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Apogée 4
As Jenny turned to look behind her, Shane attacked the agent, grabbing the hand that wielded the gun with her left and punching Jenny in the stomach swiftly with the right. Jenny doubled over in pain but kept moving, raising her elbow and catching Shane below her eye. The assassin fell backwards continuing to roll out of sight almost like she was never there. Jenny searched frantically for her gun to no avail, her stomach throbbed but she was ok for the moment, she could only hope Shane didn’t have her fallen gun. The assassin decided not to complicate things by dealing with an agent, as she crept toward the truck where Carmen stood Shane realized she didn’t need a weapon to get this done. Shane approached the truck cautious of the agent not far from her; the assassin pushed herself up to look into the overturned vehicle to find nothing.
“Turn around and put your hands on your head.” Jenny screamed over the rain as she ran toward Shane whose drenched white-collar shirt dripped heavily. As the agent moved to cuff the assassin, Shane threw her body into action despite the freezing rain, cuts and bruises. Shane knocked the gun to the ground once again but this time Jenny had the advantage giving the assassin a taste of her previous medicine and burying her fist deep into Shane’s stomach. She fell to the ground as Jenny picked up her gun,
“You know I was going to turn you in but you’ve given me too much trouble.” Shane eyes rose as Jenny pointed the gun, she slowly devised a plan hoping she would edge out of this, but the trigger had already been pulled and a loud blast rang in her ears, telling her that it was all over. Shane’s eyes lit and a gasp tore through her throat.
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Bette waited patiently as the minister went through his whole spiel, she wasn’t wild about churches and she was most definitely not wild about funerals. As the procession ended, and Marcus’s close friends and family filed out quietly Bette felt a twang of guilt that said maybe she shouldn’t have had the poor bastard killed.
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(42 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
:P noo, danm u lady, but i liek how ur keeping me on my toes. is my sexy jenny crush dead :O!
Wow! I was so excited to see an update. That was really great. I loved the Danish scene. I really enjoy your writing and can’t wait for more.
holy crap, i was NOT expecting that awesome! I can’t wait for the next chapter. i wonder what carmen’s connection is to shane, if any…or maybe she just wants to be a bad girl? ;)
whoa! nice update!
Yeah, baby…. give me the action. Still have those goosebumps from the shower scene. Kill Jenny, Kill Jenny…I know I’m bad,lol. Looks like I’ll be groveling at your feet… wondering what the hell you have planned next. You are always an inspiration to me… love it all. Btw- (whispering in your ear) KILL JENNY!!!
Holy Shit!!! I never saw that coming at all!!! Who would of thunk it?? LoL…Keep up the good work!!!
I have both of my hands up and waving frantically. You definately can be the writer but you may want to find someone else to help with the spelling. I have trouble even finding the words in the dictionary because I spell so badly. I spell creatively and half the time it is no where close to how it is really spelled. This story gets better with each chapter. Jenny shot by the woman she was to protect. And Bette meeting Tina. This is sooooo cool. Can’t wait until the next post of this story. Oh and let me know where to meet you so we can take care of that evil woman or idiot (you choose the term that best discribes her today).
Wow! I really liked that little twist at the end! Though I don’t approve of violence in real life, imagining Carmen shooting a gun in this ficticious story is hot! And her and Shane both being on the wrong side of the law, like Bonnie and Clyde or something…whew that’s hot too! I love the balance of emotion and action in this story. It keeps it way more interesting. Keep it up!
What the hell is happen there!
holly cliffhangers robin! thats it?please post soon and watch out for the CATWOMEN she will eat you alive!
daaaaaaaaaaaaaammmnnnn woman! scared the crap out of me!!! i thought u just totally killed shane-the-coolest-hottest assasin just then!!! pleeeeeeeeeeaaassseeee continue~!!!!
Now Shane& Carmen ca be fugitives together ;-) What was she thinkin? Great update, plz post soon.
It keeps getting better, I loved it.You have a style all of your own, that some wish they had. =)BTW thanks for calling me the fan fiction maestro/Know one has ever called me that “BLUSH”I thought I was more like The Bad Boy Of Fan-Fic.
Blimey, I can’t believe Carmen just shot Jenny!! OMG…that’s is soo cool, now if it had happened in S1-2…no more circus. I’m glad Shane is okay, she is too cool to go. Wow, loving my Danish…awesome! ho
no ur comment made me laugh ok weird anyway great update ; )