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Apogée 4
“Um…hel—hello Dana?” The agent chuckled to herself a bit,
“Yeah it’s me Alice, how’s the shower treating you?” The writer chuckled low walking to the frosted divider and opening it slowly.
“It’d be treating me a lot better if you were in here with me,” Dana bit her lip and undressed quickly joining Alice in the ridiculously large shower and stepping under the waterfall to wet herself although some areas didn’t need any assistance. The writer took control, pressing Dana into the wall behind the waterfall and kissing her fiercely, Alice sucked on the agent’s bottom lip an action that caused Dana to flip them as the agent assaulted her neck with nibbles and kisses. Alice chuckled as she turned them again,
“Stay put.” Alice challenged the agent with her eyes, slowly moving Dana’s roaming hands and turning the agent around.
Alice trailed a single finger down Dana’s body paying special attention to her erect nipples. The agent moaned loudly, grinding her ass into the writer, Alice continued to tease Dana, moving below her bellybutton then back up to her neck. The agent growled, leaning her head back and running her fingers though the writer’s hair to encourage her. Alice got the point and moved her hands lower, playing in the patch of hair that led the writer to her prize. Alice ran her fingers through a wetness the shower couldn’t produce, moving slowing from the top of Dana’s lips to the bottom. The agent bucked, feeling an intense amount of pleasure from such a simple move.
“God, Alice” Dana moaned into the writer’s ear egging her on, Alice smiled biting into the agent’s shoulder as she pressed two fingers into her. Dana moaned at the perfect blend of pleasure and pain, and as Alice pumped intensely into her triggering her muscles to contract and her grip on Alice to become stronger. Dana gasped as she came, something she hadn’t done in almost two years. The agent opened her eyes wide, the orgasm giving her a second wind and a opportunity to return the favor, Dana was so determined to please the writer she didn’t even hear the faint buzzing coming from the pile of her clothes just feet away.
1 missed call: Agent Jenny Shecter
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“Dammit!” Jenny hissed to herself as she hung up the phone, she wasn’t sure how Dana could have helped, but at least Jenny would have been able to tell someone what was going on. The pain in her stomach was overwhelming and Jenny couldn’t believe one woman could put that much behind a punch.
She leaned doubled over against her own car, convincing herself to suck it up, and as she stood up she saw Shane creeping toward the overturned truck. She pulled a small gun from the holster on her ankle and rushed Shane screaming as she approached.
“Turn around and put your hands on your head.” Jenny stood confidently staring at the dripping assassin, she grabbed the cuffs from her waist but as she went to slap the cuffs on Shane’s wrists the assassin twisted the gun out of Jenny’s hand sending the pistol tumbling to the ground. But the agent was prepared, and pulled back with all her strength sinking her fist deep into Shane’s stomach causing the assassin to fall to the ground hard. Jenny picked up the gun leveling it on Shane,
“You know I was going to turn you in but you’ve given me too much trouble.” Jenny eyed the assassin still contemplating this decision, not really considering going through with it she couldn’t gun this woman down in cold-blood. At this point it would be self-defense but is it ethical? And just as Jenny was about to lower her gun she saw a flicker in Shane’s eye, the workings of cleverness arising. Jenny’s pistol rose at attention as the blast was heard in her ears and her body jumped. Blood ran slowly from her jacket as she looked confused to Shane who still sat on her knees in front of her just as baffled, Jenny tumbled to the ground, Carmen standing behind her dropping the freshly fired gun.
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(42 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
:P noo, danm u lady, but i liek how ur keeping me on my toes. is my sexy jenny crush dead :O!
Wow! I was so excited to see an update. That was really great. I loved the Danish scene. I really enjoy your writing and can’t wait for more.
holy crap, i was NOT expecting that awesome! I can’t wait for the next chapter. i wonder what carmen’s connection is to shane, if any…or maybe she just wants to be a bad girl? ;)
whoa! nice update!
Yeah, baby…. give me the action. Still have those goosebumps from the shower scene. Kill Jenny, Kill Jenny…I know I’m bad,lol. Looks like I’ll be groveling at your feet… wondering what the hell you have planned next. You are always an inspiration to me… love it all. Btw- (whispering in your ear) KILL JENNY!!!
Holy Shit!!! I never saw that coming at all!!! Who would of thunk it?? LoL…Keep up the good work!!!
I have both of my hands up and waving frantically. You definately can be the writer but you may want to find someone else to help with the spelling. I have trouble even finding the words in the dictionary because I spell so badly. I spell creatively and half the time it is no where close to how it is really spelled. This story gets better with each chapter. Jenny shot by the woman she was to protect. And Bette meeting Tina. This is sooooo cool. Can’t wait until the next post of this story. Oh and let me know where to meet you so we can take care of that evil woman or idiot (you choose the term that best discribes her today).
Wow! I really liked that little twist at the end! Though I don’t approve of violence in real life, imagining Carmen shooting a gun in this ficticious story is hot! And her and Shane both being on the wrong side of the law, like Bonnie and Clyde or something…whew that’s hot too! I love the balance of emotion and action in this story. It keeps it way more interesting. Keep it up!
What the hell is happen there!
holly cliffhangers robin! thats it?please post soon and watch out for the CATWOMEN she will eat you alive!
daaaaaaaaaaaaaammmnnnn woman! scared the crap out of me!!! i thought u just totally killed shane-the-coolest-hottest assasin just then!!! pleeeeeeeeeeaaassseeee continue~!!!!
Now Shane& Carmen ca be fugitives together ;-) What was she thinkin? Great update, plz post soon.
It keeps getting better, I loved it.You have a style all of your own, that some wish they had. =)BTW thanks for calling me the fan fiction maestro/Know one has ever called me that “BLUSH”I thought I was more like The Bad Boy Of Fan-Fic.
Blimey, I can’t believe Carmen just shot Jenny!! OMG…that’s is soo cool, now if it had happened in S1-2…no more circus. I’m glad Shane is okay, she is too cool to go. Wow, loving my Danish…awesome! ho
no ur comment made me laugh ok weird anyway great update ; )