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Apogee 8
“Thank you for a wonderful evening Miss Porter,” Bette took her hand, and kissed it slowly caressing her hand in the same manner her tongue had been moving in Tina’s mouth a few moments ago, a disbelieving smirk on her lips as she lifted her head to a visibly shaken Tina. The widow turned quickly trying to make it out of that house with a piece of her sanity. She walked to her car Bette scratched her head walking back to her office,
“Great, now I’m all the way back to Miss Porter.”
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The Kitty Klub was…colorful to say the least, waitresses in low-cut costumes, all of which resembled cats. Disco lights pulsed pink and orange across everything making the scene surreal. Large beanbags lined the small club that to Dana’s relief wasn’t packed. The agent made her way to the clear and pink neon bar to grab a drink.
“Excuse me mam, can I get your advice on something?” Alice knew who the woman behind her was immediately, the agents smell and voice distinctive. The writer grabbed Dana’s hands and placed them on her waist encouraging the agent to move to the music.
The agent smiled as Alice pushed her hips further into Dana, the agent dipping her head lower to smell her neck and speak in her ear. “A jerk huh? What kind of idiot would be a jerk to a beautiful woman like you?” Alice smiled, turning her head slightly feeling Dana’s lips on her cheek.
“Is that really in her defense?” The beat slowed down further and Alice pressed her hips even harder into Dana, who began grinding along with her.
“How could she possibly redeem herself? I’m also looking to impress a special woman and I could use some…pointers.” Dana’s hand moved around to Alice’s front gliding slowly from the inside of her thigh back to her waist.
“Your jerk? The way you talk about her, one would think you were giving this idiot another chance.” Alice turned and smiled wrapping her arms around the agent’s neck,
“Alice, I never want to be the person that wipes that smile off of your face. I’m not going to try and justify my actions because there is nothing I could say except ‘I’m sorry’. I’m sorry that I questioned your personal and professional integrity, and treated you less than the angel that you are. The moments I spent with you are among the happiest I’ve ever been, and I want to make you feel the same when you’re with me…is that better?” Dana smiled widely, squeezing Alice’s waist waiting for her answer,
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(47 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
read it loved it rated it and commented tht was sum hot stuff
I read it
Read it! Loved it! Well, except for the Yankees part! Look forward to the next chapter.
read it and please post again…soon!
read it
After wrestling my cat off of my computer, I READ THE STORY. So much for getting to know someone before sex. How about getting to know someone during sex. I guess Tina got a little scared. Now, how long before Tina returns to Bette? When will Tina find out that it was Bette who ordered her husbands death? Great post.
read it
read it
Not only read it, but first went back and read all the other installments, sucked into following yet another story!
read and enjoyed
read it, post soon pls
I think I went crazy in my comments about Tino Martinez, who I adore – even more than Danish! (Don’t kill me.) I’m positive I commented, but they seem to be gone.
*raises hand* I read every single chapter of this fic that you toss our way!
Read it loved it, really want more shane and carmen
psh, as if Dana and Alice could NOT have sex! Love the story so far!
This is great!
read it
Not only read it, but loved it! :)
I loved this chapter, Damn where is The Kitty Klub? F*ck I want to go to place. =)Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Aquaman! I love Aquaman… muahaha… I love Hawkgirl more, but that is besides the point. the point is, I love your story. And am checking in here religiously to see if you have updated. You please give us a longer chapter next time, yes? Please!!!
read it, loved it
read it dude…and it wa awesome!!! ;)
Love Love Loved it!
read it, loved it. i think ive been to that club, its in amsterdam isnt it lol
Read it. and I really liked it x
Great update. Post soon. Alice & Dana, very HOT!
Read it and as usual, loved it. Please post soon. I hope Tina isn’t freaked out for too long….
I read it and love it please post soon
Read and enjoyed it. Thanks for writing!
Skimmed over it. ;) I saw the NC-17 rating and had to see what was going on. Methinks I’ll have to start reading this one for real.
Nice work closetdana, very, very nice.
Very nice. I love it. Keep it up. Danish is my favorite!
I read this story. I really enjoy it.
I read it, I loved it, I want some more of it . . . please, oh and more Sharmen . . . gotta love thos two LYLAS
Read it, like it more
Great chapter. The whole resistance thing is pretty hot…it makes build up and tension that much better. Can’t wait till the next chapter!
Read it, loved and will be back. Sorry for not being constant in the feedback comments. You’re probably wondering if you’re getting to me!! Well you are so keep up the very good work with all your stories. I’ll try to be more constant in ginving comments after I read them! PS I like that you post often with smaller chapters than one larger post every two weeks! (of course no one can compete with brteyes on that level)
simply great! post soon
Read it, really liked it.
Still loving this story, the interaction between my 2 fav danish girls is brilliant, please post again soon -x-
not only read all, but luved all….would luv more of b&t though…..great job!!!!!!!!!
Oi mate, read it last night, didn’t get a chance to comment (would’ve been first) he, heh,heh…love it. Dane is dark with ‘er dannies, eh? Luv it when they shag, it’s rare (excellent). Aye, get paid to stop dancing to Country, but otherwise I’m magic! Loving it…gotta do a bunk. Ta mate!
Read it and completely loved it!!!! Ciao
I always seem to keep on rambling when it comes to commenting on your stories (or brteyes’ story for that matter…good to see you two are helping each other out!). :D Who’s seducing who, either way Bette and Tina are both falling hard. :) Mark and Gomey will be back. Taking a shower is not a good idea…but I have a feelingyou are gonna us the fact that one of them will be naked wisely. :P Alice forgave Dana in a sec, didn’t she?. :) They are really bad in following their on rules…no sex indeed! ;) They were freaking hot!!! :D Watch your PM.
i stumbled upon this by accident as i am not a Dana/Alice fan, but I have read all the chapters and I love it. Totally new approach..I so can see Shane as a hitwoman and Bette as an brilliant, beautiful, powerful criminal type! I am in for every chapter! I know you don’t like skimmers too much but the separate segments for the characters is okay!!! Write more more more soon!!!
I love Alice and Dana, and now I can go to bed content. So thank you!
Read it. Great story.
Read it loved it more. thanks