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Apogée 4
Tina shook hands as friends and colleagues filed to their cars, she noticed a dark haired woman saunter toward her.
“Bette Porter…Marcus and I were business acquaintances, he was an exceptional man,”
‘Exceptionally imbecilic’ Bette thought as she shook Tina’s outstretched hand, the blonde nodding sadly, yet sending fire impulses through Bette’s whole body.
“He was…I don’t think I recall Marcus mentioning you, were you one of his clients?” Bette nodded slowly,
“He was my accountant and a good friend…I can’t imagine how hard this must be for you and if you ever need anything at all please don’t hesitate to give me a call.” Bette touched Tina lightly on her arm and slipped her business card in her hand.
“Thank you very much Mrs. Porter and I appreciate your hospitality.” The young widow opened her arms to Bette who enveloped Tina in a sweet console exchange that made the widow wonder what it was about this woman that was so intriguing. Tina looked in her eyes confused for a moment giving Bette a nervous smile then moving on to the next departing guest.
Bette sat in the passengers seat of the Lincoln Town Car that James drove, pleased that the dark tinted window shielded others from watching her stare at Tina Kennard as the long black car pulled away.
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“Alice…are you still here?” Dana moved through the large house checking every room, she stopped at the bathroom where she heard water running and walked through the door to a silhouetted Alice in the shower.
The large marble shower had a rectangular section of high wall cut out and water pumpead through to simulate a waterfall. Dana stared through the frosted window at the writer who had her head tilted back so water ran over her face and hair. The agent tapped lightly on the door even though she’d already entered, Alice jumped a little.
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(42 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
:P noo, danm u lady, but i liek how ur keeping me on my toes. is my sexy jenny crush dead :O!
Wow! I was so excited to see an update. That was really great. I loved the Danish scene. I really enjoy your writing and can’t wait for more.
holy crap, i was NOT expecting that awesome! I can’t wait for the next chapter. i wonder what carmen’s connection is to shane, if any…or maybe she just wants to be a bad girl? ;)
whoa! nice update!
Yeah, baby…. give me the action. Still have those goosebumps from the shower scene. Kill Jenny, Kill Jenny…I know I’m bad,lol. Looks like I’ll be groveling at your feet… wondering what the hell you have planned next. You are always an inspiration to me… love it all. Btw- (whispering in your ear) KILL JENNY!!!
Holy Shit!!! I never saw that coming at all!!! Who would of thunk it?? LoL…Keep up the good work!!!
I have both of my hands up and waving frantically. You definately can be the writer but you may want to find someone else to help with the spelling. I have trouble even finding the words in the dictionary because I spell so badly. I spell creatively and half the time it is no where close to how it is really spelled. This story gets better with each chapter. Jenny shot by the woman she was to protect. And Bette meeting Tina. This is sooooo cool. Can’t wait until the next post of this story. Oh and let me know where to meet you so we can take care of that evil woman or idiot (you choose the term that best discribes her today).
Wow! I really liked that little twist at the end! Though I don’t approve of violence in real life, imagining Carmen shooting a gun in this ficticious story is hot! And her and Shane both being on the wrong side of the law, like Bonnie and Clyde or something…whew that’s hot too! I love the balance of emotion and action in this story. It keeps it way more interesting. Keep it up!
What the hell is happen there!
holly cliffhangers robin! thats it?please post soon and watch out for the CATWOMEN she will eat you alive!
daaaaaaaaaaaaaammmnnnn woman! scared the crap out of me!!! i thought u just totally killed shane-the-coolest-hottest assasin just then!!! pleeeeeeeeeeaaassseeee continue~!!!!
Now Shane& Carmen ca be fugitives together ;-) What was she thinkin? Great update, plz post soon.
It keeps getting better, I loved it.You have a style all of your own, that some wish they had. =)BTW thanks for calling me the fan fiction maestro/Know one has ever called me that “BLUSH”I thought I was more like The Bad Boy Of Fan-Fic.
Blimey, I can’t believe Carmen just shot Jenny!! OMG…that’s is soo cool, now if it had happened in S1-2…no more circus. I’m glad Shane is okay, she is too cool to go. Wow, loving my Danish…awesome! ho
no ur comment made me laugh ok weird anyway great update ; )