched fingers. Jenny turned the corner of the car where Shane stood, but the assassin had long gone, now resting on the grill of the car, the rain causing her short hair to run into her eyes.
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:P noo, danm u lady, but i liek how ur keeping me on my toes. is my sexy jenny crush dead :O!
Wow! I was so excited to see an update. That was really great. I loved the Danish scene. I really enjoy your writing and can’t wait for more.
holy crap, i was NOT expecting that awesome! I can’t wait for the next chapter. i wonder what carmen’s connection is to shane, if any…or maybe she just wants to be a bad girl? ;)
whoa! nice update!
Yeah, baby…. give me the action. Still have those goosebumps from the shower scene. Kill Jenny, Kill Jenny…I know I’m bad,lol. Looks like I’ll be groveling at your feet… wondering what the hell you have planned next. You are always an inspiration to me… love it all. Btw- (whispering in your ear) KILL JENNY!!!
Holy Shit!!! I never saw that coming at all!!! Who would of thunk it?? LoL…Keep up the good work!!!
I have both of my hands up and waving frantically. You definately can be the writer but you may want to find someone else to help with the spelling. I have trouble even finding the words in the dictionary because I spell so badly. I spell creatively and half the time it is no where close to how it is really spelled. This story gets better with each chapter. Jenny shot by the woman she was to protect. And Bette meeting Tina. This is sooooo cool. Can’t wait until the next post of this story. Oh and let me know where to meet you so we can take care of that evil woman or idiot (you choose the term that best discribes her today).
Wow! I really liked that little twist at the end! Though I don’t approve of violence in real life, imagining Carmen shooting a gun in this ficticious story is hot! And her and Shane both being on the wrong side of the law, like Bonnie and Clyde or something…whew that’s hot too! I love the balance of emotion and action in this story. It keeps it way more interesting. Keep it up!
What the hell is happen there!
holly cliffhangers robin! thats it?please post soon and watch out for the CATWOMEN she will eat you alive!
daaaaaaaaaaaaaammmnnnn woman! scared the crap out of me!!! i thought u just totally killed shane-the-coolest-hottest assasin just then!!! pleeeeeeeeeeaaassseeee continue~!!!!
Now Shane& Carmen ca be fugitives together ;-) What was she thinkin? Great update, plz post soon.
It keeps getting better, I loved it.You have a style all of your own, that some wish they had. =)BTW thanks for calling me the fan fiction maestro/Know one has ever called me that “BLUSH”I thought I was more like The Bad Boy Of Fan-Fic.
Blimey, I can’t believe Carmen just shot Jenny!! OMG…that’s is soo cool, now if it had happened in S1-2…no more circus. I’m glad Shane is okay, she is too cool to go. Wow, loving my Danish…awesome! ho
no ur comment made me laugh ok weird anyway great update ; )